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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi Suk,

Amazing, fantastic ideas and you have put it together really well. Loved the ending, that's teaching Rashi or Rathi (the way you call her) a lesson. Fabulous update.

You have taken into account the age difference between Aham and Jigar, I have always wondered about that in the show, could be his adopted as you have suggested in your fan fic! If you think about it Hetal explained to Gopi (talking about the engagment rings before Kinjals/Elesh Mehta engagement ring went missing that Hetal was alone in the house for a long time before Kokila came, so how come she never got pregnant in all that time, could be she is barren!!! Also it explains a lot about the serial doesn't because that speech Hetal gave on Thursday and Friday about she being unable to say anything to Kokila (she being bari bahu she should have right to talk) but perhaps her rights are reduced as her son is not really blood of the Modi's but adopted. Makes sense, wow this serial could have a whole lot of can of worms to uncover in the future.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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part 12

The next few weeks Rashi felt cheated, urmilla taunts her you will not get a thing, Gopi will get everything, even if you have a baby it will not be a modi baby, jigar n aham relationship got better but aham did scold him for making mistake. G developers also started the project hummingbird, n their old clients came back after knowing that rashi would nt be coming to the office. Gopi would come into the office to discuss drawing , site visits n it would be strictly professional. Gopi would address Aham as mr modi n Aham mrs Gopi.
kokila parag n baa would come n stay for the thurs fri sat, sundays they would meet chirag jigar n hetal for the day they would laugh joke play cards. fun family day out rashi came once or twice she would just give Gopi dagger eyes. Aj was the center of attention as he kept the family joyful.
urmilla calls Rashi tells her find out who the house belongs to some how or another u need to get something out of this useless marriage. Rashi tells her no use it belongs to baa, her pyara pati built it for her. Rashi the old woman is health is failing she must have a will as to who the house goes to time to find it. Rashi when everyone was gone would go into baas room n look. she found nothing. urmilla advises Rashi to get transfer of ownership papers n get baa to sign the property to her. Rashi says how is she going to do this , urmilla tells her that you tell her jigar has asked her to sign her papers for medical insurance or something but instead you get her to sign over the property to you, once you have done that put the house for sale get rid of that mouse.
Rashi did what urmilla told her, she was successful, her n jigars relationship was going downhill, kokila called her to do some work, she replied why should i, kokila shouts what jigar n hetal come running, no kargari i am not going to do anything you say, Kokila says oh really, rashi replies this is my house you will be doing all the work, Rashi this is our house no this is not your house i own this house, kokila looks at her no baa owns this house , Rashi throws the transfer papers to kokila your dil cant read but you can. Hetal jigar n kokila look in shock, kokila calls aham n chirag they all come down, Rashi stands there looking very happy for herself. i want all of you to get out of my house, kokila moves towards her, you will not get away with this Rashi smiles oh i already have. Baa comes with marni she looks at rashi, Baa thank you for giving me this wonderful property, Baa looks confused what property ? oh you gave me modi mansion thank you. Baa says i did not oh baa you did remeber those insurance papers yes the ones that jigar gave to you for me to sign. Baa collapses my husband made this house for me he said to give to my grandsons. Rashi says to them i have orderred a truck for you to get your things out of my house. Chirag n Aham ready to slap rashi, but kokila says that is what she wants dont bother. Rashi listen to me carefully you may get the house but remember it all comes back you will lose everything. Rashi stands there looking smuggly. Aham calls Gopi tells her whats going on she tells him bring everyone to her house she has enough room for them.
Modi family leave looking at the house one more time crying kokila heart just breaks, they arrive at Gopis whose eyes are red from crying, she tells everyone to come, she tells them she will take kaka n kaki to their bedroom first then maji n papa, Aham ji take jigar to the guest room, then Baa she was given the bedroom on the ground floor, everyone was shell shocked of what happened Aj woke up n saw everyone he made their faces light up. Aj had everyone smiling, kokila says only a child can bring us happiness.now. Gopi cooked n served food even though everyone was is no mood to eat Aj starts to feed them one for me one for you n one by one he got them eating.
The weeks got better, Gopi was in a routine in the morning she sang her prayers which everyone enjoyed, she made sure that the cooking was done before she went to work, lunches she came back as now aj stayed at home with his grandmothers, she would come n pick everyone up when taking food to the mandir for feeding the poor, all was happy. Aj would keep Baa occupied as well as she took it hard that the house her husband built was gone. Kaka would go with Gopi projects went very well. Aham was worried for Gopi as she was running a full house, running her business everything, he admired her. One day Gopi was serving everyone breakfast she felt off she started to feel sick, her face was white she went running into the washroom, Aham went after her, kaka laughed that last time Gopi was sick was when she was expecting Aj . kokila hetal baa smile, Aham asks Gopi if she is alright Aham ji i am fine, Aham calls doctor who does test n confirms Gopi pregnant again. This time it was different she had her family with her.
Aj s third birthday arrived Gopi first did puja then she donated food n clothing then had a party with the family. Aj was exhausted he went to bed fast that day. The next day Aj went running to kakas room, he scream baba baba, he comes back mummy ji baba did not wake up, Gopi went running kaka was lying with his eyes shut smiling he had a picture of Gopi Aj n Aham in his hand. Gopi started to scream n cry nahi kaka nahi. aaham comes running he sees kokila n hetal come n take Gopi away, chirag n parag come, they call a ambulence n doctor they come n take kaka away. Once gone Aham went back into kakas room, he found a envelope with his name on it. it also said once my final rights are done open this letter n read it to Gopi.
The next day was the funeral all rituals were performed, Gopi was in a bad way the man who treated her like a daughter who taught her many things gone from her life. Mr sharma came afterwards, Mr modi a letter was left with your name on it ji Aham replies its time to open it.
In it was a letter Aham modi i have gone i promised myself my daughter will not be without her family if i died n she is with you all. My daughter is an amazing child she is very unique, when i first met her i could tell her heart was broken but never once did she say a word against you. I am hoping you will keep your promise to me that you will never hurt my daughter again.
After he read it Aham had tears, mr sharma says i have a dvd for you to watch. the family, gopi
The dvd starts, kaka ji speaks to Gopi
Gopi beta when i first met you i was not entirely honest with you, Gopi looks at him wondering why he is saying that, i told you my family had thrown me out, truth have it i had no family, i never go married as i was always busy working. Like you my parents died when i was young, but after leaving the orphanage i worked n i worked hard i didnt have time for a family, by the time i realised it was too late, i have built this empire but no heir to run it after me. Gopi in a daze, When i met you Gopi you were giving food to the poor i admired you, your were pregnant i decided to help you. Gopi you were exceptional you worked hard n you never complained. Aham before you say something Gopi did all of this without my help this business is all her, as they say when you do good, god rewards. Well God did reward time n time, Gopi grasped Business, marketing developing everything very quickly, she was a quick learner, sometimes i would question her decision n only see her reaping the rewards after rewards. Gopi my child you are confused i know, the empire i am talking about it is called Gopal industries, Aham looks at Chirag who is shocked, Gopi looks at Aham Gopal industries are the second biggest business in the nation after the mitthal industries. Gopi i am leaving you everything. Gopi is shocked, mr sharma comes in papers for gopi to sign. Gopi shocked signs the paper, Gopi beta i told you i wanted you to be reunited with your family before i left you n i have done that you. I am sorry i leaked the information to the press as i wanted you to back with your family.
Aham beta your wife is quite capable of running her empire she is a very bright intelligent, kokila you always say Gopi your vahu is a diamond i will say you are completely right.
Gopi i have left a dvd for aj me n him playing from when he was a baby i know he will be heartbroken so plse play the dvd everyday. Aj comes down he sees kaka Baba baba Aham beta you have woken up from your sleep, Gopi is shocked, Gopi feed him. But but Gopi beta i know i have gone but i also know this is what is happening now in our house. Gopi beta jai shree krishna.
Gopi crying n feeding Aj.
Edited by fanbidaai - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Nafisa_blossoms

