Hum tumhare hain sanam updated part 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
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It's a very dark night and it might probably rain but who knew that two love birds will meet their and won't be able to forget each other

It's 1:00 at night and there isn't anyone on the road , it's really foggy all over the place but there's a car coming the guy inside the car can't see anything due to the fog and is driving very slowly but he hits something and doesn't know what it is
he gets out of the car and sees a girl on the road and is unconsious , she was drunk ,
he got really scared and took her with him cz he had no other choice
he reaches the modi mansion and everyone is waiting for him
they're all worried
he opens the door and everybody comes running and saying ahem ahem
kokila ahem mom : where were you ??? ( didn't notice the girl)
and ask him wht is this who's this girl
ahem: mom I don't who she is but i think I hit her with my car thank god she is not hurt
kokila : ahem u should be carefull at night
ahem: I know mom but I couldn't see anything

Girl : in her sleep screaming PLEASE DONT LEAVE ME , i promise I would never do anything again she kept on repeating that
all of the family looked at her she was so pale
beautiful and hurt at the same time
kokila : bechari larki pata nahi Kya hua hoga iske saath
hetal : Hain kokila per is waqt isko guest room mein rakh ao
ahem takes her to the guest while he was taking her she kept on repeating it again and again
he got very worried
he kept on noticing her ( ahem's self thought )
omg she is so beautiful ... Look at her face so innocent and soft
I don't think there is a girl like her in the world she is outstanding

He puts her on the bed and puts blanket on her and leaves

What do you guys think who she is talking about in her sleep ?? Will Ahem and her ever meet again???
Will he find out about her life ??And what will happen when she wakes up

Please comment :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Guys I might as well update the next part right now cz I won't have time Tommorow to do it so here we go !!

Next morning the girl wakes and sees her watch it's 9:00 clock in the morning she thinks she's at her house but when opens her eyes .. Shocked
she's nervous and thinking to her self where I'm I ?? , what I'm I doing here ?? Whts going on ?
She gets up and sees a mirror at the corner
girl: omg I look like a mess
looks around and sees a washroom , she goes to washroom and gets ready
she slowly opens the rooms door and sees people a guy walking up to the door
she closes it really fast and is very scared she then thinks to her herself omg what About rashi I wasn't home all night
omg she starts freaking out
she opens the door and sees ahem standing there
they both get lost in each others eyes
ahem thinking ( there's so much pain in her eyes , it's as If she's been through alot )
girl : I'm sorry I'm very very sorry
ahem: it's okie , I was just coming to wake u up
how do you feel ?
Girl : I feel better but I don't remember anything at all , where I'm I ?
Ahem : oh sorry I forgot to introduce myself
hi my name is ahem modi , you must have heard it
actually your at my house you got hut by my car last night so I brought you here
girl : oh okie my name is gopi shah
Ahem shocked
your miss gopi shah , your the one who is the owner of shah industries
gopi smiles : yes that's me
but sorry to disturb you can you please drop me home , my sister would be worried
ahem: yeah sure I'll drop you
both coming down the stairs
ahem goes to his mom and tells her she is gopi shah
kokila goes to gopi and asks her what she was doing so late at night outside and drunk
gopi who was smiling becomes sad and has a tear in her eyes .
Everyone is standing there looking at her kinda crying
kokila : I'm sorry if your hurt I was just curious
gopi: no it's okie aunty .. I was just lost In my world last night
I didn't go to the office I was out all day
trying to setisfy my self , actually Its a Long story
kokila: okie
ahem: mom I'm gonna drop her home
kokila: theek Che dikra
gopi takes everyones blessing and thankz them
they both leave

