FF:- Saathi Re(updated) part-15- page 79 9th feb - Page 19

Originally posted by: Eva456

wonderfully written shaina!craving for more!

thanks coming right up

😊Hai guys..thanks for waiting and appreciating...get ready for a shock

Part-4:

"Ahem, Ahem!!!" koki called ahem out and he came back to the world instantly, anitha was looking at him curiously. "AHem dikra, come here!!" koki called and ahem nodded and felt anitha's hand gripped his tightly and saw a dissproving look in her eyes, ahem assured her with his eyes, and moved down with her towards the person he was dreaming of.

She was changed now, more beatiful, in a white chuddiar and a short curly hair..."cool" ahem thought.Gopi was with hetal, nodding for soemthing she was saying, but he could bet that her attention was

"good" koki said not so impressed. "How much more wil she study!" ahem thought. "very good dikra!" ahem heard his father voice boomed. "There we go!" ahem thought. "when do u report dikra!" "jee uncle, this coming month" "that good news, i really appreciate ur effort, i say u stay here these days, i know their are lot of formalites to go to the foreign, it wil take time to arrange"

"Doomed!" ahem thought. "yes uncle but i already arranged a hostel for me" "arrey," hetal pounded on her, "its not fair dikra, why do u have to stay in a hostel when we are here!" "But auntie!" gopi tried to fight desperately. "no buts, i say u are staying here! no argument" parag concluded. and gopi looked at koki and moved her eyes to ahem desperately and looked away.

Parag looked at koki and his mom dint had any option left "ahem ke papa is right gopi, stay here" Gopi tried to argue but no one listened to her. Ahem kept looking at her, but she was determined to not to look at him. "GOPI!!" kinjal shrieked and hugged her tightly and gopi broke into a wide smile instantly.

"There are so many modi families in town..i never realized u belong to hetal auntie's family" gopi replied to ahem and Ahem nodded. "Enough, of talks come lets go inside" kinjal dragged gopi inside, while gopi tried to protest. Ahem kept looking at her and two finger snapped in front of his eyes "she is our guest, leave her alone!" rashi said.

AHem turned towards her and grinned. "is that gopi?" rashi asked and immediately ahem temper flared "now how is she related to u, friend, best friend, sister, darling, sweetheart, soul mate..say"

"Coffee.." "No" "Tea" "No" "ice cream" "No" "choclate" "No" "Then what wil u eat, my brain!" ahem thundred and gopi hussed him immediately and glanced around. They were in the library , she was trying to read and he was trying to get her attention.

"Mr.Modi..please leave" "why?" "because this is a library and i want to read" "Oh..k then k tell me u wil meet in the coffe shop and i wil go" "No way" "K.." Ahem said and raised and shouted "Listen my brothers and ...darlings...thsi girl sitting here is ignoring me, i have simply asked her a forgivness but she is

"Why are u smiling!!" rashi asked and ahem realized he was. "No" ahem said keeping a straight face, "u are looking something different today!" "No" "AHem dikra, the puja is going to begin, come" hetal called, and rashi eyes popped out. "u are going to sit in the puja!"

"Well..."he said looking at gopi who turned her gaze away. "mom wil be happy if i sit, i did correct right!" Ahem said placing his hand over her shoulder. "of course" rashi beamed. Ahem smiled. This was his constant habit with rashi. He always asks her the same question and she would always reply the same even though sometimes she felt its not correct. she knew he wanted to hear a yes from her, so she would say it for him...always.

It was thus their friendship started years back. During their childhood, he climed a tree to cut mangoes but koki scolded him saying he would fall down and everyone said the same. He went pouting and said "why would i climb a tree if i dont know who to come back down, mom is so stupid, i am correct, right!" "of course" she replied with a tooty smile. It was then their friendship started which dint break until now.

"Ahem!!" koki called and rashi immediately moved away from him. Their closeness always misintereputed other meaning for all. "come" koki said eyeing rashi nd ahem went giving rashi a leave it look. He sat in the puja with anitha and directly looked towards gopi for her reaction.

