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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: uamaz


Ahh forgot the important NOT in the above 😕 I meant to say that I do not believe Gopi would cheat on Ahem but I am sure Anita had something to do with the break-up and Ahem the Angry and egoistic bloke he is too things to an all new level of hatred which left our Gopi turning her back on Kanha ji ... guess we are going to hate Ahem in quite a few of the scenes hopefully he will also love with the same intensity 😳

P.S. Love your updates and for me they are not long enough 😉

ha ha ha...i thought so...and yeah once agian i get a anitha bashing here too..well what can i say..u people are not wrong either...

and bang on u guessed right that the ahem hatred level made her lost her faith in kanaji..lets see how ahem brings back her faith in him and her god..

and again u are bang right...lets hope that u are going to hate ahem modi and love him too for the next two updates..

ha ha well i have been increasing the length lately update by update..but what to do

if i mantain more lengthy then..the ff wil be completed by 10 updates for sure..😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shaina.sharma

he he shocked..wait for the next huge shock..its just a preparation for the next one

mention not and thanks bloem..


Your welcome shanina Cant wait to read the next part 'm curious about it 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shaina.sharma

hai...shit i forgot ur name again...nisha..right...

ha ha i told u so...

The way ahem modi is..their is sure that he have to face hurdles..in the past and the future..gopi being a indpeendent girl and well matured..saw the truth in ahem's words..and realized how bad he is feeling

again anitha..i see everyone mind is set to anitha and lets see what happens in the reality which made ahem to say the hurt ful words.

ha ha...yeah..so what was the bitter past which changed her mind..i know so many questions and answers yet to be revelaed.

ha ha what to do..kinjal twisting expression is irritating me..and hence so made friends with gopi..

afterall if rashiis friend witha ahem then kinjal have to be wiht gopi right

dont worry evreything wil fall to place once the story starts..as beign a love story u knw..parents have to be vilans right

hetal is sweet looking sweet so i dint change her.

yeah rahem is my speciality as everyone knows and thier combination was a huge sucess in milan..so how can i divided them.

rashi wil play a pivot role in gohem so lets see how she plays

rashi is sharp and only wants ahem happiness..a true friend in all mines

gopi stay is sure..but lets see whether a leap occurs or not..gopi is determined in her studies and ahem on one side..so lets see. what happens

wil their misunderstanding clear if she leaves or if she stays..wait and read

the story is yet to begin and i have lot of oppurtunies to make u hate ahem..so lets wati and see who suceeds..

omg marriage.i even dint think about it..as its a pure love story..but u r right romantic scenes are a looong way yet..

but according to the concept...i wil fit some romantic scenes..not like more intiamte..but the sns types...

thanks nisha..if its u...and yeah have to wait till friday..sorry



My pleasure. You remember my name correctly👏
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hai i am back...thanks for the lovely great response..and so much patience...

Hope u dint forget this ff...let me continue and shut my mouth...


Part-5

"why did u cheat her ahem" rashi asked

"I dint,... she did!" ahem said bending his head down... //freeze


"Ahem!!" gopi shouted "yeah yeah...reading!" ahem again buried his face in the face. This was the consequence having a studious student as a best friend. Everyone was enjoying out their and he was buried in text books.

"which idiot wil study during preparation holidays?" ahem shouted slammng his book down. "U will!" gopi replied without even looking at him. "oh k!!" again he buried his face and saw a beatiful girl passing by and immediately turned towards gopi "monica, my classmate. already have 3 boyfriends and is at present single waiting for u. Now stop filrting and READ!" gopi shouted. "Mommy part-2" ahem muttred and gopi controlled her laugh.

"But why do i need to study...u know...i have my own preparations." ahem smirked."Ahem, u always do study, but did the cheating for the first rank, and i know u are capable of achieving it without those stupid papers, so read now...u just have to concentrate...i cant believe that with that brain of urs u are using other means to get top."

