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Posted: 14 years ago
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ayesha sorry i missed most of your FFs due to lack of time. this is a beautiful story which you are writing.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ayesha really nice please continue.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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They thought, after engagement, 1st they do kinjal lagan then aehem gopis. It was fixed.

Chapter 4

Kinjal marriage had fixed to a guy called Elesh Mehta. Elesh who was the same rich people like Modis. They had joing joined business together and always helped them.

Elesh finds out about umang who'd been bothering Kinjal so, he made the marriage go private so he doesn't come to know. Kinjal became quite fond of him and handed him her mobile so umang doesn't irritate her.

They get engaged tonight in a private cermony whom there was only Modi, Mehtas and Shahs were there. The engagement was finished so Mehtas left.

Aehem who knows half of Gopi reality comes to know the other half: how she lost her parents, how she been dragged to pak jail, how she spent there, how she used to spend time in the shah house in childhood. He was angry, angry at those raghav and his gang. How dare they made that happen to this poor girl.

He comes to know about Anita, Anita was to joined in Raghav gang and was in jail with them. He was happy she got the saza instead of the police not from him so he left her in the state she was.

Today again gohem engagement was held in the temple in front of God. Gopi always desired to have a man like him, but she wondered would he even love her.

Aehem on the other hand couldn't tell her his feelings decided to tell her on the suhag raat. They get engaged to, in front of the people who come to listen to her faboulas voice. They all were happy.

Aehem had to go to the award cermony where everyone takes their better halfs, so him and jigar decided to take Gopi and Rashi. Gopi was sad, she didn't want to wear red dress , she felt uncomfortable in them so rashi forced her. She wore it. Rashi wore a blue dress and they both arrive at the cermony.

Aehem holds gopi hand as he knew she was scared so he took her inside and everyone looked at her and spoke : wow, Aehem modi wife is stunning, he found a gem for him, I heard they be getting married soon.

And then they saw Rashi : they whispered so rashi doesn't hear : she is quite modern, compared to Gopi, she is good looking, if she wore some other colour instead of blue would have made her gorgous but not more than Gopi.

They all sit down. Aehem barges 3 awards, 3 business awards. Everyone was happy and congratulated him for his engagement.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ayesha, u are a superb writer... i dunno how u manage to pull of these ideas...and the intro scene of the ff was very nice....and i bet raghav has a greater role 2 play ( btw, i've heard that name somewhere in some show).....good goin ayesha....😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Raghu was a role played by suniel shetty in main hoon na, just stole that name from it LOL hehehe

Thank u :D
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They all sit down. Aehem barges 3 awards, 3 business awards. Everyone was happy and congratulated him for his engagement.

Chapter 5

In the jail, raghav was planning a cunning trick to get out of the jail. And this time the person who was with them was Dhawaal, dhawaal was a senior member of the gang after raghav. He finally got raghav out of the jail and left the whole gang in the jail.

Raghav the most cruel terrorists had a plan to kidnap gopi and kill her just like what happened to the other 14 villagers.

So they made a plan. They sat down and gathered information of what to do. On the other hand kinjal and Elesh were doing the saat phere and they had finished the phere and left the house. They had gone to elesh house and spent their suhag raat.

Raghav finds out the modis and shah are going to the temple tomorrow so they will kidnap rashi and gopi there.

Will they be successful- find out later on
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Raghav finds out the modis and shah are going to the temple tomorrow so they will kidnap rashi and gopi there.

Will they be successful

Chapter 6

The Modi house has left to go to the temple meanwhile the shah house was already there. The modis reach and the pooja starts with gopi voice.

Raghav and dhawaal was coming, in a fast pace and was behind the temple to see what was going on.

When the pooja had finished rashi gopi aehem and jigar had gone downstairs and waited beside the car. There raghav comes and Gopi notices him. The guns went of air, people got shot. Rashi and gopi shocked to see dhawaal and then there raghav grabs gopi and rashi and puts the gun on their head and spoke: speak and move one bit and u will get shot in the head, move in the car.

