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PART-8
part8-1:
Jigar slammed the door and faced the family.Not even one person protested against his act, hetal was disapointed so was jigar.Jigar made way towards his room. Only one person in particular was effecteed by this act. Ahem was standing on the staricase and was lost in his own
thought. Her words echoced in his mind now "Main chor nahi hu ahemji"(i am not a theif). He too throwed gopi that day out of his room blaming her to be a theif not even giving her a chance of explanation.Was he looked the same during that day,"terrifiyinly angry", if so
she must be terrified of me.
she is dumbo!!!!!!
oh u back again, yes i am , shut up!!!!
3 days of mm household after rashi leaving became a total choas.The doctor told modi's that gopi is in after shock mode and to take care of her and gradually she will come out of it .Every work in the modi household was in upturned state as gopi in bed and kokila and hetal
looking after her.Kokila asked ahem to shift into guestroom as she dont know regarding gopis condition. Ahem happily obliged her mother and thought "anyways mom will take care of her". Jigar started to tallk less or to not speaking at all and waas totoally involved in his work.
Ahem thoutht its a good way he learnt responsibility and remaing modis knew why jigar started working like a machine.Gopi's strength totally collapsed after the incident and neither koki nor hetal could not convince her to start live again.Gopi condition became normal physically
but mentally she became a robot devoid of every emotion and this was due to the reason of the drramatic entrance of urmila on the day after rashi was thrown out.Though gopi was physically k she was not allowed to go out of the room and gopi too dint knew that rashi was
thrown out of the house as kokila thought it would be better for her to find out later.But the unpleasent truth came out very unpleasently.
Part 8-2:
Gopi was feeling thirsty and as usual without asking anyone she came down to get water from the kitchen. Nobody was there in the hall and then made urmila her dramatic entry in full rage on the modis. As the door was open she barged in and her eyes fell directly on gopi
who was recollecting her MIL words of how Ahem brought her . On seeing gopi urmila eyes burnt with rage and hatred. She stopped her near the kitchen. Gopi on seeing her mami greeted her mami innocently with a sweet smile assuring her that she was alright. According
to gopi thought rashi might have called her mami and she was here to meet her. None of the modi's mentioned rashi to her.Gopi smile and her happiness in her eyes made urmila's heart burn as her own daughter was crying her heart out. Urmila started "manhoos kahiki u never
will change".Gopi was shocked to hear her and said "mami wat r u saying".Urmila said "dont act too smart in front of me like u dont know anyting. Always u r after my dikri's happiness. Arre if ur husband does not love u than what my dikri did to u dat u casted ur evil eye on
her.Gopi startd to cry" what are u saying mami, why would i harm rashiben". Urmila said "Ahaha dekh kaise asu tapka rahi hai, it was because of u my rasi got thrown out of the house". Gopi was schocked "mami e aap kya keh rahi hai".urmila shouted "dont act too smart in
front of me, u created a drama for which my dikri got blamed. who asked u to move from that place. Coming to this mahal u think u became totally intelligent and safe. Forgot so soon how u used to beg me not to beat u, to let u study. do u think u will stay here forever, Never
that husband of urs will never love u. who wants to love a girl like u, a useless gawar who cant take care of herself only. whenver u open ur mouth diasster occurs, whever u go only unhappiness prevail in the place. Always snatches happiness from others, took ur parents life
away, came to my home and made my house a hell and now this modi bhawan where ur husband doesnt get a piece of happiness from u.All the work u do here is slave work, Yes ur a SLAVE in this house and thats how ur husband treats u.Its just ur stars are lucky that u are
still here otherwise u shuld have been thrown out of the house by now. Did u forget so easily how we used to put all the blame on u on every wrong thing we have done during ur intial marrige days and dat ur saas Kagdi modi and ur husband used to blame u.
