Ahamji where are you? part 17page 14

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parts one n two
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part three
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it was nearly 3 1/2 years since Aham came home, Gopi was gone she found the picture of Anita n him in the diary, she also left that letter that said he did not want to marry her as he was in love with Anita. Everything was going perfectly, Aham kept his vachan to his mom that he would respect gopi he also started to teach Gopi to read n write, he looked forward to coming home. He realised his wife was very bright she was a simple girl who did not want anything. She loved his family as her own, n even loved her cousin n aunt who treated her so cruely. She was very good with numbers n loved reading the holy book. Last thing at night she would read to Aham if she made a mistake he would correct her.
The night before she left, it was a magical night, they had dinner with family n Gopi finished cleaning the kitchen n came upstairs, kokila who had mixed mendhi told gopi to put it on her hair. Gopi did what she was told, Aham was busy working, Gopi asked if he needed anything, he replied no with a smile. Gopi went into the bathroom n washed her hair, she came out towel drying her hair, Aham was mesmerised he gawped at Gopi. He shut his laptop n put it away then walked over to Gopi she did not notice him there n she flicked her hair back Aham just stared, she then saw him she looked at him n said marf karna i didnt see you, she then saw his shirt was wet, she then used the towel wiping the water to try n dry it. Aham grabbed the towel n threw it on the chair, Gopi looked at him he then lifted her up n went to the bed, he put her down, n lights out guys 😆😉. In the morning Gopi was downstairs doing the pooja preparations he came down n smiled at her. Kokila saw she was delighted as her dikra was happy.

Today the modi parivaar were at the mandir it was the snake puja, Aham had flashbacks of when Gopi saved him, he went to the mandir where the preist was doing the puja. kokila in self thought kanaji mera dikra ko bhol hogaye plse let him find his wife please. Then kokila saw a little boy sitting by the preist he had his hand folded eyes closed listening to the prayers, kokila looked at him she smiled, she whispers to hetal look at the loving boy he is so sweet, hetal replies ji kokila but doesnt he look familiar kokila looks at hetal confused Hetal smiles he looks like Aham as a child. kokila smiles again he did look like her dikra the same eyes nose. She looked over to Aham he was also sitting the same way, n laughed.
Once the prayers are over kokila asked the priest who that sweet boy was? He tells her he is the son of one of the sweetest girl in the world, she is like a angel. kokila smiles. Aham n family started to walk towards the car, Aham forgot his phone at the mandir so he walks back, he gets their the pandit brings it to him. The little boy runs into him, he is scared. Aham smiles n asks him whats wrong he tells him he is scared of the snakes, so aham asked him wheres ur mom the little boy says she was at the mandir a few minutes ago n i got scared n ran away. Aham looked at him ok let me take you to your mom he picks him up, he asks the boy what is your name? the boy replies Aham, Aham he tells him that his name. ok Aham lets find your mom, little Aham smiles.
After a while Aham heard a voice Aham ji Aham ji where are you? Aham ji Ahamji, it sounded so familiar he looked round n could not see who was shouting, then from behind he hears a voice suniye marff karna i hope my son has not disturb you from your prayers. Aham's mouth wide open that voice that sweet voice the one he missed so much, he slowly turns round standing there is Gopi . Gopi looks at Aham in shock, she has not seen him since she left, Aham is also staring at her he looks at little Aham confused, mummy ji little aham shouts. Aham modi looks at him n says Gopi, little Aham looks at him n says uncle how do you know my mummys name? Gopi puts her hands out to take her son from Ahams hand. Gopi looks at little Aham, she says Ahamji dont ever run away again i was scared. Aham is in shock he stands there, little aham replies marff karna mummy ji it will never happen again he hugs n kisses her. Gopi tell me who this little boy is? just then panna arrives she is shocked also seeing Aham n Gopi looking at each other, panna says he is Adopted, Aham is speechless, his love his wife is standing in front of him. A crowd of people appeaar as they do in these movies n serials gopi starts to walk of slowly, then Aham hears kokila shouting his name he turns round n sees kokila n looks back Gopi gone.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow, are you going to continue, please, you have left me hanging here, that was wonderful.
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Originally posted by: sbp1971

wow, are you going to continue, please, you have left me hanging here, that was wonderful.

