SS: Gopi's Ehsaas Last Part updated pg 56

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ANJ4

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Very nice start...Well we all know ahem is married to his work... so how can he think about Gopi ...In ahems mind who the hell is gopi.

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shobi12500

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

very nice shilpa keep it up

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aamirkhanfan

@aamirkhanfan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

i'm loving ur ss...waiting for updates

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winter30

@winter30

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Great start to the story, I really love your style of writing. Poor Gopi, I really do feel her pain, I hope Ahem realises his love for her

And thanks for the pm

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magss24

@magss24

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

superb update .. pls continue

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-GayabCat-

@-GayabCat-

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Shilpa that was amazing,

u have got me hooked for sure

Lol

was just waiting for someone to post an ss or a ff when i finish my ff as am the only one doing it right now😭

i am waiting for the day when u do a new ff.

loved the ss

Edited by ayesha_78 - 14 years ago

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asha

@aachus

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

i enjoyed a lot...👏👏

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evad

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

wow Shilpa just loved it👍🏼 waiting patiently for more please

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: queenyuks
Yayyy! Another fic by Shilpaben!

First of all, a huge thumbs up for Ahem's internal musings. I love their sarcastic nature.

And I love a Gopi who thinks for herself.

A great start Shipaben. I can't wait for more

Yuks

😆Yuks don't get to excited too fast, lets see how much I can keep up with the updates, I am good in the beginning, but when I get to the middle I get stuck and don't ask me about the romantic scenes, those are hardest to write.

Thank you love, I hope I can live up to your expectations.

I love Ahem's internal voice myself.

Edited by sbp1971 - 14 years ago