FF:- Saathi Re(updated) part-15- page 79 9th feb - Page 21

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Posted: 13 years ago
Seriously loved your this part.
OMG gopi cheated , i think it is a misunderstanding created by anita .loved the way you portrayed the characters .
truly amazing
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG!!! that was amazing!!!loved it loved it loved it...thanks so much!!
can't wait to read the next part!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Shaina, it was defenitely a zhor ka jhatka. You really surprised me with Ahem's change. I was not sure if he was genuinely changed from the second chapter. Now I am happy that he was not pretending and they became friends. But I can't digest that Gopi cheated on Ahem. No way, it might be Anita who played games to create misunderstanding between them. Gopi not believing in God? another jhatka for me. Kinjal friend with Gopi? again another shock. Just cocerned that Koki is not impressed with Gopi. But Hetal is so sweet. Loved Rashi-Ahem relationship. I have a gut feeling that its Rashi going to help in reviving the Gohem relationship. Good, Rashi noticed that Anita is jealous of Gopi's presence and she may find out who was the villian in gohem relationship.
Now can't wait to see what will happen when Gopi stays at MM. Is it going to be a turning point where the misunderstandings will be cleared. Or will Gopi fly for higher studies. See, you can't make me hate Ahem. I love love love him. Please give us some FB scenes of their romance at college. It will take a while to show the romance between husband-wife relation and have no patience to wait till then😳 Overall, great update and waiting for next frinday.
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi shaina,😊
u are one of my favorite ff writers. I am new to this forum and i recently read milan. It is the best ff i have ever read. Actually i am a raji fan and am curious to know that will u write raji too ? i mean the recent update is all about gohem , please write raji also because there are nt many ff writers who include them. please,please,please,please. its a request 🥺
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it...ahem's feelings were so nicely expressed...eagerly waiting for the next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
Enjoyed reading & it is different ...What would have happ & can the differences be cleared now when he is about to get married to Anitha!!!
Will Jigar's entry pull Gopi towards him? Will Ahem be able live with that 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
Really good update Shaina.
Now we know what shattered his heart. He fell in love with her and it seems she hurt him.
Looking forward to the next update of how he fell in love and what she did to hurt him. Also with this engagement not over, will this be a time when he reaches a better place so that, when she stays with them, he will fall in love with her again?
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 143badra

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hi babes ... so ur update is already done .. didnt expect it to come this soon but i am glad .. tht it is sooner than i expected ...

Its friday remember...u are glad now..but after reading the update u wil be back on my back again sayng why so much delay😆

god why did u have to end the flash back .. was waiting to find more about the relationships ...

i told u i was going to run the story in a parallel way...tell me ifs it not convineent

so gopi is related to aham in more than one way ..

Many ways...just wait

wht i am interested in is to find out how she becomes his gf , then ex and then again gf, wife and the mother of his children ... there is a long way to go ...really

long way to go...everyone is wating for the same too, what to say just have pattience, u wil have everything ...

gopi too is going to a foreign country to do her further studies ... if i can remember properly .. jijar is in a foreign country doing his further studies .. well well ... wht are u up to ... pls tell me u have no intention of fixing gopi and jijar together ... hope nt ...

am i so readable or do u have a inner mind. its a love story..some misunderstanding, some heart brakes sure to come up so just get ready.

yeah jigar is in foreign too doing his bussines and mba multi tasking and whether gopi wil go to foreign or when wil their story start or will it start or wil not...just wait and read..god i better end the flashback soon..people are getting hyper here.

and aham and his big mouth .. the poor chap ... will have to be careful ... he seems to be reckless .. and love the fact tht he has an inner voice ...

AHem and big mouth he does and doesnt ...but this time he is really reckless.

and ahem is carefull how...u wil see..u wil be suprised too.

more of ahme indentity is yet to be revelaed.

rashi and aham are friends from childhood .. now tht is great news .. so which means their closeness ,, nothing to do with any sort of chemistry .. hope nt ..

yeah ...rahem my speciality remember..dont worry no rahem chemistry here...it wil be pure friendship with jelousy...watch out how..

loved ur jija and sali relationship a lot in milan .. so i guess i can see a lot of nice conversations twn these friends .. as u say rashi is the only person tht can figure out aham ...

yup the jiju sali created a hovoc in the mm in milan and here lets see who creates havoc for whom...and how their friendship surives with the new arrivalss fun just began

and loved the way they became friends ... tht was sweet .. loved the mango scene😉

thanks thanks..its a brain wave again

so i hope u will use this friendship to the fullest .. why do i have the feeling tht aham will have to depend on rashi's help to get back gopi .. god i would love to see them team and plot .. tht would e fun ...

so u are guessing milan part 2 here..well readers wil get bored right...the story is really unique so no milan repeatetion...ahem should get some help but u wont even imagince the person who helped him...but its a long way to go their..just wait

btw ,... it was nice to make kinjal and gopi e friends .. and it sounds as if the entire modi family ..i mean the people tht are imp are related to gopi in one way or other ...

as ahem said..the worst bad luck for him...and good for us

and the fact tht parag can over power koki is nice ... tht is a total twist though

Ha ha afterall there should be a person dominate koki right and who else can it be than parag.

and loved the flash back where aham comes into the library ... god i love tht aham .. so much attitute and style .. cool ... and also love the temple flash back ... god gopi wil have no choice but to give in ...