Aehem and jigar tries to stop them but it was fulfill, behind them Elesh chup chup ke calls the police and the police arrives. Raghav got scared and got quickly in the car and drove fast. Rashi and gopi crying and trying to get out but dhawaal stops them and fires the gun on the floor. They got afraid.

Aehem gets worried, gopi had been already in a trauma and now again with that terrorist. He had to go something he realizes rashi has a phone but she will call them secretly. It will be dangerous if they called now.

The police still trying to catch them, police army force, and the CID went after them. It was dangerous to catch them. Suddenly they escape. They
failed to catch them.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ayesha! I am not here for a few days and I see that you have posted many nice stories. Where do you get the energy?

Nice story and the intrigue and the terrorism!Continue fast.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey bee how are u ? Thnks for the comment , tbh I have no answer for that, its just me and how I am, am always doing my essays and reports of my college work and then when am free for 5 hours I get busy myself to entertain myself and all of u out there across the world the people who I haven't seen and now am soo used to all of you.
Em thanks I will update the next chapter asap when I am out of the shower lmao
Is everything alright, surely missed u not talking to u, where have u been ?

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Chapter 7


Yeh Tera Mera Milna, Yuun Dilo Ka Khilna
Yeh Hai Khuda Ki Marzi, Yuhi Nahi Hain Yaar
Yeh Tera Paas Aana, Yuun Nazarein Milana
Yeh Hai Khuda Ki Marzi, Yuhi Nahi Hai Yaar
(tere Bin Tere Bin Dil Naiyo Lagta
O Tere Bin Tere Bin Dil Naiyo Lagta) - 2


Gopi in the dark store room, crying. She remembers the day when she left the house. That day when she was dragged to the enemies place and how she got treated and nearly got raped. She thank god for loads that she got saved. She remembers that day when she 1st met aehem at the temple. The day of the cobra scene and how she saves him.


Yeh Tera Mera Milna, Yuh Dilo Ka Khilna
Yeh Hai Khuda Ki Marzi, Yuhi Nahi Hai Yaar
Yeh Tera Paas Aana, Yuun Nazarien Milana
Yeh Hai Khuda Ki Marzi, Yuhi Nahi Hai Yaar
(tere Bin Tere Bin Tere Dil Naiyo Lagta
O Tere Bin Tere Bin Tere Dil Naiyo Lagta) - 2
Aaaaahhhhhh


On the other hand, Rashi thinks about those scenes with Jigar and kinjal. And how she contributed with them, how she flirted a bit. Those scenes when kinjal got engaged to Elesh and got married. Those scenes when gohem got engaged.


Dhadkan Ki Madhoshiyaa
Badhati Hai Nazdikiyaan Ek Bahaane Se
Ek Tu Hai Bekhabar, Baaki Sab Ko Khabar Hai Jahano Mein
Sari Umeede Meri
Hongi Mukamal Tere, Ek Nibhane Se
Jodi Sab Ki Milasye, Rab Jodiyan Banaye Aasamanon Mein,
Aasamanon Mein
Yeh Tere Mera Milna, Yuun Dilo Ka Khilna
Yeh Hai Khuda Ki Marzi, Yuhi Nahin Hai Yaar
(tere Bin Tere Bin Tere Dil Naiyo Lagta
O Tere Bin Tere Bin Tere Dil Naiyo Lagta) -3


Aehem thinks about the meeting, and how he 1st saw her on television interviewing about that raghav the terrorist. How he felt pain seeing her kidnapped and could not help her. How he got engaged, how they 1st met, how they played along and laughed. Surely he knew he loved her.


Bechaniyo Ke Yeh Pal, Kyon Janeja Aajkal, Yuun Satate Hai
Tere Ishq Mein Mujhse Beqariyan Mili Hai Nazrano Mein
Yaddon Ke Lamhat Bhi, Tujhko Hi Har Kahin, Kyuun Bultate Hai
Dil Ki Anjuman Tum, Tumhi Hi Rehti Ho Mere Afsano Mein
Afsano Mein
Yeh Tera Mera Milna, Yuun Dilo Ka Khilna
Yeh Hai Khuda Ki Marzi, Yuhi Nahi Hain Yaar
(tere Bin Tere Bin Dil Naiyo Lagta
O Tere Bin Tere Bin Dil Naiyo Lagta) - 4

that day how, jigar saw his brother laughing for the 1st time. That day how he felt very close to rashi and how he felt a bit of feeling for her. He was upset for sure.

