New FF- Aandhi - revenge - Page 4

Originally posted by: madhu_sridhar

awesome ayesha...and nice that u have used the holi scene n developed it😊

Originally posted by: avivakirk

Loved it Ayesha! What firing all the culprits got!!! Gopi finally gave it to all of them. Now let Gopi become an educated woman with a difference.

Good job!!!!

Part 4 -

Aehem leans against the bed and think about all those things what happened that day. His inner voice was echoing, saying you should have stopped her, you know yourself you love her. You know anger isn't good for your health, and she was right, you do look like a fool when your angry, you cannot romance at all.

He told himself to shut up and ignored his inner voice.

He got up and took his watch of and stood in front of the mirror and put it on the table.

There his inner voice and appearance in front of him speaking:

You are a fool, a bigger fool no one has seen.

You cannot admit you love a poor girl like her,

she is everything what kind of girl you want,

yet still not admit it,

Shame on you.

He then speaks back to his inner voice:

Chup, why should I accept that gavar,

she is so imature and ignorance,

she has nothing which I can give her

she is everything but her illiterate is annoying

She cannot fit to my space,

my level

The voice speaks:

your such a fool,

why can't you admit you love her,

she said it to herself in the state of bhang,

you seen her innocence, and simplicity

she has every knowledge except she cannot read or write, she hasn't seen the world,

you must be one big Coward

Your a stoned hearted person which can't love or romance

you can't think of anything except from business

can't you realize your being used by your mother just because your father could not handle all this,

but no, your mother everything no.

Aehem sits down and says: no it can't be,

my mother cannot make me like this,

so what my father didn't handle business, hes a legend, with his poems,

why can't she understand he has sold his 15 poem books,

or is it that his father hasn't told her.

He had to get a grip and find out what is going on. He had to start the relationship again, but fro his father first, he had to have a bond between them, then he had to be happy, laugh like everyone else, he had to become like Jigar.

He thought of a solution and thought it will work so he will start it from tomorrow. Spend time with his family, less time in business

lovely update...plz continue soon (: