New FF- Aandhi - revenge - Page 3

hello everyone, am back, thanks everyone for there wishes for me being unwell yesterday, am all better now, just got the flu, i wrote the next chapter, and i could write what i could, but i hate it, i have bad aehem in this chapter, i hate him for not stopping gopi. Do let me know how it is and enjoy reading and do comment.

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He repeats again

ahem: how could u do this rashi with your own sister and urmi gopi tu app ko apni maa manti ha. ek maa apni beti ka saath aisa kasey kar sakti hai. aaj sabat ho gaya ka app gopi ki maa nahi uski mami hay jis ko siraf pasa(money) ka hayal hai. Aur kinjal gopi saved u so many time from troubles and what u did to her. u create misunderstanding between me and gopi. how could u do this kinjal.

But Gopi interferes and says: why are you worried now, I dont need anyone to take care of me, I can do it.

Gopi goes upstairs and shuts the door, and then goes to sleep.

She wakes up, and gets everything ready, she recollects what she said after eating bhang kai ladoo, She was upset but she knew she had to leave. She did the aarti, served them food, and then she goes upstairs and gets her suitcase. While she was doing that, everyone downstairs was talking, about the incident. Jigar was angry at Rashi, he sent her to her mayka until she doesn't change herself, he was upset. Rashi on the hand, was hurt, and she was crying. She had locked the room from the inside in her pihar house as jigar forced her to leave the house after all the incidents. Jigar had realized the truth. The truth wasn't hidden. Gopi blurt out everything last night. Everything, associated with urmi, rashi aehem and kinjal. Aehem, was still in the same position, He started to feel something for Gopi. Something, He thought kuch kuch ho raha hai, in his heart. He was paining, tears in his eyes. Something was happening, Surely he had to read his diary which he updated everyday. He was sitting down, slowly eating wondering what to do as he felt Gopi was leaving the house today. One daughter in law has gone now the other one is going.

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Gopi comes down with her suitcase and sees everyone sitting down in the main hall. They see her with the suitcase. Everyone asked what is this.

Gopi: voh........ am leaving the house.

Everyone: what

Gopi: am leaving the house, this is my decision

Chirag: but why, leave, did anyone force you

Gopi: nai kakaji this is my own will, I am leaving, last time he provided me with the divorce papers and I have put my fingerprint on it, and leaving the divorce papers upstairs.

Everyone standing there in shock, aehem in shock, tears in his eyes, lowered his head down and closed his eyes, but did not stop her.

Hetal: what are you saying, this is your house, where will you go, whatever happened in this house, you always cured the problems, and then what is this.

Gopi: no, kaki, I did all this because I was the daughter in law, but not anymore. How can I be the daughter in law in this house, when my own husband has filed a divorce against me, and I have signed it, All the things have happened, but I could not change him. But only Anita can. Anita the girl he loves.

Hetal: look koki, stop her will you, aehem stop her,

They both look down, all sorrow and helpless and couldn't do anything as they didn't know what she was doing. Aehem lowering his head, closed eyes, couldn't stop her at all and wasn't sure about his feelings for her. But perhaps this is destiny which has decided to separate both of the couple as they were at the different paths.

Jigar: but bhabhi, you have brought bhai to the right track, look at him now he has started to talk to everyone, start to laugh like before etc but why leave the house

Gopi: nai devar ji, all the things have happened was because I was the DIL in the house but when my own husband have not accepted me then why shall I stay here, when we don't live like a couple, when we don't share a bond whats the point. When he doesn't want me to stay here then why should I stay here when I have taken all the vows back then whats the point living with the false relationship.

She turns towards koki: give me your blessing and let me leave, this is the only way which we both can live peacefully.

Koki gives her blessing and everyone else does, They take her to the door while jigar picked her bag up, and then Gopi leaves from there with the suitcase and goes to the woman's home, where they help orphans with no home and provide them with a job.

She goes there and gets a apartment to herself, and shuts the door of her new home. Then she lifted up all the sheets from the sofas and dusted the floor. Then she cleaned all the apartment and sat down. She leaned against the sofa and put her head back, She flashed back to all her pasts.

Perhaps this is written in the destiny, which they had to separate, maybe they weren't suitable for each other at all, they were at different paths, but what can we do, this is life, this is fate, we can't change it.

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So this is it, friends, i hate this chapter, She leaves, no aehem stopping her or spoke to hr before she left. I hope u all hated it aswell, I didn't want to post it, double checked it, but then i thought i just do it. I hope u enjoyed it, but let me know if i should continue or not. How was it? Do comment and let me know

I have skipped the scene to Gopi leaving the house but i will come back to the scene where it stopped in the previous chapter. I will reveal why she left the house in chapter 3 when she will be having flashbacks of the day when she revealed the secrets which had been hidden to everyone which only Koki and Nani knew.
Sorry for skipping the part as it was taking forever as it would be taking at least 5 chapters so i shortened it. Sorry friends

i wish Gopi had not gone into acting dumb with the bhang today, instead she should have revealed all her Mami, Rashi did to her and they schemes to everyone but this bhang in the beginning she was just jolly but when required was serious like when she told Aham she can't live without him the first time, but today she was completely gone, incapable of revealing nothing.