Kokila: there is something about this girl taht is making me go closer to her
hetal : hain kokila there is something ... Did you see her eyes they were filled with sadness , pain and not a little happiness
bechari don't know what she must've been through
ahem takes gopi to her house
gopi's watchmen opens the gate and some girl is running from the house
gopi opens the car door befor she could close it the girl starts hugging her
gopi: rashi rashi I'm fine
rashi: didi kahan chali gai thi app, I couldn't stop crying , I thought you left me like mama papa
gopi becomes sad again but gets a hold of herself and smiles
gopi: rashi I would never leave my little sister .. I was just busy with some clients that's It
ahem thinking to himself : why is she lying when she was drunk
rashi: yeah right mujhe pata hai ke app Kya kar rahi thi
how many times do I hve to tell you to stop drinking whenever your sad .. Talk to me about it didi , I know how hurt you are .
Gopi: haha it's nothing rashi why would I be hurt
rashi then notices ahem
didi that's ahem modi right jigar ji ka cousin
ahem wonder how does she knows jigar
then he gets a flashback of jigar talking about some girl named rashi how they were going to get engaged next week
ahem: oh so your rashi shah jigars home wali biwi
rashi shying: yes I'm rashi
gopi invites him for breakfast but ahem had to go to the office

WoW who knew that they were gonna be in a family relationship now . That means they get to see each other more
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey that was very nice ... and i want to know why gopi is drinking
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thank u can't wait for next part plzzz
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Here's part 3
guys I will be updating many parts at the same time of I get time so don't mind :)
enjoy

Preperation for Rashi an jigars engagment is goin on in the modi and shah house , everybody is very busy but as the day ends they all come together for dinner
ahem comes home , freshens up and comes to the dinning table as well as everyone does
kokila asks ahem If everything was alright and gopi's parents didn't say anything to her
ahem: mom i only saw her sister , who was crying so much plus she was saying something like I thought you were going to leave me like mama papa did .. I guess something happend to their parents
jigar sitting and listening
ahem: jigar do you know gopi is actually rashi's sister
jigar: no way bhae
ahem: yeah I met her today and she was talking about you
jigar: really , I heard rashi sometimes telling me about her sister , how she can't live without her
she told me how their parents died when her sister was only 19 and how she had to take care of Rashi and their younger sister panna (guys I made panna her younger sister ) who was only 5 years old when they passed away .. She told me they're were many responsiblities on her buisness , us , many more
but she was brave enough to do it all
jigar: but bhae I think she was hiding something else from me that day which was even more painfull for her sister
ahem: oh wow she has been though alot
everyone in the family are very sad after hearing gopi's story
they all finish their dinner and go to their rooms

It was 11:00 at night and ahem couldn't go to sleep cz whenever he closed his eyes he would see gopi
ahem: what's wrong with me why I'm a seeing gopi's face
but eventually falls asleep
next day all the mens go to office and from shah house gopi goes to office
gopi straight goes to her office and calls her secretary who was an old lady , which gopi really respects
gopi: aunty can you call rucha please I have to talk to her
secretary: sure gopi beta
gopi loved it when she calls her beta , it reminds her of her parents
rucha: ma'am did you call me
gopi serious now
yes miss rucha , please have a seat
rucha nervouse now
let's see where to start from miss rucha
okie here we go so I have been noticing you for past 2 weeks miss rucha , you seem to be lost somewhere else
gopi really furious start shouting at rucha
gopi: listen to me this is a proffesional work
I pay you for working here not for flirting around with guys
everytime I see you, your either flirting with your co-workers or either your fixing yourself, which I do not like
rucha: ma'am I'm sorry , I will never do this again
gopi : ofcourse you'll never do this again because you'll never get the chance , miss rucha I am firing you from this office
get out
rucha goes outside crying everyone is staring at her
gopi goes outside and shouts if anyone who comes here to flirt around and not work I suggest get out of here before I do it by myself an leaves
ahem who was standing there the whole time is impressed at gopi for what she did
he goes to the front desk and tells the lady I'm here to meet gopi shah , my name is ahem modi
secretary calls her and tells her someone name ahem modi is here to meet you , should I send him
gopi: yes please
ahem comes in her cabin
gopi: oh hi mr ahem
ahem: hi miss gopi , I was just here to let you know that we were all going shopping for the engagment today afternoon and mom pleased that if you could come along with us plus rashi
gopi: oh that's very nice of your mom , sure we'll be there
but what time ???
Ahem: about 4:00 clock if you don't mind
gopi: no I don't mind .. We'll e there

