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All fanfics and oneshots which i have been written with my own knowledge - this is solely my work and no one can recreate or copy my work without permission

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1- after holi gopi gets high on bhaang again

Gopi was very high on bhang today, just a day after holi, Mami gave her ladoo, which contained bhang in it. Gopi ate 3 of them, and lost her control. She starts to cry. Mami and Rashi from behind smirking from behind saying: now this girl will create tamasha now.

Aehem comes down with his kurta in his hand and all in a fit of anger calls out to mani : what is this, why did you burn my kurta, now what am I going to wear?

Mani: but ...

Aehem: chup, ek dum chup( now back to his regular duties - doing it to mani now),

Mani: but listen to me once bhai

Ahem:kya, tumhari bhahani, ab kya pehnu ga, sab sherwani to naye hai, vo to nahin pehnu ga

Mani: but listen to me once, I did not burn you kurta, it was Gopi bhabhi who ironed you clothes.

Aehem was fuming with anger, nostrils fuming up and all over the top calls her out.

Gopi comes out in the state of nasha.

Everyone notices someone had given her bhang kai ladoo and once again she is high.

Aehem now starts : why did you burn my kurta, whats with you gavar, can't you stay away from my things

Gopi:shhh, itna gusa sehat kai liye acha nahi hai, kis nai kabhi kah tuj se gusa tumhari liye acha nahi hai, you look scary when you are in anger( too much anger and ego isnt good for your health)

Aehem: chup ek dum chup, tell me why did u burn it

Gopi: mera dhamak karab hai, that I will touch your things, Anita, ko chor kar mujse shaadi kyun ki.( why did you leave anita and got married to me) - just the sake of your mother

Everyone behind shocked what she was saying, but koki was smiling as she was going to change him, and make him melt after this, why not a mothers heart was saying this and its never wrong.

Aehem was total in shock and went back a bit and looked at everyone. He thought how does she know about Anita.

Gopi: Anita, that girl, with low deeds, greedy with money, high statue, not cultural, I cant believe you have a taste of this kind of girl, and loves her. Cant you just give me a divorce and give me chutkara (independence) from this marriage. Now you have broken 2 girls heart.

Aehem: yeh kya keh rahi ho, chup ho jao, hadh hoti hai.( there is a limit in everything)

Gopi: haadh, (Limit!)

she laughs out

Gopi: Anita kai pyaar main undhai ho chukai ho, bhool gaye, us ki sagai ho chuki hai.( you are blind in anita love, remember she is engaged,)

Aehem is still, tears in his eyes, ego bursts out and melts just there

Gopi: yeh hai mere zindagi, ma bap ko kho dala, ab pati ka pyaar,nahi chahiye mujhai aisa pati, jo apne parva hai or muj jaise unpar sai ( this is my life, lost my parents, and never got a husband love,)

Gopi turns around to kinjal: aur tum, umang kai pyaar mein kya kya kiya aur os nai tuj ko dhooka diya, yeh hai sanskar tuj mein, 5 lakh necklace muj ko diya, aur kahan aehem nai diya, damak tumhara bhi karab hai

Aehem all in shock, this is what kinjal did

Gopi: aur, maine tuj ko inti madad ki aur tum nai, naukar ki tarha istemal kiya shame on you ( I helped you a lot, and you, used me as a servant)

Then she turns to rashi and mami; Yummy!" mami apke ladu me kya tha ke mere dar hi shu ho gaye.

Mami all in shock as secrets are spilling out, koki behind smiling as gopi is teaching them a lesson as nani aswell was smiling as she was in hands to hand with koki.

Mami: areee kya bol rahi ho, ladu aur main hosh mein to ho ( what are u speaking, come back to the reality)

Gopi: hosh damak aap sab ka karab ho giya hai,

Rashi: gopi chalo upstairs with me

Gopi: leave my hand,

Gopi:bohat ziyada tum kawo kawu karti ho tum, ek baar, tum nai mujko apne behn socha, nahi na, to phir, aaj tum pyaar sai kyun bol rahi ho

Rashi was shocked, she didn't want to get caught this time but why? She didn't want to get embarrassed, and she didn't want jigar to misunderstand her.

Hetal and everyone was shocked to hear some of the secrets exposing to the family. Nani and Koki stopped hetal and everyone to come in between, as it will create more misunderstandings between them.

Gopi turns towards Aehem and says: kya huwa, ab daant kyun nahin rahai ho, phir se haath uthao, slap me, u can't stand me, I am unpar, why because my mami never let me get educated, she always hated me, took all my fathers pensions and savings that he had saved for my education but her she used it for rashi education, so whats my fault, am I not a human being. Mujko ghar sai nikhalna chahti ho, nikalo, nuksan aap sab ka hi hoga, parivar ki izzt ghir jai gee,

Aehem in his calm tone with hurt : kaun si izzat, kaisi izzat, kaha gai thi izzat jab tum nai muj ko dhoka diya, apne illiterate kai bari mein

Gopi: thats because maaji never wanted me to tell you so how is that a lie.

Gopi looks at four of them. (Kinjal, Rashi,Aehem and Urmi)

Gopi: I have been working continuously day and night serving serving people like you who dont appreciate me...a khadoos like husband who cannot stand the sight of an illiterate wife and scheming witches who cannot see me happy ever.

Aehem and 3 witches are shocked.

Aehem all in tears and finally his heart melts. But his ego wasn't letting go to the romantic side. Gopi had to sort him out more in front of everyone.

ahem: how could u do this rashi with your own sister and urmi gopi tu app ko apni maa manti ha. ek maa apni beti ka saath aisa kasey kar sakti hai. aaj sabat ho gaya ka app gopi ki maa nahi uski mami hay jis ko siraf pasa(money) ka hayal hai. Aur kinjal gopi saved u so many time from troubles and what u did to her. u create misunderstanding between me and gopi. how could u do this kinjal.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lovely ayesha😊😃👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

It looks as though they will be taught a lesson😊😊😊 hahah you even you the line which i suggested😆😆😆😆 .
Update soon hun............ keep it up👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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fantastic ayesha.....loved it to the core...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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princess loved it. please continue.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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all i can say is wow.... now thats something Gopi should have done... lolzzz

please continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank u diya ;) hope u enjoyed it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I hope Gopi still says those things tomorrow. Great story
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:D that's shilpa, u'll find out tomorrow what will happen
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very good @ayesha thats we call u queen of ff
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank you shoiab, and welcome,
I dnt think anyone will be pleased calling me a queen though, if that's what u say, I dnt mind. But thnks for liking

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