yes in a short while..
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Suk, the search for gopi and his son starts, really good story,

i'm wondering where gopi is living? what she does for a living, all to be revealed in the chapters i'm sure, thanks for starting a new ff.
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part two

Mummy that man he has the same name as me, Gopi smiles, beta i was so worried about you, but mummy the snakes scared me so i ran into him. Aham ji i have told you before if a snake comes towards you, you do not run away you stand their like a tiger. Little Aham roars Gopi smiles n hugs him, i love you so much, panna Gopi didi arent you worried, Gopi looks at panna worried for what.. panna says never mind didi, Gopi stops n looks at her touches her face Panna i am not worried i have you n my dikra that is all i need. Panna smiles n they start to walk again. Gopi opens the car door puts Aham ji in his car seat, panna sits in the passenger, gopi drives back home.

Aham dikra whats the matter, whos child were you holding? Aham stammers eh mom oh nobodys he was lost i gave him back to his mother, Aham in self thought he could not tell mom anything she has already suffered two heart attacks gopi leaving took a toll her, Aham didnt realise how much his mother loved her Gopi vahu she missed her soo much. Aham you know that little boy you were holding hetal n i noticed how much he looked like you when you were young, i could say he was the spitting imagine of you. Aham smiles, i am wondering if Panna lied. i need to speak to the pandit i will come tomorrow n c him. After dinner Aham made a phone call to Anita, Anita the same girl he had ditched n married Gopi. Anita i need to see you now, Aham i am having dinner after dinner he replies ok i will meet you. That evening Anita arrived at the house she said jai shri krishna to all everyone smiled n acknowledged her except kokila time n time she told Aham that he having a relationship with that girl was wrong you forgot what her brother did to kinjal, n she is the reason that Gopi left this house. Each time Aham told his mom that nothing is going on she is just a friend.
Aham takes Anita to the terrace, Aham whats happened that you wanted me to come, Anita i saw Gopi today, i saw Gopi, Aham thats fantastic news what did she say how did she look. Aham says she has a son, Anita mouth open Aham what did she say, she didnt say anything he must be around 3 years old, heres a picture of him she looks at the photo he is beautiful Aham very cute. panna her little sister was with her she said he was adopted, Aham you know gopi was a simple girl with a good heart she would always helps people, Aham has tears in his eyes Anita u see that picture i have given you, anita nods thats not a picture of her son its a picture of me. The little boy who was with Gopi looks exactly like me. Anita she has named him Aham, she calls him Ahamji. Anita she lied to me, Anita looks at him but didnt you say that she didnt say anything, it was panna who spoke. Aham looked at anita yes it was panna not Gopi. Aham have you told your family he shakes his head i dont want to get their hopes up. Tomorrow i will go back to the temple n speak to the pandit. Anita says i will come with you, but anita your family might not approve, she smiles approve or not my friend needs my help. Pick me up in the morning good night she kisses him n leaves .
Aham picks up Anita in the morning n goes to the mandir, the pandit was finishing up the prayers so he could leave as its had been a exhausting day. Aham goes up to him, greets him first then asks him about the little boy who was at the prayers at first the priest had no idea until he mentioned about his mom asking about the boy. Ahhh Aham that his name, ji what do you want to know, his mother n father, the pandit asks if they are in trouble, no nothing like that its just she reminded me of my friends wife i just wanted to meet my friend again, Aham then turns round god marff karna i need to see gopi again. Aham's mother Gopi she is one of gods angels, she is a honest hardworking person, Aham asks what about her husband, dikra i have never seen her husband, from the day she started to come here, first it was to pray n always she had tears in her eyes she never said once why, even now she has tears in her eyes but not once has she why. I also ask about her husband when shall i meet him she always says when gods wants you to meet him you will. Aham asks what does she do? Beta she had a little bit of money in the beginning at first she would cook breakfast n sell it at one of the huts below, she would also feed the poor, i suppose all that paid off as they say god always rewards for doing good, even now she sends a truck with food for the poor everyone loves her. She has set up chain of restaurants called Hari chai. Aham smiles beta do you know how well that girl did she now has her own house car n restaurants all over the city. Pandit ji, also now she has adopted a little boy, pandit looks confused one minuted adopted she has not adopted anyone except panna, Aham is her son she gave birth to him when my wife asked if we should contact her husband she just replied not to disturb him as he would just get angry. Aham puts his head down in shame. Pandit then says i will leave now as i have to be back in the evening jai shri krishna