Dont think it cant be done now, u r a servant for that kokila who dances to her tunes, once u r out of this house i willl swear to
god that i wont spare u. No one wants u and no one will save u U r a waste of space for me and also to ur husband...URMILA BEN
Part8-3:
URMILA BEN...
the whole modi household was in the hall watching the drama which urmila missed it. Everyone was in total shock. Ahem was in verge to explode. urmi mouth dropped down when she came back to senses. She dint realize dat she was shouthing in anger. Gopi was unable
to stand there. Her mami's words pierced through her heart and broke her already broken hopes.Unable to meet none of them she ran towards her room crying.If looks could kill urmila would have been to ashes by now.Kokila proceed towards Urmila and thundered "Aaapki
himat kaise huui meri gopi vahu ke saat ese baat karne ki(how dare u talk to her like this), I have alwasys knew that ur family dint have a liking towards my vahu but this is out of limit. Who r u to judge whether my vahu is a slave or Maha rani of this house. How can u judge
my vahu character when u urself dont have one. how can u say my gopi vahu snatched rashi happiness when ur rashi was all to blame for her condition. Ur rashi never deserved to be a modi bahu and because of that i selecte gopi instead of rashi. It was becuase of u ur
daughter family is ruined. whenver she was upto some work u come beetween u destroy her work and to divert her. I alrreaday warned u that mothres like u one day will make their daughters life hell. Dont u have any humanity towards ur niece. She went throuugh a lot
of trouble and u r here to terrify her !! and u r here to terify that u will beat her, chiii wat a mother u are!! And wat were u saying regarding Ahem not aceepting her, if so Ahem never accepted her , she will remain here in this house forever as my daughter because though
u have treated ur niece worse than a servant i will treat my daughter as my daughter!!. Now u can leave from here and pls never show us ur face as there is no need for u to turn up. Urmila was cursing her with rage thought why to keep silent whn all the barriers are
broke and said "Maaf kijiye vevanji, my daughter loss made me unbalance but as u know u too have a daughter who is my DIL, how would u feel if i treated her the same way as u people did". Everyone held their breath hearing this. How they forget "KINJAL", modi's
lovely daughtr is this cruel women daughtr in law. But kokila knew her daughter well. She said " i have no worry for my daughter vevanji as unlike ur daughtr my daugter have her husband's support with her, Jai shri krishna". This made urmila shut her mouth and
leave their place fuming, insulted and burning with revenge.
Part8-4:
"Mummy where have u been i was worried", rashi asked her mother and noticed that her mother was not her usual self. urmila narrated the whole story and rashi world came crashing down. She screeched "mummy wat have u done. i begged u not to go to modi house
and to create a scene but why did u leave and returend with such a bad news." urmila said "are chup dnt wory i have placed that gopi right in her place and where as ur problem, i know she will solve it and will convince the family to bring u home after all my speech
wil have some effect on her". Rashi was in no mood to listen, she felt disgusted with her mom, she knew which state gopi was before her leaving and which state she would be now. She asked her mother to leave gopi this time as she dint know her condition but
she dint suspect that her mother will leave without telling her. She knew why she wanted to make her go to modi house, not because she cares for her family becuase she cant go to parlours now. Not even once did she consoled or advised her to gain jigarji trust
back all she spoke was how will they live in luxury. rashi mind recalled kokila words "one day mothers like u will destroy their children future". Now she knew watever she will do her husband will never take her home, her family proably be hating her right now
and finallly thought "kagdi was after all absolutely rit, my future is ruined forever". Here at mm gopi was not in a state of comfort. "her mami was absoultey rit, she can never give happiness to anyone, she is so dumb and ahemji is so brilliant. Becasue of her mistake
rashiben got thrown out. Nobody is happy since when she entered the house. Always creates pbms for Ahemji. She is indeed a manhoos spreading despair all over" and with this thought gopi's strength came crashing down and all her trust and faith have broken.
She thought i cant never give happiness to Ahemji hence i will never cause trouble in his life also. If he doesnt want me so does it i will never be in his path, never ever wil i wil come face to face with him. Meanwhile here kokila annouced everyone that gopi
will never go back to umi house and tells "Ahem i knw u dont like gopi vahu so u need not worry from today onwards she wil nt exsist for u, she will be here but not in ur sight. u will never see her in any situation.so dont wory i promise u that from today onwards
gopi is out of ur life forever.!!".Ahem dint knw what to say. one part of his mind was guilty of accusing her for all the things she havent done and another thought "k its not her fault both still she is not too naive as mom thinks and i still dont love her. Mom decision
is rit that she cant be left with that horrible woman and i cant live with her so," Ahem said he was happy with the decision and asked her to keep to that promise and left for the office leaving evryone speechlesss and Kokila thinking " Ahem dikra fell rit into the trap!!"
K ITS long and might be boring also but the game starts now
any suggesgtins and ideas welcomed.
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