SHe gave him a indifferent glance and got up to go away. "Arrey gopi dikra, where are u going, sit in the puja" "No auntie, i wil help kinjal and morever...I dont believe in god!" Koki shook her head in displeasure and Ahem head snapped at her listening the answer //Freeze

"Hey kanaji...give me 100% marks, plus a cool boyfriend, plus a pimple free skin plus...what else do u ask" gopi controlled her anger and took a deep sigh and did a fast pray to the lord krishna and hurried away from their. "hey...why are u angry, i was just asking for u on ur behalf" "Then ask one more thing" "WHat?" "to get rid of u!" "Nice joke!!"

gopi felt like strangling him, and took a deep sigh and moved away. "why dint u arrive at the coffe shop yesterday?" "i told u i wont come" "but u said k" "i said it to make u leave, it doesnt mean that i have to come,"

"smart!!" ahem grinned. "Hai ahem!!" "Hai girls!!" ahem waved at her friends and preeti was ready to faint over him. "do u come to temple often" "Nah...i came for this goddess blessings" "gopi...leave it know" "shut up and come" "dont worry ahem...we wil explain this hitler" "How sweet of u darling.." "Thank u..." "Stop it" gopi shouted.

"Mr.Modi..this is a temple" "really i thought it was a disco tech!" preeti giglled and gopi dragged her along giving him a cursed look. "Leave it...now" "i cant...because of him i am in a real mess, my practical got failed and now i have to look for another donations and..."

"read the topper's name!" ahem shouted. gopi read it and was shocked..."it was not ahem" ..."see at the bottom." ahem said and gopi was shocked to see ahem's name to be the last in his batch and looked at him suprised.

Ahem stood far away from her, looking sad and dissapointed.. "But...But..i thought u are the topper of this college" "I am!...Now!" "Then..this list!" Ahem laughed at her, a laughter which was is used to cover his distress. "what do u think, that if i am a real topper, then wouldnt i be studying in london or australia rather than in the local college" gopi was suprised with his statement but more with his tone.

"u were right gopi, i never had any life. since from childhood i was constantly compared to my cousin who was really ambitious. i was always a failure before him. he planned everything in his life and my life is always messed up.

My parents always wanted me to be top at everything i do. It was a prestige value. But i was intrested in sports, it dont mean that i am a dull student..but i was a poor student for them...always. During my childhood i always look for them to appreciate me but they always thought me less infront of my cousin.my medals were always less infornt of him. They wanted me to be the responsible elder son

of the family, and i tried my level best to get up in their eyes. The more they compared, the more i strived, the more i lost intrests in my studies. Finally to keep their prestiage they joined me in this college, as they knew they would somehow make me sucessful here.

I agree i have a huge ego being rich, but i was not like gopi, not really like this. Though i was proud at first when i came here, i never argued with anyone, i just used to keep to myself, which was later i realized it was a mistake. All those guys out their, knows me, they expect me to show some attitude and cool nature being the grand symbol icon and slowly i realized that

this was what my parents wanted to. Me being recognized. The 1st sem results were out and as u can see, i ended up first but from the last. All those so called friends who looked so high about me, suddenly started to ignore me, i fell down in their eyes, infront of everyone eyes and it was then i got my hands on the question paper of the next sem.

dont ask me how, because if ur father is a trustee and u have a rich family name around u then everything is possible. I agree i never thought twice about it. It was since then i became the topper of this college, with my friends my pride increased, my thought decreased. U maintain my cool attitude

i slowly lost myself so deep that i never knew when i left myself alone. I hated u the first sight i met u. Not because we argued, because u got what i wanted so desperately. U got talent, marks, a record for urself on ur own hardwork and i was jealous seeing u. the jealousy grew into hatred and i never knew when i crossed my limits with u.

It was on that day u spoke that i have no friends, no self identity nothing then i realized, what i have acutally became. U were right gopi, i used my influence to get over here. Always had and now i cant go back because i already got deep in this mess, its impossible for me to break through because

if i have to be free, it is at the cost of my parents happiness and prestiage. But i dint want to lose myself again, hence i wanted u in my life."AHem turned towards her "i wanted u so that u can guide me, show me what was wrong and what was right.