What happens next when they go for shopping ?? , who will gopi meet at the mall ?? And who will rashi slap ??
Stay tuned lol that's what some people say
please don't forget to comment :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Realy nice can't wait for the next part!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oooh Rashi's going to slap someone? Really like your story and I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very good fan fic, well done 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sorry guys but I will try my best to update soon ... I actually did update but I guess it didn't work but I will try my best as I'm busy with my exams :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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so here's the next part
sorry guys for late update
part 4
gopi calls rashi and tells her too meet her at the mall since it will take a lot of time if gopi comes home so they both go seperately
in the mall all modi members are waiting for them
ahem who was about to call gopi but saw here coming inside the mall so he calls his family
gopi comes and takes everyones blessing
kokila and hetal: kaisi ho dikra
Gopi: mein theek hoon kakijii app kaise hai
kokila and hetal : theek hain hum
kokila: where is rashi isnt she with you?
Gopi: no i told her to meet me at the mall but before she could finish rashi came running
rashi: sorry sorry everyone i got stuck in he trafic and takes everyones blesssing as well
they continue with theyre shopping , kokila and hetal are deciding sari's for gopi and rashi as it is theyre right to give gopi something as well
while gopi was busy loooking at some othere sari's with rashi
ahem who couldnt take off his eyes of gopi cz he knew there was something he felt for gopi because whenever she comes his heart beats really fast
ahem who was staring at gopi suddenly became shocked
some guy tap on gopi shoulder even gopi was shocked to see him
old memories poped up in her head
gopi: Rahul
Rashi turned as well and saw rahul there
rahul hugs gopi , gopi tries to pull herself away everyone of the modi family was watching them
gopi pull backs and slaps rahul really hard and tells him to get out of my life
rahul: gopi listen to me i know i did some stuff but i love you and i cant live wiithout you please
gopi: no mr rahul kapoor you loved my money not me thats why you backstabbed me and plus you were with anothere girl even though we were engaged , i dont believe a shit you say
gopi runs outside of the mall as she couldnt control her tears
everyone was so shocked and wondering who this guy is? and what he means to gopi.
rahul who just turned his face rashi slapped him twice
rashi : 1st slap for using my sister and breaking her heart, she loved you like hell and trusted you the most
2nd one for coming today and ruining the little happiness she had
last but not least get out of her life before i get you arrested again
rahul leaves fuming in anger
all the modi family came to rashi
kokila:rashi what was all this who was this guy ?? and why did you and gopi slapped him
rashi who was bursting into tears couldnt control herself when jigar came and hugged her
all the modi family said that we will do the shopping later , lets go home first and figure out what was going on
all the modi's go to rashi's house because they were worries about gopi
they reach shah mansion and rshi asks her servants if gopi came home or not all of them said no
rashi was worried now as well but before she could do somehting she told all the modi's t sit as she is going to tell them who that guy was
everybody sits and rashi starts her story
rashi: actually that guy was my didi's finace
everyone shocked especially ahem
but he betrrayed her , he was having an another affair and my sister found out about it first she couldnt believe this cz she loved him so much and trusted him blindly but he broke her trust
first she sent a private detective to keep and eye on him as she doesnt want to ruin her life living with this guy
after 3 weeks the private detective gave her all the proof and told her things that made her life hell
he didnt love her he was just playing a game with her so he could get her property , gopi was shocked that he used her
his whole family planned this but the worse part is that rahul is no stranger to us , he was our cousin , gopi was in love with him since childhood
everyone again shocked
kokila: who will do that do their own family.
rashi was crying and saw gopi entering the house so told all the modi's to act normal
gopi came in and saw everyone there and apologized as she ruined they're shopping but kokila told her its okie plus we were about to leave so dont worry
gopi was happy and smiling
part 5 is in the same page :)
enjjoy im about to write part 5
please dont forget to comment

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