FF:Milan/part34(Last part!)-pg143 - Page 64

Originally posted by: shaina.sharma

dont worry i wil come back next week. I am going to my relatives, but i cant tell whether can i update or not next week. thats it

ooh! thank god. .. u really frightened me.. it's onam vaccation for me now... 10 days holiday.. i was looking forward 4 ur updates before collage reopens... anyway it's okay.. i should wait.. hey before u go can u give me hint of jigar's next plan please😕... tumko patta hai na mein kitni bechain hoom??? 😳😳😳
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good luck for ur journey... come back soon... hope we will talk soon...

sorry my darling to comment late..last night this net connection was really aweful...

this part is superb..infact its more than superb...

i love the suprise ...Ahem n Rashi were fooled all the time...

pls come back sooon..will miss u soo much

Shaina, this was an awesome update.

hi here i am finally commenting properly!..sorry i gt a lil busy with some assignments..so decided to comment later as then only i can do justice to the lovely update with a long comment!!😳

haha 1st of all that starting conversation between Rashi n Aham had me rolling around laughing!!! specially thess lines "stop flirting with my sister and LISTEN TO ME"🤣

"Because we need a brain for that" "AHEMJIJU!!" "jigar was right! u both sisters have the talent to blow the eardrums out"

"Idiot!! A small gift to make her happy, why didnt i thought about it" "because we need a brain to do it" Rashi replied and ran away before Ahem could kill her.

omg i'd pay to watch this actually happening in the serial!! specially since i'm feeling angry enough to strangle Rashi right now after what she did last friday😡

n lol then the Temple/lake deciding scene..hehe i loved it..lol i can actually see it happening in the show even now..lol other than for Aham shooing everyone off n taking gopi in his arms..but lol i'd love to see this 1 in real...specially cz f what happens to urmi..lol

i love th interactions b/t all 3 couples in the lake part..kinjal trying to get along with dhawal n talking a walk..rashi n jigar, being th most immature couple playing the water "Rashi! frog" jigar shouted. "AAAh Mummy!!" rashi screamed🤣
..n aham confusing poor gopi lol n taking her for a ride! literally!!!😆 all of them are fun scenarios to imagine n my head!!😳

n ugh typical shameless urmi to ask 4 kinjal's necklace..🤢

n aww poor gopi..she really does get completely tongue tied even before some1 accuse her..she really gets terrified, doesn't she?..i always feel really sad when she widens her teear filled eyes n shake her head pleadingly looking at the other person whenever something goes wrong..i so wish she could say something in her defense..
n the day rashi speaks in defense of gopi against her mom i'd personally give party!! cz that is like the most amazing thing as unlike many i still love both girls n wish they were behaving more like real sisters!!

n coming to the hot scene of the whole part i loveeeddd this dialogue!!! "Mrs.Gopi Ahem Modi" Ahem started "thats is ur name, wife of Mr.Ahem modi and DIL of kokila parag modi, elder DIL of the Modi family, that is ur status in the society and NO ONE dont have any rights to come and insult the wife of AHEM PARAG MODI" wow!!😲👏👏👏
n aww everytime he was calling her 'my gopi' i was feeling this totally mushy feeling n aww its so sweet to even read it!!!😍

👏"How did anyone come to this conclusion. U cant blame my wife becasue she cant open her mouth. what proof do u have that my wife did it? I wil say that u put this necklace in her purse to blame her,what wil u say to that" Urmila looked almost ready to faint and rashi dint knew wheter to look concern or happy.🤣 this line is classic!!!🤣 haha i'm looking forward to a real future like this one!!😆

n on a closing note all the cards are finally laid down for eeryone to see..the game is finally over!n i loved how u did this whole disclosure😳