Remind me constantly what i forgot years back. Humanity towards others, affection with others and mostly a true friend in my life. I know what i did with u have hurted u deeply but all i wanted was ur friendship. My way of showing and asking forgiveness may not have appealed u, and i understand. Now one can trust me after what i have done. Ur the first person gopi, whom i told all this

AHem was sitting on a bench lost in deep thoughts and he felt someone sit beside him. "She hates me" ahem sighed. "i know her ahem, she wil forgive u,, dont take this to heart" anitha consoled taking his hand into hers.And both saw gopi come towards them and stood their uncomfortably. "i think she came for u!" ahem said and was about to leave and anitha tried to stop him catching his hand and gopi spoke

"AHem!!". Ahem became rigid instantly and looked at her shocked, anitha did too. "Ahem!" he repeated shocked. "well u did ask me to call u ahem right!" gopi said shyly. "maybe i did" ahem replied grinning. Gopi waited and replied

"There u are!!. i knew i would find u here" rashi said coming on the terrace. She was right, it was indeed his favorite place. "so...how are u Mr.Modi!" ahem snapped his head at her suprised "did u talk to gopi!" he asked immediately. "How did u know?" "i guessed!" ahem mumbled. "well u are right, and do u know what i learnt.."

"what?" ahem asked his heart beating fast. "that she was in ur college and she used to call u mr.modi..before she became ur friend" "and then" "then she said that the college ended, thats it, what say" "u heard her right!" "Hmm...but why do i feel that their more in this!! something both of u are hiding!" "Rashi.." "why do

"I dint,... she did!" ahem said bending his head down...

Suprised..!!! please say u are...😆

so first of all i have to ask u is it confusing to see the past and the present simulatenouslly.

and coming to the story...

ahem wanted a real friendship with gopi, and gopi agreed too but did gopi cheated with him.

what happend to make him think that she cheated.

did gopi really cheated or is it a misunderstaning..

keep reading to know what happened😆

let me know if i left someone in the pm list...and the new comers..just ask.😊 if needed.

thanks and the suggestions are most welcomed.

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hi babes ... so ur update is already done .. didnt expect it to come this soon but i am glad .. tht it is sooner than i expected ...

god why did u have to end the flash back .. was waiting to find more about the relationships ...

so gopi is related to aham in more than one way ..

wht i am interested in is to find out how she becomes his gf , then ex and then again gf, wife and the mother of his children ... there is a long way to go ...

gopi too is going to a foreign country to do her further studies ... if i can remember properly .. jijar is in a foreign country doing his further studies .. well well ... wht are u up to ... pls tell me u have no intention of fixing gopi and jijar together ... hope nt ...

and aham and his big mouth .. the poor chap ... will have to be careful ... he seems to be reckless .. and love the fact tht he has an inner voice ...

rashi and aham are friends from childhood .. now tht is great news .. so which means their closeness ,, nothing to do with any sort of chemistry .. hope nt ..

loved ur jija and sali relationship a lot in milan .. so i guess i can see a lot of nice conversations twn these friends .. as u say rashi is the only person tht can figure out aham ...

and loved the way they became friends ... tht was sweet .. loved the mango scene😉

so i hope u will use this friendship to the fullest .. why do i have the feeling tht aham will have to depend on rashi's help to get back gopi .. god i would love to see them team and plot .. tht would e fun ...

btw ,... it was nice to make kinjal and gopi e friends .. and it sounds as if the entire modi family ..i mean the people tht are imp are related to gopi in one way or other ...

and the fact tht parag can over power koki is nice ... tht is a total twist though

and loved the flash back where aham comes into the library ... god i love tht aham .. so much attitute and style .. cool ... and also love the temple flash back ... god gopi wil have no choice but to give in ...

so gopi has no faith in god ... was the past tht bad ??? .. why do i have a feeling tht i am in for a heart ache when u revel this ... i am having my fingers crossed on this ...

wow aham is such a sweetheart .. he is fully regrading his actions .. i will think he is genuine ... i am giving him the benefit of the doubt ... and tht flash back was perfect ... vwery well written ... the way gopi reacts and aham reveling his true self .. and showing how vulnerable he is to gopi ,, and the fact tht he is searching for a true friend sound nice .. and it does remind me of mjht .. the circumstances arent at all common but the friendship is almost identical ...

and u do mention tht aham wants her in his life in several places ... but only in few occasions tht he needs her as a friend ... tht was sweet tht he expects her to guide him .. to remind him of humanity ... and the last bit of the flash back was rocking .. gopi asks for forgivrness and the way they are so comfortable with each other and pulling each others legs while at it .. sounds so nice ...