"is that a compliment!!" "maybe!" gopi teased. "then what the need for me to study, as i am smart, i can get first rank, and then i wil handle my father bussiness and u wil join me after 1 year, u wil look after my affairs, our bussiness flourish, sucesses.. parties...name...reconization...see i can already imagine ...a beatiful perfect life"

"Life is never perfect ahem!!" gopi said and ahem looked at her sharply. "There u guys are, i was serching for u!" "Thank god anitha, u came at the right time, Help she kidnapped me" "oh...so i am torturing u...fine...i wont torture u no more mr.modi..enjoy" gopi slammed the book down..and got up to leave but ahem instantly caught her hand and stopped her. "Hey...gops...dont get mad at this poor fellow...how wil i survive without u" gopi fought back her smile "like the similar way..u lived until now." she teased back.. "u and I know very well what the life was..dont make me go back" ahem said in a serious gloom mood and anitha and gopi snapped their heads at him.

gopi with hurt and recognization, anitha confused. "Ahem...i am sorry i dint mean it.." gopi said putting her hand over his. "i know.." ahem winked and gopi rolled her eyes smiling "u can never change mr.modi" Both smiled and anitha smiled half heartdly. "As i can see i made u smile, so lets go out, i am feeling damn hungry" "oh...so sorry...come" gopi said. Both packed their books and about to go when anitha stopped ahem.

"But ahem...today is saturday..and we planned to go out to our club today for a party." Gohem exchanged glances. "But i am going with gopi now...she wil and i told her i wil escort her." Ahem said. but gopi cut in "No pbm, anitha u take

ahem, i wil go with my friends." "excuse me!" ahem said keeping a hurt expression and gopi sighed "my other friends ahem!" she stressed. Anitha beamed "k, thanks gopi" "its k"gopi smiled. "its not k, i am not a toy to share on ur own, and moreover i planned to go with gopi today so anitha...take some one else..ajay...i know he wants to go with u"ahem winked. "But!!" anitha said despair. "No buts..i know u can manage bye sweetheart" ahem said taking gopi's hand and dragging her out, leaving anitha left all alone in the vast library.


"u shouldnt have left her like that ahem!" gopi said in a scolding tone. "if u are worried about anitha..then chill..i know she can handle the matters." "its not about company ahem, its about supporting each other" "Cut the lecturing, i dont like to be lectured while i am eating k" gopi sighed seeing that ahem was in no mood to listen.

They were in a restuarent, gopi trying to discuss about the upcoming exams, and ahem trying his best to ignore the topic. "u shoudlnt run away from problems, to have to face them." "U have ur opinions, i have mine, and i am trying to change slowly...it wil take time...maybe 1yeaer...or 2" "Ahem!"gopi threatned and he laughed and she shook her head laughing.

"u look cute, while u are smiling!" Ahem said lightly sipping his coffee, but observing her reaction intently. Gopi blinked her eyes in suprise, and rolled her eyes smiling "stop flirting with me, K" Ahem lauged "Just trying! No harm done right" Gopi smiled again. //Freeze


"She got a really cute smile u know" Ahem said smiling himself..unknown to himself.. "Next!' Rashi said demanding, uncared tone. //Freeze


"K lets go and yeah i promise..i wil study today..and yeah i promise...i wont flirt with the girls until the exams are over..K" "thanks" "i know..i am great!" Gopi gave him a "u can never change look" and got up shaking her head. "U really do think of urself so high Ahem! A peculiar quality!" "WHat do u, my charm is so irresistable"

"Enough!" gopi said sternly and went down and ahem followed her giving her killing looks. Gopi burst into laughing seeing his red angry face. "u are totally a child ahem, Totally!" "U scolded me!" ahem complained. "what..when?" gopi asked confused. "Just now..u asked me to stop..."ahem pouted and gopi burst into laughter again. "AHem u are really sooo funny"

gopi said pulling his cheeks, and ahem smiled shyly. Suddenly a boy came their trembling begging for money. Ahem gave him money but gopi stood watching him. "lets go gops" "No u go, i have some work to do!" "What..but where are u going?" "Ahem..dont argue..u leave, see ya tomorrow bye" gopi said and left without answering him.

Ahem decided to leave but again instict told him to look for her. He saw her take the child with her in an auto..and instantly he jumped into the car. He followed and saw her stopping at a building and taking the child inside. Ahem saw it was an orphanage. He stood waiting for her at his car. She came and blinked in suprise, opened her mouth and closed again and

looked here and their. "i thought,u were kidnapping him!" ahem said and gopi became comfortable immediately and smiled. "thought so, but changed my mind in middle!" she played with him. "why,,did u saw me?" "No...dint want to share the money with u!" gopi replied.

