Hey! Surprised to see me here😳, well first of all lemme say, you have nooo idea how long it has been that I've actually read an FF! I'm am so serious when I say this, and it has been years (not really lol) since I've commented on ff's, but I gotta say, I simply clicked into it, and I just started reading randomly and here I am sat here readng all the parts back to back. 😛
totally...cant even say how much😲
ha ha i understand..i once read ff like mad nd now..i hardly have ny time and mood to read any of them...
wow thats a huge compliment for me..thanks tinkerbell. u r ff is a mind blowing one too..no need to say i think
So shall I say first that I LOVED IT!
thanks a lot dear..i am overwhelmed
So here goes my comment for your first chapter - please bear with me, as I haven't commented since bare time. 😳
no pbm as ur appereance is really suprising and a huge compliment for me..
And...
OMG, Ahem is doing his own tareef! LOOOL I'm loving him already! Do you know that I have a weak spot for guys that are obsessed with their own images, I love them all, yes I know it's a difficult task to be so generous, but it's a quality I happen to possess. 😎
ha ha ...see the moment the readers started i want them to know that this ahem is not the same arrogant ahem modi of sns..he is mine
well u are not the only one having weak spot...all the ff readers are swooning over this ahem more than in sns.. what i thought...and what happend😭
well u posses a unique quality i say😆
Oh god and guess who has to go and ruin it...Anita!! Eugh! I love the way you put that part of 'why does it always have to end with I love you' you know, because even at times I found myself wondering the same thing lol. 😆
ha ha i see u are holding a grudge on anitha..well i wont discourage u...i dont like her either but not so much grudge..
ha ha every man finds the same thing irritating..what to do😆
FREEZE
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I soo love this addition, it's perfect, it really gives it your own touch. 😉
agreed its my own touch..u know filmy style
Ew it's a shame his first introduction after 'freeze' had to start with manhoos Anita🤢. Anyways back to loverboy Ahem😃, I am loving this abrupt cool dude Ahem to the core gal, somebody get me something to faint on! ⭐️
ha ha what to do..finacee have to be given first priority right..but dont woryy u dont have to bear with her a lot and if u are reading the second part..u might less hate her.
ha ha yeah i am tired of the mighty ahem modi of sns too.. so a small change to me and the readers...but i am warning u already a huge competiton is on the way for this flitery fellow
so watch out😉
So Kinjal the hyper girl huh, I kinda have a good feeling about her in this ff, what are you gonna do with her...I wonder. 😛
dont worry i have enough of her twisting expressions..she is positive here..infact everyoen are..
Love the litte limelight on his 'cellphone' by the way. 😆
what to do...his cell phone is haunting me😆
Jigar came and went lol, not that I'm too bothered about him (I ain't gonna lie, but his character doesn't seem as interesting as my darling Ahem's!)😳
watch out..my ff' are read by raji fans too😆
i agree that jigar is shown less in the show but i think he have his own unique character
and as i am a rashi lover..how can i leave poor jigii around
but dont worry...i am a gohem fan also so it saves everyone from my constant rashi mania
Ohmagawd...Urmila and in the Modi Bhavan LMFAO 😆,
ff badal jaye, but iske character ka kuch nahin ho sakta!
Somebody should write a OS on her and call it 'Character Deela' lol.
what to do..if urmi wouldnt their then what can i show in ff.😆
well u can write a os urself as u are a talented writer
Rashi seems okay, somehow I don't like the pairing of her being friends with Ahem, maybe it's because I can't leave behind her traits from the serial that are running currently. But at the same time I feel that you will do justice to her character; you've chosen her to be a shoulder to lean on in the coming chapters for Ahem I guess.
ha ha what to do..as i mentoned i a m rashi maniac..and afterll ahema nd rashi is a huge hit pair in my previous ff milan so i had to include them..if possible do read milan as i changed many rashi haters to lover with that ff..want to try it on u too😆
of course rahem is my speciality and i wont leve the special couple without using them to the core u see...rashi wil play a pivot role for gohem...
So we have Lady Hitler now too, hmm her character isn't so different to when she was first introduced in the show.
yeah but the only difference is ahem thinks as as a hitler in this ff whereas in the show she is mother india for him
Oh my God 'Mother India' for Hetal - that is awesome!
ha ha ...i thought of keepng mother terresa but later thought it might hurt others.
I love how Gopi came into the scene so fluently, no dramatic entry, just a simple presence, and yet with such little information you left a big impact on us readers! 😲😲 I thought that Ahem still has a soft spot for her, I love it when the love story has already begun from before the start of the ff lol, it really creates more eagerness within us to find out how they really met, and what they will do to revive that love again. So I'm already headed to the next chapter, as I've read all of them, but will see if I can keep my eyes open long enough to comment on the next one now too, if not you can expect it shortly. 😉
ha ha if u plan to read this ff so better get used to the cliff hanging endings as its my speciality. but i think they wont be so many cliff hangings as its a love story afterall.
i dont belive in super dramatic introductiosn and i kept the dramatic introduction for only one person in the ff...i think u got who..
well ahem feeling towards her are yet to be revealed so just wait and watch...
ha ha good description of gohem...
yeah the meeting and the story is a suspense...so just wait and read...
ha definelty expecting the next comment from u soon..afterall ur comments reminds me of my friend mano a lot...
thanks for appreciating this ff.. u really gave me a boost up for sure..
Keep up the great work, and excuse me while I try my best to go grab your Ahem's attention...😉
No pbm from my side but better watch out for the remaining ahem lovers...they wont leave u alone for sure..
Luv Tink😉
P.S. Will be back tomorrow to comment on the rest.😛
will be waitjng for u...
and thanks once again...
and i love ur little sparklings...👏
