Hey! Surprised to see me here😳, well first of all lemme say, you have nooo idea how long it has been that I've actually read an FF! I'm am so serious when I say this, and it has been years (not really lol) since I've commented on ff's, but I gotta say, I simply clicked into it, and I just started reading randomly and here I am sat here readng all the parts back to back. 😛
So shall I say first that I LOVED IT!
So here goes my comment for your first chapter - please bear with me, as I haven't commented since bare time. 😳
And...
OMG, Ahem is doing his own tareef! LOOOL I'm loving him already! Do you know that I have a weak spot for guys that are obsessed with their own images, I love them all, yes I know it's a difficult task to be so generous, but it's a quality I happen to possess. 😎
Oh god and guess who has to go and ruin it...Anita!! Eugh! I love the way you put that part of 'why does it always have to end with I love you' you know, because even at times I found myself wondering the same thing lol. 😆
FREEZE
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I soo love this addition, it's perfect, it really gives it your own touch. 😉
Ew it's a shame his first introduction after 'freeze' had to start with manhoos Anita🤢. Anyways back to loverboy Ahem😃, I am loving this abrupt cool dude Ahem to the core gal, somebody get me something to faint on! ⭐️
So Kinjal the hyper girl huh, I kinda have a good feeling about her in this ff, what are you gonna do with her...I wonder. 😛
Love the litte limelight on his 'cellphone' by the way. 😆
Jigar came and went lol, not that I'm too bothered about him (I ain't gonna lie, but his character doesn't seem as interesting as my darling Ahem's!)😳
Ohmagawd...Urmila and in the Modi Bhavan LMFAO 😆,
ff badal jaye, but iske character ka kuch nahin ho sakta!
Somebody should write a OS on her and call it 'Character Deela' lol.
Rashi seems okay, somehow I don't like the pairing of her being friends with Ahem, maybe it's because I can't leave behind her traits from the serial that are running currently. But at the same time I feel that you will do justice to her character; you've chosen her to be a shoulder to lean on in the coming chapters for Ahem I guess.
So we have Lady Hitler now too, hmm her character isn't so different to when she was first introduced in the show.
Oh my God 'Mother India' for Hetal - that is awesome!
I love how Gopi came into the scene so fluently, no dramatic entry, just a simple presence, and yet with such little information you left a big impact on us readers! 😲😲 I thought that Ahem still has a soft spot for her, I love it when the love story has already begun from before the start of the ff lol, it really creates more eagerness within us to find out how they really met, and what they will do to revive that love again. So I'm already headed to the next chapter, as I've read all of them, but will see if I can keep my eyes open long enough to comment on the next one now too, if not you can expect it shortly. 😉
Keep up the great work, and excuse me while I try my best to go grab your Ahem's attention...😉
Luv Tink😉
P.S. Will be back tomorrow to comment on the rest.😛
Edited by tinkerbe11 - 13 years ago
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