and the best part was tht aham released anita's hand and held gopi's hand forever ... u are good at twisting the words nicely .. so i guess tht is wht u tried to tell ... and u didnt mentioned anything about the reaction of anita ... my guess is it wasnt good or friendly at all ...

god .. love the fact tht he relates mr.modi with gopi .. and love rashi man .. she seems so sweet and nice and a chatter box and fun .. and she asked all the questions tht i need the ans for ...

and love the fact tht rashi and gopi are in good terms .. will see wht u have for them

wht the *** ... u are right i never saw it coming .. gopi cheated aham .. why do i have a feeling tht their is more to it and anita is some how connected and solely responsible for this mess ,,,,, so who is this new guy ,, from past i mean ... wait she did cheat him with a guy right 😉😆

god u did surprise me ... and am shocked a bit .. nt tht much .. thanx to the early warning ...

so here is wht i think .. gopi dint cheat him ,, i could have been a misunderstanding .. created by anita or some one or gopi herself make sure aham thought so .. due to some lame reason .. wht ever it is gopi didnt cheat him ...

as usual u have left with a cliff hanger ...

god loved the entire thing .. the way u have written is .. fab and also love the fact tht u are writing both the past and present simultaneously ,,,,,, it is different and seems to be more appealing ...

so will be waiting to find out more about the story .. soonnn

it is so tempting babes .. love it ..

catch u later ...

xoxo

- - badra

(btw my first comment got deleted .. and had to re-type .. poor me na )

Originally posted by: vibha_v_bhat

awesome. Am glad she passed. Am curious to know why is he gettin engaged to anita. And am sure gopi dint cheat on him.its a misunderstanding

thanks vibha..see i told u she wil get passed.

everything will be crystal clear. in the coming 2 updates i think..

well i wont reveal anything...all i can say is ...a huge twist on the way..

Originally posted by: uamaz

Fantastic update.. I loved the way you introduced this Freeze in your FF it was brilliant interlink between past and present.

The reason I like your FF's is because you portray your characters really well and the chemistry between them is fantastic 😆

Keep it up chuck ... can't wait to read the next part...

p.s I do believe Gopi would cheat on Ahem and I think their break-up is the reason for her to give up in her devotion to her kanha ji

thanks a lot uamaz...

thanks a lot for liking the freeze actions..i thought the readers wil get confused...

ha ha tanks..when i write..i just imagine the scene in my mind...hence this is the reason my updates are too long and sometimes with unnecessary details..but glad u liked it.

ha ha have to wait till friday again sorry.

u mean u dont believe or u do beieve gopi cheated ahem

but yes their break up is the reason he lost her faith

Originally posted by: kaka.lg

Reserved...



Oooff, God, seriously ur story is becoming more interesting. Thank you, sweetheart that u didn't make Ahem pretend to be nice with Gopi. But it was for real. Haha...i thought i hate Ahem in this FF but u convinced me to love him again. Oh, Gopi was his ex...so sweet...

well, what's wrong with them? what create misunderstanding between them? Was it Anita or else u will have to introduce another character?

hmm...well, waiting for Jigar to take part in ur FF soon. He was completely sidelined. Ah...forgot to ask u about Kinjal fiancee. U.didnt introduce him yet or i did forget it. Is he Dhawal? what is his status?

Too much questions from me, this time. Sorry for that. Ur Gopi feels so lonely now without her Ahemji. So sad that i haven't had a chance to help u in this FF yet...

i'm ur partner or assistant? i still confuse.

wow...ha ha what to do..have to keep up the estimations right..

oh shit..what i did.l. u were about to hate him and i spoiled it...NAHINNN

yup she is his ex and the future. lover,,,get redy

u wil know soon...who created the misunderstanding...it wil be a real blow just wait

ha ha dont worry jigar wil have a unique introduction, but it wil take time as still the gohem have not been set...

i mentioned kinjal finacee, umang...he wil come too, dont worrybut his role is minimum, i never liked their pair dhawal will come too

dont forget we are just in the begining of the story or to say the story dint begin at all. once the flash back is completed...u wil know the speed of the story

ha ha yes gopi is really lonely but take some time...she wil be lonely in a way still not left lonely confused...read further u wil get it cleared.

and why do u think that u cant help me now..

u can always help me being my partner..u always are my partner not my assistant.

got it