FF continuation (Gohem love) (part 1&2)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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First of all, I want to apology since it is my first attempt to write FF. I have read almost all the FF, OS, and SS in this forum. All the writers have inspired me to write one too, unfortunately, i don't have that many ideas to write a long FF. So i hope you guys can play this game to continue this FF after i finished my part. You all are talented. We know it. So I request all of you who want to continue the FF can keep it long and bring many different obstacles to make twists of the journey of love between these couples in Saathiya.

Swasthi and Sunara, you are the ones who are really wonderful at love analyzing, i can tell. Suks, you are my role model of writing style. Nafisa, you may have a look here because i just use your idea to start this FF since you always imagine that the CV will surprise us one day. You may know what i mean to surprise you instead of CV. This FF dedicated to all of the Saathiya forum members. Ok, let's play it !!!

Part 1:

Time past by so quickly but the thing in Modi Mansion is still the same. In the morning as usual routine, Gopi wakes up to prepare pooja and breakfast. While doing the pooja, she feels like vomiting and dizzy, everyone notices it including Ahem. Kokila asked Gopi vau, Are you ok? Are you sick? As we know that our lovely Gopi doesn't want her maaji worried she just replies Nahi, maaji i'm fine. Teek hai Gopi vau. Let's have breakfast fast, you have to go to school too. After you come from school you can take rest. ok? She nods her head lightly Ji maaji. In the dinning table, everyone seems to enjoy the delicious breakfast because they are made by Gopi with her pure heart. While serving, she feels dizzy again but ignore it. After breakfast, Gopi you come fast, we are getting late. Ji, Ahemji. Ahem walks to the door, Gopi follows him. Suddenly, a shouting voice of his mother shocked him. He turns to look. Kokila shouting Gopi vau! Gopi vau! wake up. Ahem sees his pale wife lying on the floor. He felt like his heart is broken to a million pieces. Oh god, what happen to her? Did i over work her with her study? Why am i behaving like an idiot? Even i miss her, i want her to always stay with me, I shouldn't have asked her to study all the times. Now she fainted of tiredness from both studying and this endless household chores. Ahem jerks from his thought. He carries her to his bedroom of course their bedroom, he lies her down lightly on the bed. Both his hands are still shaking badly.Then Jigar called the doctor. Everyone keep quiet losing in their own thought looking at the doctor examine her. Rashi smirks and thinks this Gopi gawar ( illiterate ) try so hard to pretend like she is so pity, so exausted. What did she think? She wants me to be the only servant in this house and she becomes an older bahu, act likes a mistress? The doctor voice cut her thought. The doctor said that she suspect something. She needs to take a test first before the confirmation. She asked everyone to go outside. Ahem looks more tense. He didn't know what to do, how he must behave? Jigarji, you should go to your office. You might getting late. Nahi, Rashi i'll wait until Gopi bhabi is ok. Rashi angry and thought Gopi bhabi Gopi bhabi, huh...Gopi, you really gain everyone's sympathy even from my useless husband. Kokila, don't worry too much, she must be ok. Haan, mota bhabi, i hope so. Chirag and Parag also console kokila since they know that kokila loves Gopi like her own life.Then the doctor comes and asks Who is the patient's husband? it's me, doctor. Ahem answers without hesitation. They all rush to the doctor and follow her to where Gopi lying in her bed in unconsciousness state again. Doctor smiles and shakes Ahem's hand. Congratulation, you just become a father. Your wife is pregnant about a month. Everyone is really really surprised. Rashi face is worth