Raghav calls the family, and says if he wants them back, bring 5 lakhs to the mountainside and you will see them there.
Aehem, Jigar and Elesh arranged 5 lakhs which wasn't a big ammount for them and takes it to the mountainside, they inform the police to come there aswell but surely should not be noticed. They carried guns aswell as the police, army force and CID told them to as raghav and dhawal would be using them aswell.

They all arrived, the police and cid all hid behind the jungle trees with the army force while Elesh, Jigar and Aehem were in the car. Jigar and Aehem walked up while elesh sorted out his gun so he could fire Raghav and Dhawaal. Raghav and Dhawal were beside the cliff with the girls holding them on the edge and was about to drop them.

The CID, abhimanu, and daya slowly walked up to their car and planted a bomb into it and ran to the rest of the team without them noticing.

Aehem gives them the 5 lakhs, Dhawal takes the money to the car while Raghav still standing there, and spoke: am impressed, u love her a lot don't you, here take them. Don't worry i didn't touch them.

Raghav left them on the edge and Gopi falls down the cliff and holds a tree which was hanging down. She cried for help.

Meanwhile, The bomb exploded and dhawall dies, Raghav gets arrested again and was taken to the most dangerous criminal police station which he was right at the bottom of the ground in the jail with the rest of his team.

Gopi still screamed for help, but she falls down and into the jungle.
Rashi and Kinjal screams and broke down. While he had tears in him.

The police, CID and the force went began to search for the body but got no result. They could not find her at all( hate this raghav )
they came back up and told them, and will search again after an hour and all midnight and tomorrow. If there was no clue, we still will find her, but the jungle was difficult, and scary, they heard when a person falls down they never come back alive.

Meanwhile Gopi was at the edge beside the river. The gang comes which was known as terrorists but they were not, they help humanity.
They take her to their place, calls the doctor and does her check up. She had lost her blood. The dacoit called Ambika Bhavani the owner of the gang made sure she was safe, and made a kasam that when she gets better she will be tough like us.

Back to the jungle, it was midnight, the police were still searching for her. They had lost all the hopes so they went back to the station while the army and the CID were looking for her.

In the Modi House, Everyone was tensed, and prayed that she is safe and sound and she returns to us quickly. Mami, Rashi and Kinjal were crying. They were shocked Dhawal were against them. He was killed. The police has lodged a case against Raghav, and was in several criminal records.

Raghav was happy for the trick he did, but the Modi got their 5 lakh back.
The mehtas were there too, praying and was upset.

It was morning and still not heard anything about her on the other hand, Gopi gains conscious and wakes up. She had changed her clothes and goes outside. She sees all mens dacoits, exercising for their gang fighting meanwhile they notice her alive an awake.

Ambika Bhavani sees her and introduces himself and becomes friends. They comes to know about her story and disgusted by Raghav who was their biggest enemy and was happy they were in jail. They did some search to get more information about them but was futile. Gopi who wanted to go back home but ambika refuses and says: you have to get better first. And then we will take you home.

Gopi who was still in the same situation. The police cid and the force and lost home and went to the Modi house. They speak up and says we have searched the whole jungle north west east and south and still not found out. We have lost hope and Gopi is not alive. We are afriad either the animals have ate her. Her body is missing and found only a bit of her cloth, and her ankles and her engagement ring. Aehem sees it and starts to cry. He had lost hope, totally.

will gohem be face to face - will gopi come in front of ahem, will ambika protect her and give her back to Aehem.
Find out later on with the next chapter .
Before i post it tomorrow, i want to know how you all find this .

Edited by ayesha_78 - 14 years ago

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