Aham looks at anita crying, its all my fault, Gopi gave birth to our son, i have a son anita i have a son. Anita how do i get Gopi to come back? how do i let her know i love her? how how? Aham broken. After Aham calmed down, anita tells him you are going to have to win her back n get your son. Aham looks at anita n smiles she named her restaurants Hari chai Green tea do you know she didnt even know what green tea was aham laughs. I love n want my wife .
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👏 Ok I am starting a new trend here, I have to say Thank you Gopi style so Thank you for the great update Sukji.
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Part 3
Aham tells Anita i have heard of hari chai, the office staff go there for lunch but i never went, they always says how the breakfast n lunches are the best in the city. They are known for dhoklas n theplas even the lunches are suppose to be healthy. Aham lets go but which one, Anita says lets go to the first one that orginally opened. Call Rohan we shall go together, ok says Anita. They go to the restaurant, Anita goes in first Aham says he will wait outside for rohan, Anita goes in n sits down, the waitress comes n asks her if she would like anything she tells her she is waiting for somebody in a short while they will order. Gopi n little Aham come from round the back she walks in to the restaurant from the back door, Gopi greets everyone jai shree krishna all her staff stop to greet her they are smiling. little Aham runs off round the restaurant Gopi after him, she sees anita sitting there, Gopi just stares n remember what aham said to her that he was only in love with anita, Gopi walk over to anita who is shocked at seeing Gopi standing there, Gopi asks Anita if she has been served, she tells her she is waiting for her husband, your husband ji oh look here they come, Gopi sees Aham coming towards the door, she tells anita if you need anything just call the waitress. ji thank you Gopi leaves picking up little aham who was playing with the staff n goes into her office. she has a window which is blacked out so she can see everything but no one can see her. little Aham tells her he wants to go out she tells him not yet, he starts to fight with her, Gopi still calm just then one of the staff walk in, Gopi beta i can hear Aham let him come with me, ji kaka, kaka has been with Gopi since she first open her hut at the mandir at first he use to refuse payment now he was like a father to Gopi, he was around 70 years old. He also lives with Gopi she adores him, little aham calls him baba.
Little Aham n kaka leaves gopis office, Gopi goes back to the window she can see Aham with anita n this other guy she just looks, she sees kaka ji n little aham going to a table, Aham ji what would you like to drink, lil aham replies green tea baba ji. Aham sees him n smile he has tears in his eyes then Gopi sees Anita hand on Ahams he is smiling at her. Gopi has tears. Gopi goes back to her desk n starts to work she does not look up her heart cant take it. Aham gets up from his table hey Aham buddy how are you? do you remember me? lil Aham looks at kaka, baba this is my uncle he saved me yesterday i got afraid of the snakes, kaka looks up he is taken aback by Aham, n says Aham both reply ji aham beta i will get your green tea, he stands up n says nice to meet you. He leaves n goes towards Gopi office. whilst going he orders a green tea for lil Aham.
Aham asks lil Aham what he likes to eat n drink he tells him he likes dhokla thepla n loves green tea aham smiles, he asks him where is your father, lil aham says i never met my father in his cute voice, , you know Ram n sita my mummy always says he is like Ram. i will meet him soon. My mummy says if you ask god with a pure heart your wish will come true, Aham turns round looks at anita who also has tears in her eyes.
Kaka goes in Gopis office, Gopi beta you pati is here, Gopi looks at him with tears kaki ji he is no longer my husband he is with that girl there the girl he always loved he is now married to her . They are here together with there friend let them get served n they will eat n leave, plse go back n dont leave Ahamji by himself. there. kaka ji replies Gopi beta you know that marriage is illegal, kakaji i know but i am not going to hurt myself or Aham jis family. Ok Beta i will leave promise me you will not cry. Ji kaka ji smile beta kaka leaves.
Kaka goes to get thepla n green tea for lil Aham, aham is there sitting down with him talking to him, he asks him does mummy ever get angry, lil aham replies mummy never gets angry even when i do the wrong thing she always smiles n tells me how to do it the right way. Kaka comes Aham beta your food n green tea, make sure you eat all. Aham gets up kaka ask Aham if he would like anything, Aham looks at lil Aham him i mean i would like the same as what he is eating. Kaka looks at him n says mehma sahib is waiting aham smiles n leaves.
