FF:Ilteja (GoHem)[updt prt 04/pg08]

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey all..i've been a silent member on this forum for a long tym..after reading beautiful FF's here i started a one..

hope u all like it..



~*~part 1~*~


We see ahem jogging on lonely roads of Rajkot and it's a perfect picture of sunrise in the back

Maine dil se kaha, dhoond laana khushi

Nasamajh laya gum, to yeh gum hi sahi

He is all sad...Emotionless to be precise

Maine dil se kaha, dhoond laana khushi

Nasamajh laya gum, to yeh gum hi sahi

Maine dil se kaha dhoond laana khushi

He comes back home

Gets ready for office and leave not even looking at any one..

Today is day when ahem was being honored as best businessman of the year..2 time in a row

He is at the function accompanied with his kaka chirag and jigar

He is least interest or rather had cut off all the ties from world

Bechaara kahan jaanta tha

Khalish hai yeh kya khala hai

Shehar bhar ki khushi se

Yeh dard mera bhala hai

He was physically present there..but his mind and heart was somewhere else

Soon he was announced the best businessman'.he takes a the award and leaves the place without saying any word

People thought he got more attitude but only few people know whats the real reason behind his tough behavior or attitude

This was Ahem modi for everyone

Tough, emotionless and ruthless businessman

Jashna yeh raaz na aaye

Mazaa toh bas gam main aaya hai

He walks away on the lonely roads of Rajkot just holding his trophy'.only moonlight to accompany him '..

Maine dil se kaha, dhoond laana khushi

Nasamajh laya gum, to yeh gum hi sahi

He just walks without any path or destiny in his mind

He witness a happy couple on his way

Kabhi hai ishq ka ujaala

Kabhi hai maut ka andhera

He keeps looking at them and how happy they seem together

Bataao kaun bes hoga

Main jogi banu ya lutera

Kayi chehre hai is dil ke

Najaane kaunsa mera

He just walks away from their feeling pity for himself..

Maine dil se kaha dhoond laana khushi

Nasamajh laya gum, to yeh gum hi sahi

He walk towards the cliff the most loneliest place

Hazaaron aaise phaasle the

Jo Tai karne chale the

raahe magar chal padi thi

Aur peeche hum rah gaye the

He stops at end of the cliff

And takes out his wallet

And look loving at the picture in it ..

The picture was of our dear gopi..smiling

kadam Do chaar chal paaye

Kiye phere tere mann ke

He touch the photo and a little very little smile crept on his face..

Maine dil se kaha, dhoond laana khushi

Nasamajh laya gum, to yeh gum hi sahi

Maine dil se kaha, dhoond laana khushi

Nasamajh laya gum, to yeh gum hi sahi

He spend the most of evening looking at the picture..

Don't know for how long he kept looking at the pic


then he looks at the sky

ahem:hey gopi ke kanhaji..plss mujhe meri gopi lauta do..pls..main use maafi managna chahta hoon bas itni si ilteja hai..plzzz

a lonely tear escaped from his eye


Just then he gets a call


plzz do hit the like button


do comments


Edited by sweetshab - 13 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago
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edited :
nice title Ilteja..which means request ryt??

love start shab! loved it!
muuah!!
aww my poor ahem.. what happen to my ahem's😳 gopi ?????????
😛 😛 😛 😛
😛 do cont sooonnn shab!!
dont take too long plsh!

mwah!
Edited by thejazzgal.s - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#3
ILTEJA:

a very good start dear

loved ahem
and the song playing in the background

awww his ilteja ...

wat happend to gopi????

where she is??

many questions are running in my mind

do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Liked the way it started and I'm curious to see where it goes
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Posted: 14 years ago
#5
hey dear
awesome start
plz continue soon
can u plz add me to ur pm list
i have already sent u a buddy request
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Posted: 14 years ago
#6
Loved it. Plz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#7
very nice dear...pls continue ...I want to see Ahem come out of this sad mood into a more romantic mood
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Posted: 14 years ago
#8
aweeesomeee...plz updt d next part soon :))
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Posted: 14 years ago
#9
nice FF
dis song perfectly suits the situation...one of my fav song:)
cont soon

waiting!!

add me to ur pm list:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#10
lovely tittle
cant how the story unfold



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