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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Jake-neil

Can a person who is not in his sense give you a review? Na... So should i comment? Naw.. But i will coz you are my sweet sister.. I loved it.. Straight from heart review.. Just love it. I wish every story has a happy ending.. Like this! Your Ahem rocks..! But ahem is cold cold hearted. Cold hearted! I wanna write more.. Be right back!



Originally posted by: Jake-neil

I am back with my second sound of review... Hahaha... Not sound, round.. Round! Rashi.. I love her! But nobody understands my feelings.. I love her!


Ok my dear sweet brother, you get a separate and a special reply.
Hmmm...where do I start?

Thank you so much for your straight from the heart review. I am so glad you liked the story, despite the fact that I made your Rashi go to jail in the end.
I knew I would get you to give me a positive feedback on Ahem one day. Don't worry we do understand you love Rashi.
I enjoyed all your feedbacks, but this one was the best.😉 Even if you were not in your sense.

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: evad

Thank you for the marvel Shilpa loved it to bit and looking forward to the next one. And about that place you got it you could also do the viewing to the place anytime you want 😃


Thank you so much Eva, I am glad you liked Ehasaas, I loved all your feedbacks.
My next one, I am working on it. I will take you up on your offer to view the place.😃

Originally posted by: pg713

Great story! Really enjoyed the way you ended the story -- wish some of it can be seen in reel with SNS. Looking forward to more writings from you.

Pinky


Thank you so much. I am glad you liked the story.

Originally posted by: art80

Shilpaben, I absolutely enjoyed reading your story and was coming to the forum to see if you posted a new chapter or not. I am really going to miss it. Hope you soon start another great story for us.

The last part was awesome. I loved the way you showed Gohem's eye communication in this story. Felt sorry for Jigar but glad to know that he accepted the truth and moved on.


Aww...You are very sweet, thank you so much for commenting on each part, all of your feedbacks were very special, especially because usually you are a silent member.
My next FF? Still thinking about it.

Originally posted by: rshree1182

Beautiful ending Shilpa..it was awesome..


Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed it.

Originally posted by: thejazzgal.s

wow!!

thts what we call a lovely end!! shilpa ben

no words to describe my appreciation to ur SS



Thank you so much, I am glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks for all your wonderful feedbacks.

Originally posted by: kamy

A beautiful ending to an interesting story Shilpa...

we intent to write a short story but then it becomes a full fledged fiction.
Keep up the good work...
kamy


Thanks Kamy, I am glad you enjoyed the SS. Hope you have a wonderful vacation.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: avi_12

It was just fabulous shilpa 👏👏👏... loved it tooo much 😃😃. A bit sad dat u have ended it but the ending is worth it...hope to see u soon wid new ff...😊
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Thank you so much. I am so glad you enjoyed the story.

Originally posted by: soni4eva

wow lovly endin

h8 anita buh finally ahem n gopi r 2geva happy endin
fanx 4 da om x


Thank you so much, I am glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks for all the wonderful feedbacks.

Originally posted by: neetusidhu

i had missed the past few updates and just read the whole thing...and wow shilpa it was amazing...too bad this is is finished...please give a new read...it would be awesome...


Thank you so much. I was also little sad to end it. Thanks for all the wonderful feedbacks. As for the future read, I will see what I can do.


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: lovtv

wow Shilpa!!!

That was a wonderful ending! You are a fabulous writer!

I am sad to see this FF end!

But thoroughly enjoyed reading every word!


Thank you so much Shelly. I just love hearing from you. I am so glad you enjoyed the story.
I was sad too, when I decided to end it, but I figured its best to give Gohem their happily ever after.😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi shilpa
You write so well so readable, love your story, do you have more or have you writen more please send us a link, love to read more. again awsome writing.
vinaben

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