Originally posted by: Nafisa_blossoms

i wish Gopi had not gone into acting dumb with the bhang today, instead she should have revealed all her Mami, Rashi did to her and they schemes to everyone but this bhang in the beginning she was just jolly but when required was serious like when she told Aham she can't live without him the first time, but today she was completely gone, incapable of revealing nothing.

So yes it would have been nice if Gopi had talked more like your ff chapter 1, about to read chapter 2 now.

yeh, i skipped all this and i will reveal the flashback of gopi having in the 3rd chapter
as it was going to take about 5 chapters so i cut it down, and made it simple so hopefully you see what happened after chapter one and why she left in chapter 3 when gohem will have flashbacks on that day after holi.

so chapter 3,will be all in detail when Gopi will be having flashbacks and how she made the decision to leave the house.

Have just read Chapter 2, i take it you had trouble writing this chapter, i think you should left it until later when you feel well, because when your mood is positive, most likely your mind is freer to think up more amazing things to put in your ff's. Gopi alone in a womans shelter, poor thing it's too sad Ayesha.

Originally posted by: Nafisa_blossoms

Have just read Chapter 2, i take it you had trouble writing this chapter, i think you should left it until later when you feel well, because when your mood is positive, most likely your mind is freer to think up more amazing things to put in your ff's. Gopi alone in a womans shelter, poor thing it's too sad Ayesha.

i did not have any trouble nafisa, its just that, i changed the chapter to this parts as i skipped 5 chapters about this trouble of gopi bring out the secrets in front of the family so i decided to put this chapter up and then in chapter 3 i thought while having flashbacks we will come to know the entire truth of what happened and what made gopi make this decision and leave,

Yeh she alone in womans shelter
poor wee gopi

Nice one dear but you need to do something about the melancholy note soon. Wish Gopi had revealed all this in series as well.

Continue soon

Wt do u mean by melancholy notes ? First time ave heard it

hope u are feeling well now. nice update.please continue.

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She leaned against the sofa an started to have flashbacks, now here we go to find out what actually happened that compelled her to leave the house

Back to the that day after the holi when she was revealing the secrets: ahem: how could u do this rashi with your own sister and urmi gopi tu app ko apni maa manti ha. ek maa apni beti ka saath aisa kasey kar sakti hai. aaj sabat ho gaya ka app gopi ki maa nahi uski mami hay jis ko siraf pasa(money) ka hayal hai. Aur kinjal gopi saved u so many time from troubles and what u did to her. u create misunderstanding between me and gopi. how could u do this kinjal.

Kinjal: but bhai, anita.

Gopi: wait (still in her high nasha of after eating bhang kai ladu), What Anita, kinjal, That anita, whom has ruined your life, this house, aehem life and most important my life, how can you even thing about her. That girl whom is out of control your taking her side, shame on you kinjal shame on you.

Gopi: aur aap maami, kaisi aurat hai aap, after my parents passed away, my father left me his pensions for my studies to my mamaji, but you, you took all that money off from mamaji, and spent it all on rashi education and the house expenses, you knew if I didn't get educated then you didn't need to get a servant to go all the jobs in the house but compelled me to do it, free of charge, that innocent child who did all the works, didn't even have a life to live of her own, how can you do this, and you Rashi, tujko to aakal honi chahiye, you could have stopped your mother from doing this but nahi, you joined hands with her and abused, punished, made that girl do all the stuff, and punished her even if she did not do anything, how cheap can you both drop to.

And you rashi, whatever happened in this house, I always backed you up, and lied for you but what have you done for that in return, nothing but the same abuse but not from you but made me do the stuff which would force aehem to abuse me, and made me do the stuff which he didn't like, but I tolerated it but now enough. First the laptop, then the blame on me for the bill in navrathri, then natak of dandiya, then the natak of faint in the cricket match, the cooker incident, the palour incident which you lied to us that your mother is unwell but instead you took her to the palour. That all enough, I can't have anyone using me now.

Kinjal: that's enough of you, stop all this, we don't need to understand you situation, how can you insult us?

Gopi: no you stop all this natak of yours, doesn't mean that your a daughter of a rich family you all can say whatever comes in your mind to the poor people. I have been working continuously day and night serving serving people like you who don't appreciate me. a khadoos like husband who cannot stand the sight of an illiterate wife and scheming witches who cannot see me happy ever. Yes a scheming witches all 3 of you as you all act like one.

Aehem from behind had lost all his hope, A man Aehem modi, who always held his head high in front of everyone now is lowering his head for the guilt he had done. He was surely embarrassed for the deeds he had done. But before he could apologized Gopi mentioned : this divorce papers which you gave me, you already had signed them now I have put the fingerprints on them, and live the life the way you want, I don't need a life like this. You can go back to Anita. She put his hand forward and gave him the divorce papers to send it to the lawyer.