ha ha again u like the bad guy...better change him back to it so that u wil love him..but i still dint forget i have to make u hate ahem modi

what to do ahem always have a way in...afterall he is ahem modi

so gopi has no faith in god ... was the past tht bad ??? .. why do i have a feeling tht i am in for a heart ache when u revel this ... i am having my fingers crossed on this ...

awful bad i assure u, god only knows how gopi survived it. sure not only u everyone wil get a heart attack and i dead on the forum..

wow aham is such a sweetheart .. he is fully regrading his actions .. i will think he is genuine ... i am giving him the benefit of the doubt ... and tht flash back was perfect ... vwery well written ... the way gopi reacts and aham reveling his true self .. and showing how vulnerable he is to gopi ,, and the fact tht he is searching for a true friend sound nice .. and it does remind me of mjht .. the circumstances arent at all common but the friendship is almost identical ...

thanks, i planned two days for his confession to be out...i was it to be memserizing and beatiful and u know justified to his character. and also to maintain bit suspense too..god i wont do a ff with flashback again.

yes i love mjht samrat confession but to the wrong person...i told u i might include some mjht in the ff, so here it is...and now the kutumb starts in the present and mjht in the past..both my fav

and u do mention tht aham wants her in his life in several places ... but only in few occasions tht he needs her as a friend ... tht was sweet tht he expects her to guide him .. to remind him of humanity ... and the last bit of the flash back was rocking .. gopi asks for forgivrness and the way they are so comfortable with each other and pulling each others legs while at it .. sounds so nice

thanks mano..i love the confession too, i have a special part in every update..lets hope i get this in every update...

he knew that he wil go back again to his world and lose the humanity he loved..so he need gopi now a rememberance for himself not to repeat the mistake again.. i planned more on the sceene but as it self got lengthy so i cut it for the next update. .

and the best part was tht aham released anita's hand and held gopi's hand forever ... u are good at twisting the words nicely .. so i guess tht is wht u tried to tell ... and u didnt mentioned anything about the reaction of anita ... my guess is it wasnt good or friendly at all ...

ha ha so u got it, i wanted it to show for the readers how he shifted the sides...thanks..i thought of mentioning anitha too but where the suspense if i revealed everything now..save for the next update too

infact i wanted to imagine ahem and gopi hanshaking and anitha in between them

god .. love the fact tht he relates mr.modi with gopi .. and love rashi man .. she seems so sweet and nice and a chatter box and fun .. and she asked all the questions tht i need the ans for ...

ha ha what to say..gopi have hundred times told mr.modi by now and anyone can recognize it and that too by rashi,..ahem might have got a heart attack by now.

and love the fact tht rashi and gopi are in good terms .. will see wht u have for them

just wait and watch what good terms they are in...this ff is all about misunderstandings and confusions...i better change the title to misunderstandgins of modis😆

wht the *** ... u are right i never saw it coming .. gopi cheated aham .. why do i have a feeling tht their is more to it and anita is some how connected and solely responsible for this mess ,,,,, so who is this new guy ,, from past i mean ... wait she did cheat him with a guy right 😉😆

u realy dont know what the past is, no one does except me..just wait for 2 more updates. and u wil know for sure..and after that i am still alive i wil write the next update..

sorry to dissapoint u because its a real shock what the past is and no hint at that..all i can say is u can never dream it

god u did surprise me ... and am shocked a bit .. nt tht much .. thanx to the early warning ...

i am again warnign u this suprise is a sample the coming one is the real which wil lead to a huge twist in the story

so here is wht i think .. gopi dint cheat him ,, i could have been a misunderstanding .. created by anita or some one or gopi herself make sure aham thought so .. due to some lame reason .. wht ever it is gopi didnt cheat him ...

i dont know why everyone jump to anitha first..i get being him as girlfriend.. i dont like her too but in the ff which i mentioned earlier u wil love her for sure.

well wait and read u wil know.

as usual u have left with a cliff hanger ...

he he better get used to it

god loved the entire thing .. the way u have written is .. fab and also love the fact tht u are writing both the past and present simultaneously ,,,,,, it is different and seems to be more appealing ...

oh thanks so u like the past and present too..i thought u dint like it.. agreed its differetn and more entertaining than only the past...

so will be waiting to find out more about the story .. soonnn

till friday..

it is so tempting babes .. love it ..

catch u later ...

xoxo

- - badra

thanks mano u are a darling..

do come back on friday to get prepared for the jatkas..


(btw my first comment got deleted .. and had to re-type .. poor me na )

so sad...i guessed some difference in ur comment and thought it as ur tired but i can just imagine ur expression of being deleted comment

i suffer the same fate too when i update...hence i keep it coping for every part.

bye

shaina

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sks21

yes shaina i'm very much surprised...well done dear..
loved it...it was amazing...
so ahem thinks gopi cheated on him...
hope its just a misunderstanding...have a feeling that anitha has got to do something with it but will wait for the update coz u know u surprised me with this update..
and also if its a misunderstanding then will rashi help clearing it between gohem so curious to know...
will be waiting for ur update shaina
and loved this update...



-kavya

ha ha tanks sks..glad that u are suprised..

yup he says gopi cheated...

why everyone jumps to anitha with this..i agree anitha have a part..but well i wont reveal anything.. but i warn u..a huge twist coming on the way.

and u wil be suprised with the coming one too i mean after the next friday one

rashi wil play a major role in the ff afterall she is ahem best friend..so lets see what happens between the 3

thanks sks come back friday...for more zhatkas

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sinak

Gopi cheated. I dont feel so. May be some else played a prank to break them up.

i am glad that everyone got gopi's character with a frim hold..more skeletons are to be revealed..lest see what happens further..

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