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Posted: 13 years ago
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guys this is my first try i have never done it so pls forgive me if you don't like it so I am just writing part one and if you do like it I will go on. as no wrote a OS for Karva chauth and neither did the cvc's showed us so let me do it.

Part 1:

the MM house was busy with preparations for the Karva chauth and as Diwali was nearly coming up. Gopi is buy with cleaning the rooms and house meanwhile rashi is trying to solve her problems with jigar . Gopi is cleaning her room and she now was going to clean the top the cupboard so she took a stool and stood on it cleaning it with the cloth. The winds of her were open and it was a really windy and thunderstorm night. as ahem walked into the room after a tried day from the office gopi was losing her balance but still she had noticed ahem. ahem saw gopi nearly going to fall he quickly puts his bag down and holds gopi and she lands in arms as the winds were more hard and cold gopi's hair becomes loose and ahem is staring at her while gopi has her eyes closed of fear. after a few minutes she opens her eyes and is shocked to see ahem holding her and brings back ahem to real world by saying ahem ji please put me down. ahem leaves her and suddenly there's a thunderstorm lightening noise and the lights also go off. gopi is so scared that she hugs ahem so tightly hiding her face in his chest and the scene fades.

if you like it pls comment and give suggestions then only I will go on with it if you don't like I am sorry it was just a try. 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww sooo nyc...wish dis happens in show too
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wowww plz cont plz thast was good start 👍🏼
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Very nice , loved your falling scene . Pls continue
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Please continue so far very nice
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superb😍

Originally posted by: Priyakna

guys this is my first try i have never done it so pls forgive me if you don't like it so I am just writing part one and if you do like it I will go on. as no wrote a OS for Karva chauth and neither did the cvc's showed us so let me do it.


Part 1:

the MM house was busy with preparations for the Karva chauth and as Diwali was nearly coming up. Gopi is buy with cleaning the rooms and house meanwhile rashi is trying to solve her problems with jigar . Gopi is cleaning her room and she now was going to clean the top the cupboard so she took a stool and stood on it cleaning it with the cloth. The winds of her were open and it was a really windy and thunderstorm night. as ahem walked into the room after a tried day from the office gopi was losing her balance but still she had noticed ahem. ahem saw gopi nearly going to fall he quickly puts his bag down and holds gopi and she lands in arms as the winds were more hard and cold gopi's hair becomes loose and ahem is staring at her while gopi has her eyes closed of fear. after a few minutes she opens her eyes and is shocked to see ahem holding her and brings back ahem to real world by saying ahem ji please put me down. ahem leaves her and suddenly there's a thunderstorm lightening noise and the lights also go off. gopi is so scared that she hugs ahem so tightly hiding her face in his chest and the scene fades.

if you like it pls comment and give suggestions then only I will go on with it if you don't like I am sorry it was just a try. 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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really nice os.plz do continue .loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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A really nice start!!

I hope you carry on with this!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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really good. please do continue..wish we have this scene in the serial.
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i like it cont plzzz

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