FF continuation (Gohem love) (part 1&2) - Page 5

Originally posted by: kaka.lg

ok, ok...i got it😆 will try to read your first fan fic soon , then i will steal some technique from you..😆 well i have a reason for not include comedy in the first part. I want to focus more about Gohem and provide a suitable and acceptable moment of them without losing their characters. That's why i said that the next part start with the next kalakari which is either comedy or harmful. So let's see it when i someone update the next part.😛

Originally posted by: Nafisa_blossoms

Please don't steal my technique, or I will have to dishum bushum you..., as I do with Ayesha.

oop sorry dear...i'm just kidding. In fact, i have read your first ff already but i forgot. I got your point. You want Gopi to be stronger and involve in business..Sorry dear, i won't steal your technique, i don't mean it. Don't take it so serious.. please...😭

Originally posted by: kaka.lg

oop sorry dear...i'm just kidding. In fact, i have read your first ff already but i forgot. I got your point. You want Gopi to be stronger and involve in business..Sorry dear, i won't steal your technique, i don't mean it. Don't take it so serious.. please...😭

Hay Monyka it is awesome..n yup i'm finally free to comment..
n ok i might repeat some of the stuff every1 has said..but this truly seems like such a natural conversion when considering the real characteristics of each person in the story..
aw abt the very sweet development b/w out darling Gopi n Aham..u know the saying that 'the silent types are the ones that might surprise u!!!' ..seems that turned out true!!😉

aww i'll really love if this happens after the study track n real too..😍(ok ok that is almost impossible cz it's too much too soon in SNS standards!)

n i love that in ur story Aham is turning really sweet n protective towards gopi cz i always thought that the very natural transition of Aham's character would be to be extremely tender n caring to gopi once the barriers created through misunderstandings are cleared out..so this seemed to be just perfect in ur FF!!❤️
aww i love when he scream at Rashi!! how i wish he'll do that these days n SNS too..

n i thought the flashback was very cute!! ooh i hope she gets a real 🤗from her beloved Aham when she passes the exam next week!! (i'm pretty sure she'll pass so..)

so finally i wanna know more about the story!! do write when u have time..i can imagine how tough n busy ts when doing 2 degrees at once!.cz time is my biggest problem too..i'm n Uni 3rd yr- middle f 2nd semester, so college during the week, plus weekend 1 more..so well i can't promise anything..specially z i have never written a FF b4..n also cz f the time..
anyway just wanna say for a 1st attempt u are amazing!!! keep it upi loved reading it!!⭐️

finally sweety thanx 4 the compliment n best of luck with ur studies🤗

Originally posted by: princessunara

Hay Monyka it is awesome..n yup i'm finally free to comment..
n ok i might repeat some of the stuff every1 has said..but this truly seems like such a natural conversion when considering the real characteristics of each person in the story..
aw abt the very sweet development b/w out darling Gopi n Aham..u know the saying that 'the silent types are the ones that might surprise u!!!' ..seems that turned out true!!😉

aww i'll really love if this happens after the study track n real too..😍(ok ok that is almost impossible cz it's too much too soon in SNS standards!)

n i love that in ur story Aham is turning really sweet n protective towards gopi cz i always thought that the very natural transition of Aham's character would be to be extremely tender n caring to gopi once the barriers created through misunderstandings are cleared out..so this seemed to be just perfect in ur FF!!❤️
aww i love when he scream at Rashi!! how i wish he'll do that these days n SNS too..

n i thought the flashback was very cute!! ooh i hope she gets a real 🤗from her beloved Aham when she passes the exam next week!! (i'm pretty sure she'll pass so..)

so finally i wanna know more about the story!! do write when u have time..i can imagine how tough n busy ts when doing 2 degrees at once!.cz time is my biggest problem too..i'm n Uni 3rd yr- middle f 2nd semester, so college during the week, plus weekend 1 more..so well i can't promise anything..specially z i have never written a FF b4..n also cz f the time..
anyway just wanna say for a 1st attempt u are amazing!!! keep it upi loved reading it!!⭐️

finally sweety thanx 4 the compliment n best of luck with ur studies🤗

Dear Sunara, you just made me feel so fresh and excited with your sweet comment. 😳Talk about SNS, I do hope that it will happen similar to this FF if not the same and wish that CV won't spoil it especially Ahem's behavior to Gopi. ❤️Finger crossed to the positive progress of our beloved SNS. Talk about this FF, I will try my best to log in everyday even i am busy since i miss all of saathiyans and their enjoyable comments. I really hope that if you have time, you can try to continue this FF too. Sometimes it's fun to do it. I will try my best to write more if i can...Thanks and Best of luck with your study too, dear🤗

enjoy to read this piece of profound beautiful writing...hmmm,i think it touches all the bottom of the readers' hearts indeed 😉

hearty-writing.i like it.hope u continue.

Originally posted by: pichvateypichva

hearty-writing.i like it.hope u continue.

thanks for ur compliment, dear... 😳

Originally posted by: bhavya

hey nice part dear...

thanks Bhavya...hope u will write the next part ;-)