Both burst into laughing and laughed and teased until they reach her hostel. "i never knew i could be so happy Ahem..thanks" "My pleasure...afterall...girls never get bored with ahem Modi" GOpi rolled her eyes and left saying "u will never change". "Gops!!" ahem called and gopi turned towards him. He just kept on looking at her, a calculating, searching look. "what?"gopi asked slightly smiling. "Nothing" ahem said shaking his head.

"Ahem..u sometimes behave sooo strange!" "I know...cant help it"ahem grinned. "Bye.." "Hey gops!!" "Now what!!"gopi asked slightly flaring. "Gnit!" Gopi blinked her eyes in suprise and automatically said gnit. He left leaving her stunned and confused. //Freeze..


"Gops...u made gopi to gops...Ahem seriously...u never had a nick name for me and u changed her such a nice traditional name" "Traditinal names are boring rashi...and what would i call u...rash...make me remember itch guard!" "K stop, my mistake..now come to the point directly that why did u split...dont u think this flashback became tooo long now.."

"yeah yeah...almost done..just little patience more.." "Ahem!!" anitha came looking for him and rashi rolled her eyes. "oh..there u are, hai rashi...i thought u two would be together!" "why, any pbms?" rashi asked indifferently. "No, i mean..u are always together..." "oh if it is pbm to u, then fine! i am leaving" "No..i mean..u guys are best friends.."

"Leave it, Ahem we wil talk later..bye" rashi stormed off and anitha sighed. "She hates me!" "I know!" "U always side her!" "Get used to it!" "Ahem..but i am.." "what do u want?" Anith took a sigh..when it comes to rashi..ahem never listens. "I am worried about gopi ahem, about u, i listened that she is going to stay here for some days"

"yes, so what?" "I mean afterall that happened, dont u think that she staying here might be u know..not right at this situation., right for u" "Thanks for the concern, but i can look after myself. I will handle the issue, dont worry" "Ahem.." anitha caught his hand when he tried to leave. "i am concerned for u more, being her back means, bringing all those memories back which we

left far away. I dont know..but i have a bad feeling about it. Ahem...i am so frightened." "there's no need for u to worry anitha! The past is past and it wont interfere in our future. I assure u." "What if she tells someone about u two,,,,What if some one knows" "Rashi already knows about us!" Anitha was frozen for a second.

"Ahem...have u gone mad...i know u like rashi but this is different. I mean their are some things which have to be kept personal." "I have everything under control anitha, now dont eat my brain" ahem said irritated. "I dont know why do u trust her so much"anitha murmered "What do u mean?" "i mean.."anitha stammered her heart beating faster..."Ahem...all the family members know

that rashi wants to marry u, And..it shows that she is not so intrested in me and.." "ONE WORD.." ahem thundred and anitha shut her mouth immediately "one word more against rashi and i warn u, i dont know what i would do!" Anitha was stunned "But ahem..i meant!"

"Enough!"ahem shouted and tears sprang in anitha's eyes immediately. "i already told u and i am telling u again, Rashi is my best friend and no one can change that...No One...Not even U!" Ahem warned and went away leaving anitha in tears and Gopi saw everything from far. //Freeze.


"Farewell Party!!" Anitha shouted excited. "Since the exams are over..its a party for me everyday" "U were never so allergitic about exams..what happend to u suddenly" Anitha asked. "Its called gopimania!" ahem smirked and gopi slammed his head with her book and sat beside him. "Busy preparing..!!"Anitha asked.

"Of course...afteralll we have to arrange the party right!" "Arrange well, afterall Ahem modi's farewell party" "Oh yeah..everyone is ready and so eager to throw u out of the college, people have even started celebrating since yesterday." Ahem face was clouded with anger and Anitha nd gopi burst into laughing and gave a high five to each other. "Very funny" ahem said seriously. "it is!!" anitha conformed.

"Anyways...be their at tomorrow night..afterall the final day of college life."Gopi said. "u bet, Ahem when shall we start!" Anitha asked. and immediately gopi face fell nd ahem looked confused. "why do we start!!!" "u are my date right like always.."anitha asked doubtfully.

gohem looked at each other. "Actually anitha..i asked Ahem to accompany me..so"gopi was telling but ahem cut in bluntly "Gops is going with me, not u!!" Gopi closed her eyes defeated. "oh K..sorry i thought.." "No it was my mistake..i should have guessed u might go together, afterall u are one batch members" gopi tried to explain "cut the crap, see u tomorrow anitha, come gops"ahem said carelessly and went away and gopi followed him feeling

guilty for anitha. //Freeze.


