SS: Gopi's Ehsaas Last Part updated pg 56

angelirebelli

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Posted: 14 years ago

#151

On the dot , just as promised...

Aham, the lover boy, is fab for a change.. Gopi well is just Gopi, always putting others first...

Loved the update Shilpa !!!

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winter30

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Posted: 14 years ago

#152

I just want to say your a fantastic writer. I love the way you portray Ahem and Gopi's chemistry. It is really well written. Looking forward to the next update 😃

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swasthi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#153

The attraction between Ahem and Gopi is nicely worded, and from Ahem's viewpoint.

Waiting eagerly for the next update.

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@simi91

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Posted: 14 years ago

#154

wow such sweet &adorable

with big heart still thinking

about others

gohem scene so cute

my love how the story shaping

up

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Yuks

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Posted: 14 years ago

#155

Nothing to say anout Urmi and her chudail daughter. Both should have a tragic accident

Then we'll see who has the last 'Haye Haye'😆

As for Ahem, as much as I love how forward he's being, he's spooking poor Gopi
He should work his kalakaari on her heart first😉

Lovely part shilpaben. Can't wait to read more

Yuks

Edited by queenyuks - 14 years ago

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Traxy101

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Posted: 14 years ago

#156

What to say? I really like your story especially the rate it is going at as you can clearly see their relationship as it develops and you portray the characters and their emotions beautifully

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Rafeal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#157

Nothing to say anout Urmi and her chudail daughter. Both should have a tragic accident

Then we'll see who has the last 'Haye Haye'😆

As for Ahem, as much as I love how forward he's being, he's spooking poor Gopi
He should work his kalakaari on her heart first😉

Lovely part shilpaben. Can't wait to read more

Yuks'

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-GayabCat-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: Jake-neil
Nothing to say anout Urmi and her chudail daughter. Both should have a tragic accident

Then we'll see who has the last 'Haye Haye'😆

As for Ahem, as much as I love how forward he's being, he's spooking poor Gopi
He should work his kalakaari on her heart first😉

Lovely part shilpaben. Can't wait to read more

Yuks'

aren't u suppose to take out yuks name out of the above post

Capt Barbossa

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great one shilpa continue on

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