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Posted: 14 years ago
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reliii reliii nyc itz awsome
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Posted: 14 years ago
#12
thank u all ppl

for the comments

and and and..sorry m really a late updater..😳

once again thanks for all the comments..:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#13

back with the update


*~*part 2~*~

ahem:hey gopi ke kanhaji..plss mujhe meri gopi lauta do..pls..main use maafi managna chahta hoon bas itni si ilteja hai..plzzz

a lonely tear escaped from his eye

just then he gets a call

ahem takes the call

ahem:kya..main abhi aa raha hoon..5 min..

ahem is all smiling with tears in his eyes..

ahem looks at sky

ahem:thank u thank u kanha ji aap ne meri ilteja sunli..

ahem runs wiping his tears

ahem is drivig car ,he was smilimg as well as he have tears in his eyes..

his thoughts drifted two years back..

it was 5 months after they returned from switzerland..

ahem finally accepted gopi as his wife..the acceptance was not out of love for gopi,but for his mother..the mother who was world to him'whole family was happy for them, for gopi..kokila was happy seeing his son settled in his life finally accepting his wife..

ahem accepted gopi as his wife for his mother, accepted this as his fate..wat if he wasn't happy with this realtion..his mother was happy..just to see a smile on his mothers face he can do anything..

he was falling in love for this cute lady..but he never want to accept his own feelings!!

~Present~

Ahem is still driving car with tears pricking his skin..

Ahem thought;-

Why didn't I ever told her, why didn't I ever accept my own feeling why did ever allow my ego to overpower my feelings'.just one mistake of mine ruined everything'.ruined her life'why didn't I put my feeling infront of her..even that day..the most beautiful day of my life, our lives..

Past~*~

They were leading a happy married life (according to gopi nd other family members) raashi changed for good..urmila no more interefering in modi's life..urmila and jeetubahi shifted to surat.. kinjal and dhawal leading a good life..in past few months everything changed for good

Ahem was falling for gopi everysingle minute but never did dare to tell her his feelings..

It was few week after their first wedding anniversary'.gopi hasn't been keeping well

Gopi was at mandir getting things ready for morning aarti..that day she was feeling exhausted and nauseatic seeing this kokila asked ahem to take gopi to the doctor..

Ahem:maa aaj meri bahut important meeting hai..

Kokila:ahem dikra gopi bhau ki tabiyat kuch din se thik nahi..maine gopi bhau se kitni baar kaha docto ko dikha do par yeh hai ki sunti nahi..tum le jaoge to mana nahi karegi..

Ahem:maa..but.

Raashi who was listening to their convo interrupted

Raashi:kaki ji ..aagr aap kahe toh main gopi k saath chali jaati hoon..

Ahem:ye thik rahega..

Kokila:thik che raashi..gopi bhau ka dhyaan rakhna..

Ahem dropped raashi and gopi at the hospital and left for the meeting

Doctor checked on with gopi..

Raashi:doctor gopi thik toh hai na..

Doctor:haan mrs .modi sab thik hai..aur ..

Raashi:aur kya doctor..kuch serious toh nahi..

Doctor:nahi nahi mrs .modi,gopi is pregnant..aise waqt kamzoori toh hoti hai'.but gopi tumhe apna dhyaan rakhna hoga..

Raashi and gopi cheered up hearing this news..

Gopi was blushing

Back at MM

Kokila pacing front and back

Kokila:kabse gayi hui hai yeh dono..inhe koi chinta ahi nahi..

Hetal:kokila dono saath ahi ..aajyenge..

Koikla:aajayenge bhabhi par gopi bhau ki tabiyat thik nahi hai aur yeh dono ab tak ghar nahi aayi..chinta toh hogi na..

Just then raashi and gopi walks in..

Raashi is all smilimg..

Kokila:kitni dair lagati ho tum dono..raashi makes gopi sit on the couch..

Hetal asks mani to bring water for both of them

Koki:doctor ne kya kaha..koipareshaani nahi..

Gopi puts her head down blushing

Raashi:nahi nahi kakiji..pareshaani wali koi baat nahi..woh baat darasal yeh hai ki..gopi..

Koki:shu thaiyo raashi bahu jaldi batao..

Just then ahem enters

Koki:ahem dikra tum itna jaldi??

Ahem:haan mom..wo..meeting postpone ho gayi hai..aur muje kuch files bhi leni thi toh main abhi aa gaya..

Raashi now decided to play..

Raashi:wo kaki ji doctor ne kaha ki..

Koki:raashi bahu seedha seedha kaho..tabse paheliyan bhuja rahi ho..

Gopi trying to escape the situation

Raashi:arrey gopi doctor ne tujhe araam karne ko kaha hai na'.abse saara kaam main hi karungi..meri itna farz banat ahi..

Hetal:kya hua raashi dikra

Raashi:mummy ji,kaki ji'.main maasi banne wali hoon..aur aap dono daadi..aur ahem jiju aap papa..

Koki&hetal:shu..they both smile

Ahem's face lighten up he's smiling and looks at gopi

Hetal :yeh to badi khushi ki baat ahi..

Koki nd hetal gives aashirwaad to gopi and ahem

Raashi brings the sweet

Raashi:itni acchi khabar ke saath muhh toh mieetha hona chahiye na..

~present~

Ahem thinking:-

I ruined every thing..every happiness of my life..my gopi..


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Posted: 14 years ago
#14
Can't wait to find out what Ahem did
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Posted: 14 years ago
#15
yea mee tooo...love the story
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Posted: 14 years ago
#16
nice part...what did aham do?
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Posted: 14 years ago
#17
can't wait to read the next part !
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Posted: 14 years ago
#18
nice update dear...👏
iss update se toh dikh raha hai ki ahem lus gopi..but what did ahem do with gopi..
and where is gopi????😕
😕gopi pregnant..😉

can't wait for the next...

cont soon shab😊

waiting!!!
muuaahhh

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Posted: 14 years ago
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So what did Ahem do ??
Please updates soon.
Posted: 14 years ago
#20
hey meri shab!!!

how r u? abhi mila tym update karne ka.. wah yaar!! kitna jaldi update karti hoo..
aur wo b end me ek cliffhanger pe rokti ho..

ahem ne kiya kyaaa???????
gopi ko accept b kiya naa... wat happnd thn?????????????
mr. ahem ji ka ego problem!! !! uff!! apne felings accept b nahi kiya..
wow!! gopi Pregnant !!! wow!! ye toh sach me bahut khushi ki baat haiii!
shab! aise suspences mat rakho yaar.. aur aur tum late late update karti ho toh hame aur b zyad khahalbali hoti hai..

nd this tym plzzz cont sooonnn

plzzz
thankz 4 d PM
muuah!

Edited by thejazzgal.s - 14 years ago

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