Hum tumhare hain sanam updated part 6

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@MereMahiyaa.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Great UpDate can't wait to read what is next!

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love_vampires

@love_vampires

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

part 5

all the modi's go back andits been 5 days since the confrontation between gopi and rahul

its rashi and jigar's engagment everyone is busy even ahem and goopi are

ahem who was talking to someone while backing bacwards as well as gopi but they bumpped into each other and gopi was about to fall when ahem got hold of her they both have an eyelock

rashi jigar and kokila were watching them , they knew that both of them have some feelings for each other but still dont know if its love so they plan to bring them together

but today was rashi's day so they get back to work

gohem who were lost in each others eyes didnt realized the photographer taking they're pictures

they both come back to their senses

everything goes perfectly fine , rashi and gopi were going home when jigar and ahem volunteered to drop them home

pannah who was sleeping in gopi's arm

ahem kept on staring at them , he as smiling so much

next day kokila calls rashi and gopi home as they have to decide they're wedding date , pundit is there waiting for them and tells them the best date for the wedding is either in 2 months or 5 months kokila who thinking about 5 months but jigar and rashi said that they wanted to get married as soon as possible which was 2 months

and so begins the gohem bring toghter plan of kokila jigar and rashi

its been 2 days and they're still thinking baout how to bring them together

rashi tells them the plana dn both jigar and kokila liked it

next day kokila call ahem and gopi both of them

kokila: i have called both of you since you both have to do a favour for me

ahem and gopi : but what is the favour ?

kokila : you both have to go to delhi for 4 days and get some things that you can only get from there

ahema nd gopi stare at each other

gopi and ahem go to delhi

it was raining very badly but gopi who really loves rain told ahem to stop the car and went outside

ahem was trying to stop her but couldnt

gopi was so happy , ahem couldnt take his eyes off her

gopi was jumping up and down and going on circles

ahem opens his side of the car door and goes outside

and gets a hold of gopi's hand brings her closer to his bodies

gopi and ahem both lost in theyre world ahem moves gopi's hair infront and touches her back and kissed her neck he was about to kiss her lips when both ahem and gopi came back to their senses

for the moment they both felt awkward standing there

so ahem and gopi go to theyre hotel

the repitionsit takes them to theyre room

gopi: so this is ahem's room where is mine?

resespiniost : there only one room booked and we dont have any other room as theyre already booked

reseptiniiost leaves

ahema nd gopi starting at each other

ahem: umm you sleep on the bed i'll sleep on the sofa

they both agree and get changed

and go to sleep

gopi goes to sleep but ahem couldnt cz he was so lost staring at gopi but went to sleep eventually

what will happen next

will they both tell each other they're feelings

what will happen to gopi ??

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-Nafisa-

@-Nafisa-

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

I like the way you write, all the romantic moments are coming quickly, I hate waiting for the story to progress, as i'm quite impatient, meeting of the ex fiance, rain scene pre-honeymoon of them together all together, saves time and doesn't keep your readers waiting ages, it's playing out like a movie would fast paced.👍🏼

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love_vampires

@love_vampires

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Nafisa_blossoms
I like the way you write, all the romantic moments are coming quickly, I hate waiting for the story to progress, as i'm quite impatient, meeting of the ex fiance, rain scene pre-honeymoon of them together all together, saves time and doesn't keep your readers waiting ages, it's playing out like a movie would fast paced.👍🏼

thankz hun ... im actually the same way as you i hate waiting for the story to progress that why i like it iin a fast paced , i know its actually liked if im talking about the movie :)

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love_vampires

@love_vampires

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

it was early in the morning when gopi woke up and looked around , it was only 5:00 in the morning then she saw ahem sleeping on the sofa, wiith no blanket nothing , plus he is shivering

gopi: gopi you idiot why didnt you give him the blanket at night self thought : IF YOU WOULD'VE GAVE HIM THE BLANKET , DO YOU THINK HE WOULD'VE TAKEN IT , NO BECAUSE HE DOESNT WANT YOU TO GET COLD !!! Gopi: yeah but why would he do that she gets up from the bed and takes her blanket and puts it on ahem , ahem felt something he opens his eyes and sees gopi putting blanket on him gopi was about to look at him again ,so ahem pretended to sleep again gopi was staring at ahem but came back to herself gopi you idiot stop staring at him. (she said that really loud) Ahem heard it and smiled . they both wake up at 9:00 and were getting ready to go for shopping

they both get ready and were going to the lobby

when suddenly a kid comes running and pushes gopi , gopi falls down the stairs and is unconsious

ahem shouts GOPPII

all the people in the lobby come and surround her

ahem comes running and sees her bleeding

he tells the receptiniost to call the ambulance right away

ambulance comes takes gopi to the hospital

ahem following them i his car , calls kokila

kokila picks up the phone and is very happy

kokila : ahem dikra how are you and gopi ??

Ahem: mom gopi's in the hospital

kokila shocked