"Tensed...?"gopi asked. "totally!!" kinjal exclaimed and she laughed at her. Rashi came inside and gopi gave her a gentle welcoming smile but was suprised to see rashi not returning the smile and showed indifference at her. "Kinjal...want any help?" "No thanks rashi..gopi is their to help me, i know she have a nice fashion taste."

Rashi face fell and her eyes moved towards gopi. "kinjal is just kidding, it wil be really glad if u could help us too" gopi said gently tryign to cheer her up. "Kinjal knows better what she needs nd what she wants, no need of ur advice here. Anyways i have work in the kitchen. Kinjal call me if u need anything k, get ready soon and look like a princess" rashi pulled her cheeks and went away giving a

cursing look to gopi. "what happend to u two, i never saw rashi behaving so rudely with someone, did something happen gopi?" "I dont know...maybe she is busy and tensed." "Did u said something about ahem bhai to her?" Gopi froze looking at the make up kit and covered her feelings "why did u say that?" "Say anything to rashi, she wont mind..but one word against Ahem..and u are doomed for sure!"

"Kinjal, can i ask u something?" "Shoot!" "Are ahem and rashi..such close friends" "Close...they are bossom friends...Ahem bhai can tolerate anything in this house, but cant tolerate even one second if rashi wont speak to him. They have never quarreled in their life and whatever tensions ahem bhai faces,,he always looks for

rashi to comfort.Even Mom too bears with rashi though she not like her because of ahem bhai.Ahem bhai really cares for her more than me, and rashi too always keeps ahem her first priority among everyone. Whatever he do, whatever he say, she never gets angry at him. Not even one word goes against ahem bhai from her mouth.

Always support him, and this irritates Dad a lot as he says that someone have to tell Bhai about responsibilites and right and wrong.etc..etc. Everyone thought that Ahembhai will marry rashi but Anitha was a real shock to all. Well i cant complain about that!" kinjal blused and gopi smiled. "of course..how can u, when Umang ji is coming for u" "Stop it gopi!" Both laughed and Ahem stepped inside

and gopi laughter died. "Jigar sent his wishes again!" Ahem said stressing on the word again. Kinjal laughed. "U guys talk, i will come right now!" gopi left and ahem eyes followed her automatically.



"rashi..these are the gifts for the groom, check them and place aside carefully" hetal said. "Ji mamiji" rashi nodded happily. "i think its not a better idea to give such kind of responsibility to rashi, Hetal" kokila said and both turned towards her.

"Kokila, dont worry, Rashi will handle everything very nicely" "Like the way she did in diwali!" Hetal smile dimmed and rashi bent her head down. Out of nervousness and tension and her mom's constant barging she mixed the oil with ghee made for puja turning the family tradition to disaster. Ahem needed two days to bring her out of exile. "Badi Mamiji..i wil take much care this time..dont worry"

"This is not a project or experiment to try once more rashi" kokila started. "Its about family prestige issue, and i dont want the Modi family name get ruined in the society because of ur carelessness." rashi bent her head down. "Arrey bhabi...why do u worry, when my rashi is here, there is nothing to fear." urmi started barging the moment she came.

"Urmila ben..when the matter comes to ur rashi..their is always a chance for something to fear." Urmi shut up and cursed koki inside. Gopi saw all the drama from upstairs and came to hetal. "Auntie, if u dont mind, i wil help rashi arraging all this, Kinjal is almost ready, and i am free too." Hetal smiled and rashi eyes moved sharply at gopi and smirked. "See, kokila pbm solved, i know gopi

is quite capable to handle these issues." "No Hetal, i am sorry but these kind of things are to be handled by the family members, not by some outsiders." Kokila said and gopi felt deeply hurt and her face fell immediately and even rashi looked up at her to see her face.

