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kajal

@imkt

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

friends starting a new ff hope this time i will get ur appreciation, i have written many times on saathiya forums but i didnt got any love from my friends...hence thought to start again...hope this time i will be get ur love frnds...

gopi puts down the phone down... gopi thinks that how should i say maaji about my birthday and here rashi thinks that how i will stop gopi to tell her birthday to kagadi.. gopi goes to kitchen where hetal and kokila are doing their works...gopi comes and sees kokila.she walks slowly...

kokila: gopi vahu tum jaldi aao aur yeh chai ahem ko dedo

gopi: ji maaji {she thinks}

kokila: kya hua gopi vahu kya soch rahi ho

gopi touches her feet and hetal feet also...both are surprised...

hetal: gopi dikra jeeti raho lakin kya baat hai yu achank sey

kokila: ha gopi vahi su chey

hetal: bol na beta

gopi: kaki aur maaji aaj woh aaj

kokila: woh aaj kya gopi vahu

gopi: woh aaj mera janamdin hai

kokila:kya gopi vahu aur tum humhey ab bata rahi ho

hetal: yeh toh bahut khushi ki baat hai ki is subh avasar par tumara janamdin hai kyu kokila

kokila: janamdin ki bahut bahut badaahi ho gopi vahu...

gopi: bahut bahut dhanywaad maaji...

kokila: kya ahem ko pata hai

gopi: nahi maaji

friends i will continue soon if u like it please comment and press like

thanks a lot

love u kajal

Edited by stary_kajal - 14 years ago

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ANJ4

@ANJ4

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

i like it , but my hindi is not that good , so it really take a long time for me to read it. may in english please

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641345

Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

thanks for this FF but the reason that u didn't get a lot of appreciation because u write dialogue in Hindi. and i' cannot understand Hindi, so how can non hindi speaking fans understand ur whole FF. It is a reason. Please I' request u to write dialogue in English. please

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Filmyarchu

@Filmyarchu

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

kajol it's very nice pls continue i am looking forward for it and please when it comes to gopi ahem pls make it really romantic . 😆

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Raunika

@rsk16

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

This was very nice and amazing.👍🏼Great job.

Do continue soon.

Really want to know how Ahem will find out.

Raunika

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vaishali

@vaishali667

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

hey this is fabulous ff this part is amazing part do update next part soon

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swasthi

@swasthi

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

What a great start. Please do continue.

Would want to know Ahem's reaction.

What will the family do to celebrate Gopi's birthday?

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-Nafisa-

@-Nafisa-

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

"friends starting a new ff hope this time i will get ur appreciation, i have written many times on saathiya forums but i didnt got any love from my friends...hence thought to start again...hope this time i will be get ur love frnds..."

Here is the love babe. 🤗 I like you ff, one request please write in English, Hindi is not my first language, and I understand but with too much thinking and the forum is supposed to be easy reading mate. I will make you a promise if you write in English, I will like all your ff's hows that?

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Simibrar

@simibrar1990

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

awesome👏 post dear...😃 very nice story...👍🏼 thanks for sharing...write more please...😃

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shajnaii

@shajnaii

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#10

this FF is soo beautifull...

i also know hindhi a little bit...it will be better if u write in english..

im sure everybody willl love it...

pls continue sooon..

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