GOHEM SS: Heart to Heart updated pt 6 pg 15

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Ankita

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Posted: 14 years ago

#121

I missed this entire shr story when I ws away

Very good job👏
I wish this is how saathiya was

Too bad it ended

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@simi91

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Posted: 14 years ago

#122

wow ahem gifted her

snow globe

how sweet of him

oh no yu ended

without passionate hug

good he didnt tell her

he love her

i'm gonner miss

reading it

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neetusidhu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#123

fantastic shilpa...i totally and completely enjoyed this part and the whole fic in general...hope that you write some more fics for us...i for one would love it...

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ll-Shilpa-ll

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Posted: 14 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: queenyuks
No kiss? *pouts*
No fair!
You can't end at a hug.

Aww... he got her a snowglobe. How sweet.

I loved Ahem's end speech, about how he doesn't love her yet. Im so glad he didn't just randomly fall in love with her

What a lovely last part Shilpaben

And what a lovely short story. You are too wonderful for words for providing us with this treat.

It was great! Thank you

Yuks

Thanks Yuk, I ended it on a hug, because I didn't feel they are ready for that. So just left everything to our overactive imaginations😉

BTW Thanks for your help with the gift, I just couldn't imagine what Ahem would gift Gopi, that is perfect for her.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

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Posted: 14 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: Jake-neil
That was great shilpaben. Clay really had clay in his head. Charmed by gopi? Btw it was good ending. Loved it.

Thanks Jakebhai, but I have a feeling that it will be Gopi's charming little speech that will win the contract for Gopi in SNS.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

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Posted: 14 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: ANJ4
I can't find the words to tell you how much I enjoyed this SS... So I will leave now saying from 1 to 10 wht do you rate this ss as ... 11

Thanks Anju, you are the best. I am so glad you enjoyed the SS.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

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Posted: 14 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: ElizaKawa
LUV IT😳

Thank you so much!

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ll-Shilpa-ll

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Posted: 14 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: Eesha2
Shilpa I loved it. I was actually scowling at my laptop when I read the part where Rashi was putting down Gopi. Wonderful and a very realistic and sweet ending. Wonderful story. 👏

Thank you Eesha, I hated to end it there, but don't know what will happen after this swiss trip, so just decided to end it there.

Thanks for your last comment, it put me on the right track. Keep in touch.

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan
lovely ending...

Thank you!

Originally posted by: Nafisa_blossoms
Thanks Shilpa that was so lovely, his realised what a Gem he has she passed the work test...😉

Thanks Nafisa, now we just nee the SNS Ahem to realize this.

Originally posted by: thejazzgal.s
wow!! lovely! end!

finally ahem confessed what he want !!
its good tht gopi gave him time to understand each other..
lovely update . shilpa
how sweet of him .. he brought her a snow globe.. 😊
loved it completely..
!!

Thank you, the snow globe idea was given to me by a very good friend, she is the best.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

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Posted: 14 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: Simz786
Snowglobe ❤️ This Story Was The Best.👏
You Should Write More Stories In The Future.😍

Thank you so much. Bit busy now, but I will see what I can write in the future.

Originally posted by: huneymonsta
I so want the Ahem to be like this with Gopi! When will th day come?!

Lovely ff!!!!

Thanks! We all want Ahem to be like this. Hope we won't have to wit long.

Originally posted by: lovtv
Shilpa.

That was absolutely perfect. It was the right moment to stop and leave the rest to our imagination!

But it leaves a gap ...we need more. May be a new SS or OS?

:)

Thanks Shelly.

I will have to see about the SS or the OS, for me they alway turn so long.

I am working on a another FF, I have to develop it more before I can post it.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

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Posted: 14 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: -Ankita-
I missed this entire shr story when I ws away

Very good job👏
I wish this is how saathiya was

Too bad it ended

Thank you! I have the same wishes, hopefully soon.

Originally posted by: simi91
wow ahem gifted her
snow globe

how sweet of him

oh no yu ended

without passionate hug

good he didnt tell her

he love her

i'm gonner miss

reading it

Thank you so much. I really loved your post. Its fabulous

Originally posted by: neetusidhu
fantastic shilpa...i totally and completely enjoyed this part and the whole fic in general...hope that you write some more fics for us...i for one would love it...

Thank you so much. I am thinking about writing more. I have one in works, we'll see how it goes.