"Kokila what are u saying?" Hetal started but koki cut in "Its my daughter engagment Hetal, i dont want to take chances. I wil ask ahem to see to it" "But kokila.." "Auntie..no pbm...kokila auntie is right, these matters better be look by the family members..i was just trying to help, no pbm." "In our family guests dont help gopi, u are a guest in this family, so be one" kokila said nd left leaving everyone speechless.

Hetal smiled a gentle smile at gopi and rashi and went away and Rashi rounded on gopi immediately "who the hell asked u for any help, i dint did?" "Rashi i was just trying to help u." "Really, then gopi i need no help from u at all. Leave me on my own. Thank u, i know ur nature very well. so dont act smart and stop ur mind trick games with me."

Gopi was shocked. "What do u mean rashi?" "i know everything about u gopi, How u have cheated ahem and broke his love. U girls only think about money and nothing else. U dont value principles, dont value morals or dont value the feelings of persons. All u think about is urself and ur facilites. Its because people like u exsist that no one believes the girl like us. Ur misdeeds and selfishness

are rubbed on our face and make us humiliate. People like u have no feelings, all u know is about money. Why did u came back gopi, why now? I know what u are trying to do now. Acting all innocent and helpful among others, presenting urself as a traditional girl so that everyone likes u and u can be back in Ahem's life again to torture him.

THats why u are coming close to me, not to help me but to achive ur own selfish motives. U saw how grand anitha's life is with Ahem, the comforts, the luxeries, the prestagious modi name..so u wanted that back agian in ur life and started ur mind plotting game. But hear me clearly gopi, i am not kinjal or ahem to fall for ur trap so easily. Last time whatever u did, u got away, but this time i wil make

sure that even u harm someone from my family and especially Ahem..then u will have to face the severe consequences after that. So better back off right now. U can find many rich people in the party tonight other than Ahem. Go and show ur charms for them as i know u are good at them. I dont know how u people can fell so low for status and money. U dont have any self respect, the more money one have, the faster u shift ur sides.!! Must have learnt from ur parents!!"


"Enough rashi!!...u are crossing ur limits now. what do u know about me that ur shooting ur mouth off! what do u know about me and Ahem?" "i know everything gopi, Ahem told me all about ur friendship, ur drama, ur love and ur betrayal. I must say..u really acted ur party very well, very convincing. Hats off. So better stay away from me because i know the truth now gopi..everything."

Gopi remained silent for sometime and replied with a calm tone "No one knows truth rashi..not even u!!" Gopi left leaving rashi fuming with anger. The moment gopi took some steps away from rashi, she felt a hand grab her arm firmly and found her back slammed to the wall. Ahem towered her and closed her in and gopi pressed herself back to the wall, trying to

be as far as away from him. "How dare u try to disturb my life again!" Ahem thundred and gopi looked at him confused. "i know what u are trying to do? Tryng to take rashi in ur hands right, trying to make her turn against me. U want to weaken me by poisoining the people near me, well miss.rajvansh..let me tell u, until i am here, u can even take a single breath out of my notice. I always kept a watch on u since u stepped inside this house, and i knew u would be back to ur true colors soon.

But listen to me carefully, no matter how much u play, u can never make us apart, Rashi wil only believe me and no one can come between us...and definetly not U. Our friendship is much higher than ur treacherous schemes and u cant break it by any means."

Gopi gave him a calculating look and spoke "if u are so confident ahem, then why are u so afraid of me? Let me make my trials and lets see who wins" Ahem closed in more "Leave her alone!" he warned. "Leave me!!" gopi demanded. "Ahem!!" Kokila called and both sprang apart immediately. Kokila came their and moved her eyes sharply from his angered face to her tensed face. "what are u doing here ahem?"

"Nothing mom, just talking, u know we are of same college right, remembering the old days back." Ahem said sarcastlly looking at gopi. Gopi bent her head down, and went away and Ahem lingered his gaze on her. "Ahem!!" koki called again and he came back. "See about the return presents!" "yes mom" he went away and koki eyes moved to

his retreating form to gopi's hurried steps and koki's eyes narrowed in suspicion.


"Ur looking beatiful!!" gopi complimented nd kinjal blushed. "well, i have one complaint still, u still dint introduce ur hubby dearst" Kinjal sighed. "i wil introduce if i would get a chance!" Gopi got confused with her dejected tone. "what happend kinjal, U like Umang right!" "I do gopi, i mean, i have to, he is my would be, but sometimes, it feels so odd. Umang rarely speaks to me, all he is intrested is his bussiness.