Only ahem and rashi stayed behind looking at each other. Both were standing far watching the sunset "All our plans.."rashi spoke "all our timings and perfections" Ahem spoke "Everything"rashi said "was mom's plan"ahem said. "we were thinking that we made them fools"rashi wailed "but they were making us fools"Ahem replied. "we thought we were wining against kakiji" "But the fact was she was playing along all the time"
"I thought i was smarter than her" "But we never defeated her" "i thought i was a genius"rashi cried "but the fact is we became the most dumb idiots on the world" "And its all becasue of"rashi fumed in anger "all because of.." ahem clenched his teeth "Ahemji!..." Gopi came to Ahem, "rashi" jigar came to rashi. Both rashi and ahem turned towards their respective partners and shouted together "ALL BECAUSE OF U!!" and stormed in anger leaving gopi and jigar looking at each other confused thinking what have they done now.
haha these past to paragraphs were hilarious thinking form this side🤣🤣🤣 poor Jigar n gopi!!🤣🤣🤣

n i'm looking forward to knowing the further development of the story..specially GoHam n RaJi storyline n Urmi's reaction to her daughter joining hands with Gopi against her...

so finally have a safe n fun filled vacation..would be waiting for u to come back😳

Originally posted by: kaka.lg

hmmm😛 so tasteful. 😳 hope u can update soon and continue with a new FF

thank u. i wil try to update soon now. Hoope u all wil like the new ff

Originally posted by: 143badra

i love Aham and Rashi relationship ... its so nice

loved the scene btwn jijar and rashi near the lake or in the lake ...

loved the boat scene ... "Gopi saw Ahem grinining wide that she understood she was being taken for ride again". --

she slipped and was about to fall when suddenly Ahem grabbed her by her waist and pulled her towards him -- ☺️😍

wow ... wht huge problems can a small piece of jewelery cause ... lol😉

i could have punched urmila 😡for her kalakari ... but as all well that ends well 😊... i would let her escape my wrath for one last time😉 ... lol

Koki does a fab job ... she know how to make Aham do wht she wishes for after all she is her mother ... loved koki .. . love ur koki she is too good 😃

omg love Aham 👏... he is finally standing for Gopi and most of all i loved when he mentioned my Gopi every single time ... simply loved it ...😳

wa simply awesome ... Aham and rashi got played by koki 😉... now this was awesome and i didnt see this coming😆 : so the players got played afterall 😆

thanking urmila was such heart warming scene ... koki's words have sarcasm written all over them... lol

" i am going on a vacation so i cant say when can i update again, so for this reason in the history of the milan ff for the first time i am giving u a peaceful ending without any twist. so enjoy" -- enjoy ur vacation

fully enjoyed the update ...

hope u update soon and waiting for ur updates dr ...

- - badra

hai, hmmm so many queries lets start with rahem(rashi and ahem) relation, yes it very good to write them, one comdey another serious. Rashi is getting comfortbale with ahem as per her nature and ahem unknowingly acceptd her as a friend.

The lake and the boat scene signifies the couples mentalities, one easy going second silent and hesitant. He could have asked her to come sit beside him, but ahem is ahem.

I love my koki, i think the cvs are not giving brains to her so i did.

yes i really love his my gopi my gopi tune. Ahem is a possessive person so naturally he wil have that behaviour of owing the persons he is close with.

Yes its a real shock to know that the famous players got played and koki taunts of urmila, were naturall as in sns too she never leavs a opportunity to blame her..

i had a wonderful vacation thank u

Originally posted by: tina_1234

nyc one...waitin for next now

thanks. it wil come soon

Originally posted by: kamjal

shaina thanks a billion for such a lovely story n do enjoy ur holiday n as a request when u r back pls do continue to right as u r excellent at it. good luck 4 da future.

thanks a lot. yup i enjoyed my holiday a lot. i have started writing, try to update as soon as possible

Originally posted by: fortuneprincess

ooh! thank god. .. u really frightened me.. it's onam vaccation for me now... 10 days holiday.. i was looking forward 4 ur updates before collage reopens... anyway it's okay.. i should wait.. hey before u go can u give me hint of jigar's next plan please😕... tumko patta hai na mein kitni bechain hoom??? 😳😳😳
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good luck for ur journey... come back soon... hope we will talk soon...

oops sorry for the late reply. Yup i had a great vacation. Dont worry i wil update today or tomorrow. and coming to jigar's plan well u planned it actually. ur much waited track coming now...

hope u wil like it