Anita Rohan he is my son aham whispers but where is Gopi? As they were all having breakfast , Aham tasted the food this was gopis food her taste her touch Anita calls the waitress, ji i would like to speak to the owner of this restaurant the waitress looks confused, ji i would like to compliment her on the wonderful food you have served today. My husband n i would like to discuss business with her. The waitress tells her one minute i will call her, the waitress goes into Gopis office, she comes out n calls kaka ji, Gopi tells kaka ji take the compliment n what ever business they want to do is to write a proposal and if i am interested i will call them.
Kaka repeats the message to Aham, anita n rohan. Aham looks dissappointed that Gopi did not come out but could understand, he was not going to give up that easily.
Kaka looks at Aham thank you n your wife n your friend in coming, Aham looks at him confused, Rohan speaks uncle she is my wife he is our friend. kaka ji says maff karna didnt know. kaka goes back to the office Gopi beta you are mistaken she is not ahams wife she was the other persons wife. Gopi looks at him confused no anita pointed at him, beta she pointed towards the men she was pointing at the other guy. Gopi looks confused.
Anita n Aham are in deep conversation outside, rohan tells Aham he has every right to see his son call the lawyer , Anita tells him yes he does but not that way Aham has to gain back Gopi trust, she needs to see a different side of him. Rohan tells aham what do you want? i want Gopi back i now what my son as well. Well be prepared to fight because trust is a hard thing to gain back you have hurt her so much in the past it will take time.
Aham goes back at lunch time, he asks for little Aham the waitress tells him he has gone for his nap with his mom, Aham asks where, Sir they have gone home Aham disappointed kaka comes over beta did you leave anything yes my wife n child. kaka looks at him you never came with them, Aham looks at him in tears i hurt my wife so much i lost her a long time ago, i wish i could take back everything i said n done to her, i only just found out about my child. kaka looks at him in shock he tells Aham you broke her heart into tiny pieces, she was a lost soul when i met her chota aham has mended her heart, why are you coming back into her life now? Aham is shocked to hear all of this uncle ji i know i have hurt her but by the time i realised my true feelings about Gopi it was too late she left me, i didnt get the chance to tell her i have been searching for her, kaka replies Gopi is a simple girl up to now she still does fasting for you, Beta i love Gopi like my own child, my family disowned me all i have left is gopi, but krishan bhagwan can call me anytime, i want my daughter to have her happiness, she is a execellent mother, daughter, n you know she was a wonderful dil to your family, she was a diamond wife for you. i want it all back for her. She buries herself in her work, she naps during the day with lil Aham n stays awake at night working, she is like a machine non stop.
Aham listens to kaka, he says kaka ji how do i win her back, Aham today when you came with the girl n her husband she thought that anita was your wife, Aham confused she is just my friend whatever feelings i had for anita died a long time back it was my ego that refused to listen to what my heart was saying.
Kaka says she always said your mother never treated her like a dil she treated her like a daughter, she speaks fondly of your family. Tomorrow is the opening of our 8th restaurant at the new mall Indiaplaza mall. Come with your family ji kakaji. Aham leaves he goes home.
kokila is shocked to see him this early aham dikra is everything ok ji mom i need to talk to you n papa alone. come upstairs rashis who is listening to the conversations followss them. Kokila closes her bedroom door, kokila says what is it? Aham starts out by saying he saw Gopi yesterday at the mandir, kokila says why did you not tell us? Mom there is more, sit down i need you both to sit, she is not alone, kokila starts thinking the worse that Gopi has got married again. No mom Gopi hasnt got married again. Then dikra what is it, you know that little boy you n kaki saw yesterday at the mandir, yes yes i said he looked like you, well he is me well a part of me, he is gopi n my son. Kokila in shock, mom are you ok parag is crying kokila is smiling n crying his name is Aham Parag Gopi modi. mom i have hurt Gopi so much i dont know if she will come back. He then tells them how successful gopi is in business n how people have respect for her. He also tells kokila about the opening of the new restaurant n how kaka invited him. at the door kokila sees rashi crouching down she goes over to the door n pulls it open n in comes Rashi, kaki ji i wanted to know if you would like some tea , so why were you crouching on something fell on my sari so i was wiping that. Hmmm jiju ji would you like some tea, aham totally ignores her mom tomorrow be ready we shall leave at 6 pm plse tell kaki n kaka we will be going out tomorrow, rashi asks where r we going, rashi we are going out u are staying here.