Sometimes i feel that he is marrying me just for his bussiness.There is nothing special in him, i mean no affection, care or love!" "There is nothing as called as Love kinjal!" Koki thundred and came inside along with Hetal and both girls sprang to their feet instantly. "umang is a matured person, he have responsibilites on his shoulder,

and also a big busssiness to handle. u are not still a college student, to dream that a prince wil come and take u away. As we grow we have to understand that two persons share their lives understanding and adjusting with each other. Thats is called Love in ur sense. So stop whinning and try to understand umang and his responsibility and stop ur foolish demands. Understand" "Jii maa!" kinjal nodded automatically. Hetal gave her a pity look and gopi moved her eyes from kinjal to koki.

"Here wear this jewellery, its a family jewellery." "But maa, bhai gave this matching to my dress." "Kinjal..today everyone are coming for ur engagement, u are a modi daugther, so maintain that prestiage." "Ji maa!" Koki and hetal left and kinjal silently put her necklace

aside and wore which koki gave her.Gopi couldnt not see that and rushed forward. "Auntie!" gopi called koki. "auntie i am sorry to interfere but, kinjal liked that necklace a lot, she was very fond of it, please let her wear it." Koki signalled her to stop raising her hand. "i know what is right and what is wrong for my daugther. Some things are maintained for family honour, which u cant never understand.

I am telling u again gopi, be a guest in this house, and leave the family matters to us, u are a friend of kinjal, dont try to be a family member. Understand!" kokila warned and went away leaving gopi hurt. "Kokila, i know u dont like people below our status, but it was really rude of u to talk to gopi like that!" "Hetal, i have seen the world more than u did,

u have a very protective life around me and trusts people so easily. Same happened with our brother too, and see the result for his stubborness. I told him so many times that urmila is not right for him, but he became blind in her love. whatever happend with jeetu, let it be but I dont want this happen to my children again

. No one can take advantage of them because of their family name...and yes hetal...Ask gopi to stay away from Ahem, and if possible ask her to leave as soon as possible!!" kokila ordered and left. And gopi had tears hearing all this, and turned to see Ahem standing behind her, looking at her.


I know this is a filler part...but have to keep the foundations of the characters...

All i can say is...get ready for the maha twist...the final episode of the flashback...until then next friday...

once again..intimate me if u dint recive any pm who requested..

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Part 6- page 37

Edited by shaina.sharma - 13 years ago
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Me first whoop whoop !!!!

RES - Okay first of all sorry for the delay, but I'm here!

So let's begin, oooh Ahem's filling her in!

Oh wow, this is proper reminding me of a chick flick, boy meets girl, girl, boy fall in love, and chaaro taraf shenai ghoonjing in their ears! Haye... 😍

Love the way Ahem indirectly called himself and idiot lol, and at the same time Gopi's authoritative side over Ahem! I wish your Ahem could flirt with me too.

'Oh Ahem hun come this side, I'll give you nothing but compliments, I can assure you.'

Ni-ice I totally love the way Ahem has all his life planned out ahead even with Gopi in the picture, I like how that played music to my ears. And oh God Anita!!! To ruin my moment yet again, I don't like her, she seems very conniving and sly-fully intact with the devil to me lol, this girl would sell her soul to the devil in order to make sure that she remains a part of his life. 😛

I hope one day Ahem winks at Gopi in the show too, now that would so be a Kodak moment. Oh oh oh I'm so glad Ahem left Anita, shame on you... Aaw so sweet the way Ahem wanted felt offended by her remark about 'other friends'. I do wonder, however, how Ahem and Gopi will confess to their feelings for each other, seeing as all they're talking about are the exams - thanks to Gopi lol. I know she wants to be mature, but she should sometimes let her hair down.

So saaweeet he was mesmerised by an old memory of her smile, that is just too cute. 😳

Man I am loving Ahem's abilities of paying compliments to himself, it makes me drool over him that tad bit extra.

LOL Ahem followed her, now that's kinda freaky even for Ahem lol, but seeing as I can't wait for them to get together, I'll be patient and won't complain, but I gotta admit I did find it sweet that he felt protective over her in that respect, so keep at it gal. 😉

Gopi got the brains of Britain lol 😛, she did what no other person from the crowds that walked those streets everyday couldn't do, she gave that kid a home, or somewhat close! What a noble deed.