watching. She just opens her mouth in the state that it is unbelievable. She almost faint. Her face is like burning. She knows that Gohem relationship is getting better but she didn't know that it turns out to be so serious like this. Kokila, Parag, Chirag, Hetal, Jigar stood still in shocked. Ahem think what? Am i becoming a father? really? he almost can't believe it. He smiles to the doctor and Thank you doctor. The doctor continues that Mr Ahem Modi, make sure that your wife take a lot of rest and eat a lot of healthy food. She may get angry so easily during her pregnancy, so you all should take care of her and don't over work her or make her feel depressed. Ok that's all. If you have any problems, you can contact me later. The doctor leaves, Chirag and Parag follow her outside and say a big thank you to the doctor. Back in Gohem room, Ahem walks slowly but steadily to the bed and sit beside her. He holds her hand softly and gently. He looks at her just like she is an apple of his eye. He didn't say anything. He just has a huge smile but a true smile that he has never show before. Kokila and Hetal see Ahem's behavior like this. They also smile looking at each other. This behavior just confirmed already that Gopi and Ahem really consummate their marriage already. Mota bhabi, we are becoming nani. I'm so blessed. Haan, kokila i'm so excited too. They both shed tears in happiness. Suddenly Rashi open her big mouth said: How comes Gopi is pregnant so soon? Are you sure Ahem jiju? Ahem stares at Rashi angrily. He said sternly and angrily: Rashi, please make sure you understand that she is my wife. I repeat it again: Gopi is my wife. Rashi is so scared at Ahem's behavior too. She looks down. Kokila sigh Rashi, Don't you know how to think about something good rather than this stupid ideas. Go do your work. From now on, Gopi is not allowed in the kitchen. You may know it. Ji, kakiji. Then She ran to the kitchen. The high voice of Ahem and kokila seems to distract Gopi from her sleeping. She gains consciousness. She looks everywhere. She sees kokila, Hetal, Jigar, and then the one who sit beside her holding her right hand, it's her Ahemji. Everyone smiles widely at her. She is confused. She tries to sit and Ahem helps her. Gopi blushed of Ahem's sweetness. But come to the real world so soon. She asked what happen to me? why am i on the bed? Ahemji, Devarji, you don't go to the office? Everyone keeps smiling. Ahem caress her hand. Bhabi, i guess Ahem bhai don't want to go to the office today since he don't want to leave you and...Gopi blushed, Devarji what do u mean? and what? Kokila walks to another side of the bed and give her a motherly hug. Gopi vau, I hope in the near future, you can give this warm hug to your kid too. Gopi still don't get the answer. She loves when her maaji say the word kid since she loves children but she still clueless of what happened to her. Hetal smiles and says Gopi dikra, you are becoming a mother soon. You are pregnant for about a month. Gopi surprised and blushed. She looks at Ahem. Ahem is still holding her hand. They both looks at each other lovingly and forget about the real world. They are becoming parents soon. After seeing this cute eye lock, Ahem bhai, you stay here with bhabi, i'm going to the office with papa. Don't worry about the work. Thank you, jigar. Nahi, Ahemji you should go with devarji. I am ok. Oh but what about school. Gopi, you don't have to worry about school. you can take rest at home. I'll teach you whenever you want. You may go back to school after you are strong again after your delivery date. Ahemji, you should go. I'll take rest. Haan, Ahem dikra don't worry. I'll look after Gopi vau but make sure that you hurry to come home after work. Ji, mom. Ahem looks at Gopi as he didn't want to leave her but he have to since he has a lot of meeting. At the Modi enterprise office, Ahem can't concentrate on his works. All he think is Gopi and their child. He came home earlier that day.