Hi Suk,


Amazing, fantastic ideas and you have put it together really well. Loved the ending, that's teaching Rashi or Rathi (the way you call her) a lesson. Fabulous update.

You have taken into account the age difference between Aham and Jigar, I have always wondered about that in the show, could be his adopted as you have suggested in your fan fic! If you think about it Hetal explained to Gopi (talking about the engagment rings before Kinjals/Elesh Mehta engagement ring went missing that Hetal was alone in the house for a long time before Kokila came, so how come she never got pregnant in all that time, could be she is barren!!! Also it explains a lot about the serial doesn't because that speech Hetal gave on Thursday and Friday about she being unable to say anything to Kokila (she being bari bahu she should have right to talk) but perhaps her rights are reduced as her son is not really blood of the Modi's but adopted. Makes sense, wow this serial could have a whole lot of can of worms to uncover in the future.

another one of my predictions 😉 the reason kokila has more right is because of this its the only explanation that makes sense. but can you image rashi n urmillas face 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: fanbidaai

another one of my predictions 😉 the reason kokila has more right is because of this its the only explanation that makes sense. but can you image rashi n urmillas face 😆


If it is it's a masterstroke by the infamous Saathiya CV's and we have guessed their game here on indian forums, it's just too much slow coach type of storytelling though. But wow, it's going to be huge dhamaka for the Shah's Urmila and Rashi will be livid.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: Nafisa_blossoms


If it is it's a masterstroke by the infamous Saathiya CV's and we have guessed their game here on indian forums, it's just too much slow coach type of storytelling though. But wow, it's going to be huge dhamaka for the Shah's Urmila and Rashi will be livid.

i cant wait the biggest slap for urmilla n rashi.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
Ruk nice update and thanks for luking after my nieces...😉
btw 2 songs that i'm sure that jiju is fond of are "ayaiya karu main kya suk-u suk-u" from jungalee and " ruk ruk ruk, arre baba ruk.. Oh my darling give me a luk" from vijaypath, rite?😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
Sukben that was the best, I have a feeling your predictions will come true in the future, as they have before. Thanks for writing this great FF
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58
WOW - that was great. I am gone one afternoon from my computer and you write 2 chapter , I need to take more afternoon off . Please continue with the story. you have me on pins and needles.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
Suk wonderful updates more soon please!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
suk ben....dat was great😊.....sukpredictions.com still goin strong...

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