See now I like this playful side to both of them, it's nice to imagine them both like that, in such a manner. Hmm 'Gops' I like that.

Whao so Rashi decides that she's jealous of Gopi, oops Gops too lol, wah jealousy ho to aisi. Haha Rashi itch guard, that could suit her in reality, I mean as in the one in the serial.

Now that's a sight to see, Anita actually worried about Rashi liking her, and then Ahem actually taking her side down to the T. Yeh dosti hum nahin chodenge: comes to mind. 😆

So back to the flashback - farewell party, I get a bad feeling when FF's host parties lol, because I know that's the moment something will happen to the couple to jeopardise their relationship, or bring some kind of rift between the main couple and my heart skips a few beats!

So, I'm liking Kinjal and Gopi's friendship. I hope Ahem, Rashi and Anita don't get to them and again create some sort of an awkwardness between them.

Oh so Rashi won't be giving Gopi the benefit of doubt even, I really thought she would be the one to clear the air you know, so if Rashi hates her already, then how will Gopi and Ahem come close again?

It's so weird for Kokila to not like Gopi lol, this small detail is so hard to digest. But I can't help wondering is it really the fact that Gopi doesn't belong to the extent of riches Ahem's family belong to.

Well well I weren't expecting Gopi to answer back to Rashi, woop, big-up Gops in this respect. 😃

And Ahem!!!! Oh no! How could he?! I thought that he might keep his distance but I didn't realise he would become aggressive toward Gopi in terms of attitude, you broke my heart! But I am so glad that Gopi at least stood her ground, so another cheer for her goes out!

Okay, so Kinjal is getting married to Umang, and she's not so sure if he's into her, now there's a surprise, I thought this was a bubbly love marriage, something tells me I know what's gonna happen.

So I'm gonna be honest here, but I think Kokila was right in her place there, she is after all a guest, and in that respect you can't start walking in and asking for changes from the Mother of the Bride lol, so my vote is with Koki this time.

As for Ahem observing her tears, well I reckon they won't do much to him, as in his mind he's already been hurt by her, so I highly doubt they will mean much. But hey, at least he's noticing her all the time.

Oooh maha twist, I'm so ready for it, will be waiting only here for it babe. 😛

Great job, and waiting for more.

Luv Tink😉

xxx

Edited by tinkerbe11 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
fantastic update shaina👏...
the previous update was filled with shocks...😲😲😲
in this update i can see villians (all lady villians😆😆😆)😉
anitha jealous of ahem n gopi's friendship( i found the villian no1😆)
may be she had a big role in separating gohem...she doesnt like ahem n rashi too...
and i loved the way how ahem stood for rashi... love their friendship👏...he trusts her very much👍🏼...
rashi is also scolding gopi😭(villian no2😆 maybe temporary)
is she doin this to bring the truth out ... i just want to see rashi playing the cupid between gohem😍...
this kokila seems to be saying the same thing from the beginning "prestige" "prestige" "prestige"...😡😡😡...if it is gopi vau in the serial ... it is family prestige in your ff...she never misses a chance to hurt gopi or rashi...(so koki is our villian no 3 ... i think i should give her the first place... so anitha comes 2nd😆)...
so now waiting for the maha twist... expecting more shocks n villians...
n when is jigar returning??...
n once again fabulous update shaina...
Edited by magi11 - 13 years ago
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wow what a fiery update. you are a wonderful writer. each part is a pleasure to read.
the story is really gripping.
Edited by shruthi2010 - 13 years ago
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Well...shaina, u made me hate Koki so much...still what had happened between Gohem? this is a long weekend for me. Just got home from my field learning and my english class, ur update made my day.

Love you

Monyka
Edited by kaka.lg - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it shaina...it was wonderful...
poor gopi feel so bad for her...everyone scolding her...
and koki is so rude...
i liked the convo between rashi and ahem especially the nickname thing
"what would i call u...rash...make me remember itch guard" 🤣omg that was hilarious...wonder what the maha twist is
cant wait for next friday
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Posted: 13 years ago
great update.eagerly waiting for more.loved the way gopi challenged ahem.love the way the story is building.great job.

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