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Posted: 14 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Priyakna

kajol it's very nice pls continue thank you so much i am looking forward for it and please when it comes to gopi ahem pls make it really romantic yes dear i will update today, dont worry and enjoy. 😆

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nafisa_blossoms

Great update thanks for making it in English.thank you so much dear... 👍🏼

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: anushini

really very niceee👏.thank you dear so much.. thanks for updatin in english yes i will dear...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART-2

ahem was shocked to listen this that today is gopi birthday...

ahem was very angry...

ahem {shouts}: gopi gopi

kokila {shocked}: what happened ahem dikra {son} why are you shouting like this...

gopi comes and put his pallu on her head.. ahem comes to him and holds his hands and twitch her to his room and kokila was worried and gopi was scared...he pushed her to bed... he locked the door..gopi stands up and sees ahem she wipes her tears... he took his steps towards gopi and gopi was moving back until she arrive at wall. she stops there and looks here and there..ahem comes to her...he saw her eyes who were in tears and her lips who where trembling..ahem sees her both have a eye lock...ahem takes a step back...and turns

ahem: tell me gopi am i so bad?

gopi looks at him...

ahem: am i so bad gopi that i dont know that today is my wife birthday..

gopi: its not like that

ahem: then what is there then..{he shouts}

gopi: i want to tell you but i was not able to say...

ahem: great then when you will learn to say when you will get old...

gopi {in tears}: actually i am not able to express my feelings ahem ji...

ahem: then you have to gopi because no one will understand what you really wanna say...

gopi: hmm i will try ahem ji

ahem: good by the way happy birthday gopi ji...

gopi smiles and looks at ahem...ahem wipes his tears..

gopi {smiles}: thank you ahem ji

ahem: so gopi ji what do you want in your birthday

{bg music of ahem and gopi la la la}

gopi couldn't believe that ahem was actually asking him for his birthday gift...

gopi: actually...

ahem: yes say it

gopi: you wished me happy birthday, i got my birthday gift { she goes from there...}

ahem turns and looks at going gopi and gopi was smiling and ahem was looking at going gopi from her back...

she comes down and sees the decoration all of them wishes happy birthday gopi...ahem also comes down...gopi was very happy...gopi comes and takes blessing from kokila and hetal then parag and chirag... jigar comes

jigar: bhabi wish you a very happy birthday

gopi: thank you devar ji {brother-in-law}

jigar comes back from her...and eyes fold with a black cloth...gopi puts hands on clothes

gopi: devar ji what is this? what are you doing?

jigar: well gopi bhabi we have a surprise for you?

ahem sees this and looks at kokila. kokila was looking at rashi and comes to her

kokila: what happened rashi? you didn't wished gopi your sister happy birthday...

rashi : no kaki ji i was about to but you know jigar and his plan...

jigar takes gopi to hall and remove the cloth...the lights were off and hetal brings birthday cake...gopi smiles and looks at kokila. kokila also smiles..ahem was seeing gopi...lights on... gopi hugs kokila...


gopi: mom, i never celebrated my birthday since my childhood.. but this was the precious gift i got from my family...

rashi makes a fake smile...rashi comes and hugs her...

rashi: happy birthday gopi...

gopi: thank you rashiben

everyone gives her gift...accept ahem...

kokila: ahem will you not give gopi vahu any gift

ahem: yes mom...

gopi looks at ahem...

ahem: i want you to remove this pallu, no need to put pallu infront of me from today, this time...

everyone is shocked, rashi mouth was open and hetal, jigar, chirag, parag and kokila was smiling...gopi looks at ahem with smiling face and ahem also gives her a smiles...

so friends here i end hope you will enjoy




Edited by stary_kajal - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nafisa_blossoms

"friends starting a new ff hope this time i will get ur appreciation, i have written many times on saathiya forums but i didnt got any love from my friends...hence thought to start again...hope this time i will be get ur love frnds..."

Here is the love babe. 🤗 thank you so much dear I like you ff, one request please write in English, yeah dear i have started that, no need to worry Hindi is not my first language, and I understand but with too much thinking and the forum is supposed to be easy reading mate. I will make you a promise if you write in English, I will like all your ff's hows that? oh dear thanks a lot

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Posted: 14 years ago
#26

Don't feel like that, Your fan fic is very good.

I like Aham's line...Gopi I'm I so bad (deep down I am feeling yes you are, why do you have to wait for your wife to tell you it's her birthday you should have asked her, especially after she made a big deal out of your birthday a few months back). But it was a sweet line, very concerned what she thinks about him.

Also lots of other good lines in the ff, please keep the pace up with the updates, thanks.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow! this part is just fabulous amazing cant wait for next part ahem gif was amazing
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Really liked this part. keep going.especially Ahem's outburst.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
great Update can't wait to read the next part!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
Thankyou for the update ,,, really nice ... how did they findout it is gopi bday.

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