Part 2:

In Rashi bedroom, Mummy, what are you doing? why are you so late to answer? Haan Rashi dikra, you know that this choti kagari ( kinjal ) always get me on my nerves. She just eat my brain. Arrey, what about that Gopi gawar and her kid? Mummy, i don't know what to do. I can't even approach her properly. That kagari always with her bahu all the times. Don't worry dikra, i have a new kalakari. What kalakari mummy? You should get rid of her child. Make sure that you can make her miscarriage. What???Mummy? I can't do that. It is criminal. I don't wanna kill human. He/She just a child. Rashi, what happen to you? Listen dikra, She is pregnant and her child will become a heir of Modi bhawan. If you don't want that happen. You just do what i say. understood? But Mummy? But what? Nahi, i'll try. Jay shri krishna.

Rashi tries to approach Gopi all the time. And today kokila and Hetal is not at home, they leave since the afternoon to prepare veneration at one of their old friend's house. Gopi promised that she won't do anything hard. She will only cut vegetables for dinner and look after the mandir. Kokila agree but looks at Rashi in a state that it's a warning for Rashi. They both left. In the evening, Gopi cutting the vegetables on the dinning tables. Suddenly a phone rings. She answers it. Jay shri krishna! Hello, Gopi. Ji, Ahemji. What's the matter, Ahemji? Did you eat? Ji. Don't do anything serious ok? Ji. I'm worried. I'll be back soon. Ji, i'm waiting. They hung up the phone. Gopi has a very long flashback. She smiles.

Gopi's flashback ( 1 month ago )

Kanaji please help me. I don't want to fail this test. I must pass it with 100%. I don't want Ahemji to get angry with me again. After she see the exam paper, she felt relieved. Her Ahemji teach her everything and the test seemed to be covered with every lessons Ahemji teach her. At the school front door, Ahem is waiting Gopi outside. He is so anxious. He wants her to get education for sure because it is her wish and desire. Today the result will be released. The bell rang as it's the time to go home. Gopi came out of school. She saw Ahem waiting her outside. She was very happy beyond imagination. It's the first time, he waited for her. Ahem leaning beside the car, he saw Gopi. He approach her. How was your result? Gopi smiles happily. she is so excited. She show Ahem her exam paper. Ahem saw it. 100%. He suddenly hugs her so hard. He seems to be too excited. Gopi is so shocked beyond word and blushed. Gopi i told you that if you try you will pass with this result. Thank you Ahemji. Gopi felt that everyone started to look at them. He pushed Ahem lightly and said Ahemji, everyone is looking at us. Ahem released her and they both went to car without saying anything. They both glance at each other shyly on the way to their house. That day, Gopi cleaning their room and she found a diary. It belongs to Ahem. At first, she didn't know what it is. But she decided to practice her reading skill. She tried to read it. From the very first page, she saw a picture of Ahem and Anita. She almost faint. She read everything here from page 1, page 2 until page 15...she couldn't continue it. It doesn't mean that she couldn't understand but from one page to one page, she felt like a single words in this diary are needles. The more she read, the more she hurt. She couldn't control her tear running down on her face. It is falling down like a waterfall. Ahemji loves Anitaji so much. I shouldn't interfere in their love. Suddenly, Ahem came to the room. He saw Gopi holding his diary. He is so shocked, she may read it all. What should i do? He afraid to learn it. Gopi saw him. She was hurt, very hurt. She forgot all her fear and walk to Ahem and said i'm sorry Ahemji, i found your diary accidentally. I'm sorry that i'm the third person in your life. You love Anitaji so much. You shouldn't have married me. Please forgive me. I know you have never ever loved me. You can go back to Anitaji and live with her happily. She forced herself to make a fake smile. I am happy if you are happy. I can sign a divorce paper, then i'll leave this house. Thanks for everything you gave me especially your teaching. Thanks so much Ahemji. Ahem is so afraid. Finally this day comes. But he is so curious whether Gopi read everything in his diary. It contains more than 50. Then he realized that she may read only a few pages in the front. He said: Gopi who say that i don't love you? who said that? Ahemji, you love Anitaji. It just in the past Gopi. Gopi how many page you read here? Gopi is so clueless. It's about 15 pages. What? you didn't finish it? He thought that it's time for him to confess his feeling for her before any misunderstanding. He takes his diary book from her hand. And open to the remaining pages that she hadn't read. Read it Gopi. Gopi had no mood to read because she don't want to get hurt again. But she had to since it's her Ahemji wish. What? She was so shocked. He loves her. He wrote that he loves Gopi. He loves Gopi Ahem Modi. He loves his wife more than his life. He wrote that Anita is just in the past. He couldn't control his emotion to his wife. He felt so shy to confess his love for his wife so at least he could write it here and decided to tell her later. He wrote that his wife is like a gem, she is innocent, she is a sweet person, she is a simple one, she loves me and my family more than her life, she saved me from snake, she made my family proud in this community, she sacrificed herself for the sake of everyone she...she did everything. He can't live without her... Gopi cried so hard. She couldn't believe it. Ahem take his diary back put in the same place. He hugs her and comfort her. Gopi, i'm so sorry. I am not a good husband for you. Please forgive me. I never realized my love for you before. Please don't ever leave me. I love you. Please give me a chance to be a good husband for you. Gopi didn't say anything. She loves him too. He know it. She hugs him back tightly and cries out her heart. What happened that night, she never forget. It's a wonderful night for them. When thinking about that night, she blushed again..

