FF:- Saathi Re(updated) part-15- page 79 9th feb - Page 17

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sks21

hey shaina loved the update dear...it was amazing
ahem's bashing was awesome..
i dont believe he's changed... i guess he's trying to take revenge
poor gopi...but the update was brilliant shaina
and will be waiting for the next update

thanks sks..

what to do...all the old grude finally came out on this ff.

i wont reveal anything because suprise twist is coming its way on.

thanks once again

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: CHIKA784

So sweet.good to see the change in Ahem,love it!😛


thanks chika...their are lot of shades of ahem modi..watch out


Originally posted by: tina_1234

nyc part but i think aHem is actin

thanks tina..lets see if he is acting for real or really sorry and something else happend.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for a great update Shaina.
So now we know what ticked him off. He is determined to make friends with her. Hopefully we will read his attempts in the next update. What was it that brought on the change? Why was he hell bent to have her as his friend?
As this is a flashback and we are aware there are skeletons in the his closet. Just what are his skeletons like?
As this is a three update flashback hopefully it will end in the next update. Looking forward to seeing the real story making progress.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: uamaz

Ah, dear Gopi finally lashed out 😆


Hope they will be able to make some good memories before Mr Modi breaks her heart which I assume he does from Gopi's entrance in your earlier chapters when you mentioned all the hard work and toil he went through to get her to like him and the satisfaction he felt when he heard the words "I love you Ahem".😕

Anther fantastic chapter, can't wait to read on😃

yup finally the much waiting ahem bashing is done and u saw the consequences,

lets see what is in store for the future, did he is acting or he is changed or wil he change..or some misunderstandings...lets see what happes.

what were his attempts and what are the final consequences.

thanks dear..

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Bloem123

Amazing Update Shaina

Love the ahem en Gopi in this story
Loved it very nice Cant wait to read the next part!

thanks bloem

yeah i love them too , gopi more than ahem

thanks,,,,catch the part soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: famzii05

luved it sooo much!!! very nice and interesting,, cant wait for the next update. it was worth the wait :)
xx

thanks famzii...glad i made up for my delay.

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Posted: 13 years ago

thanks traxy


Originally posted by: kamjal

love it dear and was craving for more

thanks kamjal..


Originally posted by: Nihira-fan

absolutely fabulous!!!!!can't wait to read more.

thanks a lot nihira..catch it on friday


QUOTE=vaishali667]wow! superb update very nice one

thanks dear..

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: _Precious_

That was a brilliant update as I expected from you. I cannot believe Mr.Arrogant will change at a single lashing out of Gopi, so I am skeptical about his change. If he is really changed to a sweet person, then what happend to their relationship later and how come Ahem going to marry Anita. I loved loved loved Gopi. Oh man she is so brave and confident not only slapping him but also insulting him before the whole college. Really liked that she is not buying any of his gestures for forgiving him like most other girls would do. I really wish if it was a genuine change in Ahem and he sincerely wants to make friendship with Gopi. Now, its difficult for me to imagine Ahem in this situation pleading to Gopi since I am very much used to the commanding nature of Ahem. Overall, it was an awesome update and you made my day. Thanks.

wow precious...now i understood why did u tell me that u wil comment tomorrow.

thanks a lot, ha ha so many have the similar doubts too, dont worry i wil justify,

u wil wati and read how the whole change got changed suddenly,

yeah me too loved gopi here, i love brainy people,

ahem modi deserves to be insulted to the core, it wil be only then he wil realize peoples values and feeling.

gopi is a smart and strong minded girl, after the flashback u wil see her character more and her independence which makes her differnt from the other girls and the attracton for mr.modi.

ha ha..everyone having second doubts about ahem modi..good it means u caught the character,

yes i agree a changed ahem is too good for words, and i agree that its difficult to see the flitery ahem compared to the sns serial

but once flash back is done, u wont have any pbm dont worry

thanks and u made my day with ur comment too

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kaka.lg


Shaina, sorry that i'm a bit late to comment. I know u understand my condition since i dont want to give u a quick reply because of my little time.

Well, as usual, u never failed to surprise us. And i give u a big applause that u can portray Gopi's character as a strong girl. I love ur Gopi so much. Hmmm...i'm not sure whether Ahem is acting or not. so all i can do is waiting for the next updates. Ur Ahem Modi is a very complicated character just like in SNS but a bit childess and sometimes cruel. ;-)

Honestly, i have no clue what u will lead this FF, darling. But i'm sure that it will always be a big hit after milan.

hey, u asked why Milan is so special since people can not forget it. Well, my answer is that Milan is ur first and very long FF with such great story line which was written beautifully by u. Consequently, just accept that u are a convincing author of the forum.

That's the end of my comment, sweetheart. Waiting for ur reply :-)

finally the person i was waitng for,😉

i understand darling..no need to explain, even i have so many ff to comment on, not getting the time and mood to read.

ha thanks... as i promised u i would give a independent gopi in the next ff, so here she is, i always keep a character unique in my ff's so people wont get bored with it, like rashi in the previous ff, gopi in here, ahem wil the next in the coming one..and kinjal in the other one..well the list goes on.

god everyoen is askign me the same question whether ahem is acting or not...hmmm i have to justify it soon otherwise people wil be after me,

agreed and good catch of the ahem character, he have very different shades and can change the colors within seconds,...i cant show much progress in the flashback but once it is done...u can see all the shades of gohem in the ff

honestly i too dont have any clue where this flashback wil lead now...but have to bring something special now

ha ha thanks for appreciating milan. i agree its my first ff and indeed a long one containg 4 parts

its just many people have started ff with gohem on the sns track, i never consider it more special than the one on the forums, thats it...

well i wil accept the compliment if u insist so😉

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: swasthi

Thanks for a great update Shaina.

So now we know what ticked him off. He is determined to make friends with her. Hopefully we will read his attempts in the next update. What was it that brought on the change? Why was he hell bent to have her as his friend?
As this is a flashback and we are aware there are skeletons in the his closet. Just what are his skeletons like?
As this is a three update flashback hopefully it will end in the next update. Looking forward to seeing the real story making progress.

thanks swasti..

yes u do now, very determined and we know how modi is stubborn in getting his things his way.

of course his fruitless attempts to impress her lets see what effect he wil have on her, on himself.

u wil see in the next update why he want to be a friend with her, i wil justify it.

well i wont reveal further more what are the skeletons, its a real suprise.

well sorry to dissapint u swasti, this flashback may extend because at present i am trying to bring the past and the present simulatenously to keep the mind fresh and exciting or it may end in the next 2 updates, as i dint expect this update to be long with gopi bashing ahem.

so lets see, all i can say is u have to wait 2 updates more, to begin the real storry.

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