FF continuation (Gohem love) (part 1&2) - Page 4

Originally posted by: kaka.lg

I think that my writing may be a little bit boring since i didn't show comedy in it. But i have try my best to make sure that the characters are still the same. Their behavior must be the same in the serial. As we know besides Urshi's stupid kalakari, there is no comedy at all in Saathiya and the Modi parivaar seems to have class and protocol. So i hope that my starting in this FF have a possibility to happen the serial since it is acceptable and it's not out of character. By the way, thanks for your analyzing..😳

Nice one..👏 pls continue it ...am waiting for the next part...

Originally posted by: swasthi

I am no expert at comedy too so somebody will bring in their angle on the comedy parts.

Originally posted by: swasthi

I am no expert at comedy too so somebody will bring in their angle on the comedy parts.

i think this FF will survive if someone wish to continue it. I don't care whether it is comedy or romance...for me, i prefer the touching one.☺️

Originally posted by: gohem123

Nice one..👏 pls continue it ...am waiting for the next part...

😃 i am waiting for the next part too😆

Originally posted by: kaka.lg

😃 i am waiting for the next part too😆

Originally posted by: kaka.lg

i think this FF will survive if someone wish to continue it. I don't care whether it is comedy or romance...for me, i prefer the touching one.☺️

😕😛

Originally posted by: Nafisa_blossoms

Don't worry, if I'm feeling inspired I will write the comedy parts or someone else will Monyka.

Monyka, the Urshi duo are funny in Saathiya (remember Gopi's party, and other times Urmila calling herself Tees Maar Khan, Aishwarya Rai etc) Rashi being beaten up and the phone conversation to her mum telling her that baachi Gopi has beaten me up soo much, Aham when angry is funny, pursing his lips, the way his look changes. Even kokila's dialogues the ones she uses again and again are enjoyable.

I actually think of Saathiya as a comedy. Light entertainment.

Monyka you are a different sort of writer, you didn't use comedy in your first fan fic, but many on this forum don't either. Hopefully though with some examples of comedy in the show I have shown you in the middle there, you will start looking out for comedy that you can use later when you write ff's. Okay mate.

well Nafisa..that's a really important lecture from you. Thank you.😳 you know, i also found that the rat catching scene is so hilarious. This mother daughter duo is really entertaining sometimes. I think Saathiya brings us a diverse type of scenes which let us crying like hell😭, frustration and anger 😡, confusion and curiosity 😕, sleepy and shocked 🥱😲 laughing out loud🤣, blushing like a red chilli☺️😳, smiling in excitement 😊😛, enjoying in lala land, forgetting the real world❤️. So we give them a round applause👏 and thump up👍🏼

Originally posted by: kaka.lg

😕😛 well Nafisa..that's a really important lecture from you. Thank you.😳 you know, i also found that the rat catching scene is so hilarious. This mother daughter duo is really entertaining sometimes. I think Saathiya brings us a diverse type of scenes which let us crying like hell😭, frustration and anger 😡, confusion and curiosity 😕, sleepy and shocked 🥱😲 laughing out loud🤣, blushing like a red chilli☺️😳, smiling in excitement 😊😛, enjoying in lala land, forgetting the real world❤️. So we give them a round applause👏 and thump up👍🏼

Originally posted by: Nafisa_blossoms

😆😆 I know because you waiting for someone to take it up and bring part 2...lol

Anyway I went to dig up my first fan fic...here it is https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/saath-nibhaana-saathiya/1626702/os-aham-accepts-gopi

(and it has comedy moments but also touching moments, I'm not saying everyone likes comedy okay.)

ok, ok...i got it😆 will try to read your first fan fic soon , then i will steal some technique from you..😆 well i have a reason for not include comedy in the first part. I want to focus more about Gohem and provide a suitable and acceptable moment of them without losing their characters. That's why i said that the next part start with the next kalakari which is either comedy or harmful. So let's see it when i someone update the next part.😛