Gopi!!! Rashi voice cut her from her flashback. Ji, Rashi ben. Gopi have you finished cutting vegetables? Ji, Rashi ben, i almost finish. Ok come here. But Rashi ben, maaji don't allow me enter the kitchen. Just come here, u don't do anything serious. Just help me what should i do in this soup. Ji, Rashi ben. I'll go. Gopi walks slowly, she almost reach the kitchen door but suddenly, Gopi stop!!!! Gopi stop in surprised. It's Ahemji who ask her to stop. Ahem rushed toward her. His left hand hold her upper-arm, his right hand is on her waist. He said to her softly. Gopi, don't you see that there is water on the floor in front of the door? What if i'm not here? What if you slip, what happen to you and our baby? Whenever he said the word our baby, she always blushed. Gopi see the water, she is afraid too. Thank you Ahemji. I will pay more attention to it. Godd that you are ok. Rashi! Ji, Ahem jiju. What happen to you? why are you so careless? Please wipe the water here before anyone in the house get injure. Ahem carry her in his arm to their bedroom. He put her on the bed, and sit beside her. He hugs her lightly because he don't want to hurt her and their baby. Ahemji, Am i dreaming? A single tear fell on her face. Ahem wipe it softly. He loves her indeed. Gopi you are not dreaming. You are with your husband and your child. They both hug each other in happiness.

Rashi is so angry. Mummy, you know? Ahem jiju save Gopi gawar this time. What should i do next? Don't worry Rashi dikra. It is just the start. I repeat it again. It is just a start.

I decided to stop from here as i don't have any kalakari to continue next. Anyone interest can continue it and don't forget to seperate in to part. Thanks for reading.and please comment here. For silent readers Please click a like button for appreciation.


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Posted: 13 years ago
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too emtion to read it but plzzz don;t make heart breaking to read i had this dream about last night and iv was in tear all night
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😊 You fleshed out the idea. 🤗
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Originally posted by: sam990

too emtion to read it but plzzz don;t make heart breaking to read i had this dream about last night and iv was in tear all night

yeah i hope the next writer don't make us heat broken too...😊
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nice one dear. I always thinks this in real sns. Urmi is so evil i think she wil stoop so low to make gopi hurt.

but i say u should continue this, try to do some parts more, how knows what wil ur brain wil bring.

U wrote a good begining. i think we can expect some more.

First try it ,

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Originally posted by: Nafisa_blossoms

😊 You fleshed out the idea. 🤗

😃😆 thanks Nafisa for the ideas. I spent like 5 hours to write it. I'm feeling so exausted..haha this is my first attempt. I hope it will work😳
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Originally posted by: shaina.sharma

nice one dear. I always thinks this in real sns. Urmi is so evil i think she wil stoop so low to make gopi hurt.

but i say u should continue this, try to do some parts more, how knows what wil ur brain wil bring.

U wrote a good begining. i think we can expect some more.

First try it ,

I hope to continue too but i can't since. I will have a big exam in the upcoming week. I will become a sophomore in other words 2nd year student in University soon. My first day is 19th September. I don't think i will have time to continue it...i'm so sorry
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very nice.can't even imagine.plz continue.

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Originally posted by: kaka.lg

I hope to continue too but i can't since. I will have a big exam in the upcoming week. I will become a sophomore in other words 2nd year student in University soon. My first day is 19th September. I don't think i will have time to continue it...i'm so sorry

dont be sorry dear. if that the reason dont worry ur legacy wil be continued. Wish u luck

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Originally posted by: kaka.lg

😃😆 thanks Nafisa for the ideas. I spent like 5 hours to write it. I'm feeling so exausted..haha this is my first attempt. I hope it will work😳


Really wow...congratulations on your first fan fic.👍🏼

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