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vaishali

@vaishali667

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

i really loved plz contiune soon dear

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Filmyarchu

@Filmyarchu

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

sorry for delay but if you all like it I will go on:

Part 2:

Lights are back on and gopi comes back to her sense and when she realizes what she was doing she moves back and ahem is shy and happy so he leaves with his moms call to come down for dinner. Next morning ahem is getting ready for office and is having problem with the shirts button just then gopi comes into the room and asks ahem if he needs anything? ahem says my button is broken so if you could fix it she replies sure and gets the thread and moves to close to him ahem is very happy inside to feel his wife so close to him. after she is turn with the button he makes another excuse that his hand is hurting and he needs the tie to done and gopi helps him while she is focused on the tie. Ahem is just admiring her beauty today she was in a purple saree and her hair was loose so he just kept staring at her just then jigar arrives and says bhai we are getting late for office and ahem says lets go. Gopi is so happy to know that her husband is making excuses to keep her near him but she is so not going to easy on him and has a cheeky smile.

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taniks

@taniks

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

very interesting pls continue ,pls make it longer next tym

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Raunika

@rsk16

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

very nice .plz do continue soon.

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vaishali

@vaishali667

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

really yaar very nice update

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bourbon

@bourbon

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Very nice. Do continue, Priyanka👍🏼

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swasthi

@swasthi

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Really interesting two parts.

What will Ahem ask next for Gopi to do?

Do continue.

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Filmyarchu

@Filmyarchu

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Part 3:

Gopi left her room as today was the day of Karva chauth and all the modi house woman's were fasting and started to decorate their pooja ki tali . everyone was shocked to see rashi desperation for fasting even though she has food poisoning problems.

In ahem's office all he could was have flashbacks of the moments with his angel this morning and compared them with the moments he spend with Anita. he realized that the moments for his wife are precious to him. he takes out his diary and photos with Anita burns them and put it in the dust bin.

Just then at about 10pm jigar comes into his cabin and says bhai lets go we are already late today we going to get a good scold. ahem is confused as to why? jigar replies because our wives are hungry and thirsty ahem was shocked to know that he forget and reviews all those things he said and did to gopi last year on Karva chauth. he questions himself will gopi still fast for him with same heart full of love?

precap: ahem and jigar reach home and onto the terrace but are shocked to see their parents only not their wives.

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Raunika

@rsk16

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

very nice .plz do continue soon.

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_Precious_

@_Precious_

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

very nice update. what happened to Gopi and Rashi. please update soon. I see your story is going in parallel with the serial, so its easy to imagine your version. well done.

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