Edited by fanbidaai - 14 years ago
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once again that was beautiful, can't wait for the confession on love from Ahem to Gopi.👍🏼
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Suk that was awesome. Loved it. Let Ahem pine a little bit more. Can't wait for the next part update soon please.
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part 4

Next day Aham was excited he went to the restaurant, as he drove in he saw Gopi she was putting the car seat belt on Aham, Aham looked round to see where Gopi's driver was, Kaka comes Gopi smiles he goes n sits in the passenger seat, Gopi then walks over to the driver seat, Aham is smiling he looks at her she does not see him but kaka does see him n smiles. Gopi driving he is happy she amazes me i love this girl even more, he calls up Anita, Anita you never guess Gopi drives a car, he has a flashback of the time he took out the seat belt for her when they were going to take shugun for kinjals future inlaws. Kinjal messed up big time, Aham follows Gopi she is deep in conversation with kaka, they are discussing the opening, kaka tells Gopi he has invited a few more persons Gopi has no problem she tells him to take as many invititations as he wants.
They arrive at the indiaplaza mall Aham stops, n admires his wife. One of the trucks was not starting Gopi comes out of her car, n goes over to the driver of the truck bhaiji whats the matter, ji didi the truck has a fault, we are trying to start it n this one is causing a problems, Gopi smiles koi bhath nahi, let see what we can do, Gopi goes into the truck kanaji plse marduth karna, Gopi puts the keys in the inigition n starts it, she tells the driver fix the problem what ever it is then give the truck to a charity home, i shall order a new one today. She then slowly drives it out, Aham rubbed his eyes he can not believe. Kaka who is out of the car getting little Aham out sees Aham parked up he looks at him n makes a eye expression as if to say this is your wife. Aham nods n acknowledges.
Back at MM Hetal asks kokila where are they going tonight, mota bhabi kokila replies you know if i tell you that the news of the modi household will go to your dil, somehow or another she tricks you into tell so i am not going to tell you all, because if i tell you i am sure something will go wrong, hetal nods her head as to agree i will say be ready for 6pm.
Kaka walks over to Aham with lil Aham with the invitation, he tells him to come n enjoy. Ji kaka ji n thank you for your help. Aham smiles at lil Aham, Aham buddy how are you? i am fine, who is looking at ahams car, i like your car Aham smiles would you like to see the inside, ji kaka says one minute Gopi beta will be here soon, lil aham goes in n says when i am big i want a big car like this one, Aham says you will get it as well. Kaka ji when did Gopi start to drive. Kaka laughs she amazes you huh, i was driving 3 years back but my eye sight was failing i dont like wearing glasses so i taught Gopi to drive, she shocked me one day she drove the truck, she just said it was the same as driving a car but just higher up. she use to deliver the food herself at first, her hard work paid off in a short period of time, she is a blessed child. Aham come beta lets go ji baba ji. kaka leaves with lil Aham.
Aham drives off back to his office with a smile on his face, the more n more he thought about Gopi he has butterflies in his stomach, what will happen tonight. At work he could not concentrate he left early, jigar came to him with some notes but Aham told him to deal with them.
Back at mm kokila n parag were getting ready, Aham also freshened up chirag arrived n hetal who was already dressed came with tea from the kitchen. she offered it to chirag n told him to change he told her he was ok he will go like this, Aham where are we going tonight, kaka ji plse just come i need your support today. i need my family back with me. ok we will support you. Kokila n parag arrive all excited they finish their tea n leave.

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