He was shocked, before he could speak she gave him the divorce papers, where is her tolerance today, surely she had lost all the trust and hope,

She brought down the letter which someone had sent to her before marriage, and told jigar to read what it says, but before he could speaks, she went up to rashi, and urmi and said: what did you both say to me before marriage( in her nasha) after reading this letter to me, he says I want to get married to you, right , Jigar can you read what it says in that letter.

Jigar: I can't get married to you, I love Anita, Say No to this marriage. Aehem

Gopi continues and says: when i came to the house again and realized Aham didn't care for me, Rashi convinced me to do things to be thrown out and i did them, without realizing what she was planning to do.Then ghee in the achar, aha, ghee, now this incident, I asked Mani to give me the ghee instead of oil to add to the achar bottle to shock maaji rashi replaces to the oil , as rashi was behind it, just because she wanted the modi to fall down in the society. Rashi also put dents in the cooking pan and blamed it on me and i accepted it, as i didn't want to stay and cause Aham misery. Rashi put ants in the mithai for the offering, this resulted in maaji thinking and giving Rashi the keys of the household, to see how responsible she can be. Now you all can tell why maaji took the keys back from her. Rashi also then changed the fresh fruits in the shagun baskets and changed them for rotten fruit which she went to take from the market. Gift baskets were going to the Mehta's, this happened because i was found helping Rashi with flowers and i got shouted at.

Aehem was shocked, How can rashi do this to her own cousin sister.

Everyone was shocked.

Gopi: so this is another lie you said to me and compelled me to marry such a guy, whom had lost his 1^st love because of you, and I got the blame, now because of both of you, 3 of us ruined our lives. How can you, do this to a uneducated person, na jaiz faida utha diya tum dono nai.

Hetal and Jigar both boiling with anger, and both was shocked. Jigar knew he had to get strict like his brother and now he had to punish her for sure. So he decided to send her to her pihar until she doesn't sort herself out.

She came back to the reality, and then wiped her tears. She goes to the kitchen and gets some water and drinks it. She again have flashbacks to that day.

So Kinjal: what have you decided, Do you really want Anita in this house, because I have made my decision.

Gopi was getting more and more high on bhang. She smirks but then kinjal spoke: Whatever it maybe, I still want her back with bhai, no matter what you have done for me.

Everyone looks at her but Koki and Nani, had their head down, they felt as their gem was leaving the house but it was true. They were upset, no one could realize what a gem Gopi was, they both had lost all the hopes.

Gopi had an impression on her face as she was like a slave, but then she spoke for the final time to rahi and urmi, and to aehem.

She turns to them and speaks: so I was a slave at your house mami, Like you asked me to run all about Rajkot to help Rashi, but not any more, I am out of that house, and in this Modi mansion. Now I have decided to do something for myself for the 1^st time and now, I need to double think about the decision what I have thought about. Which I will personally let you all know tomorrow.

After she spoke this Urmi went to the door of the Modi mansion humiliated but Jigar stops her, and brings the suitcase out. Wait aunty, while you go, take your daughter with you until she doesn't sort herself out. I don't need a cunning and intelligent wife like her, I want her changed to a simple girl. She has hurt my feelings, take this rashi and leave, I don't want to see you here, otherwise if you refuse to go, I personally force you to go.

Rashi was shocked, she started to shiver and picked up her suitcase after saying I don't want to leave but she listened to him and left the house with Urmi and went to CM and locked herself in the room, crying, as well as she been humiliated. But she was sure she had to change.

The whole night Gopi locked herself in the guest room, while she was having a shower, she came to the reality and recollects of what she had done, She now decided to leave the house for sure. She had no hope to live in this particular house, as there was always, some or the other tension created and was to be blamed on her. So she came out of the shower and started to pack her clothes. She packed her clothes in the suitcase and zipped it, and called the shelter home as Panna gave her the number and booked an apartment for herself with the money she had left from her fathers pension.

After the flashback '( this is what happened that day after the holi, this is continued from chapter 1 where I stopped, but made I a flashback where gopi recollects of what she had done, so this is the flashback)

Gopi in the apartment, talking to one of the seniors of the shelter home about what had happened to her. She was talking to Sister Mary and she decided to help her be successful, and she shifted in her apartment with Gopi. So both Sister Mary and Gopi started to cook. After they cooked they ate and went to sleep.

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so this is chapter 3, i know by now u must have hated Aehem by now, poor wee gopi living all alone in the shelter house with Sister Mary. So this is the chapter which was going to take about 5 chapters but i skipped it and i shortened it to this much, so this is the actual thing what happens with Gopi with High on bhang enclosing secrets to the family, which leaving them to a shock, So the next chapter will include Gopi in shelter home, and how she builds up her career, while Aehem is trying to change himself.
Hope you all enjoyed it and do comment.

awesome ayesha...and nice that u have used the holi scene n developed it😊