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br2499

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Aha! Nafisa ben! you are a revelation! wonderful and as I predicted in my PM, very methodical and detailed. The story just flows. Loved it. Are you continuing? Please do!

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Yuks

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Very sweet.
But this would have been nice as a full-length
It was a bit rushed in the details

Yuks

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HansaN

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

why did u stop updating. please update soon cant wait too much to read more.

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-Nafisa-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: queenyuks
Very sweet.
But this would have been nice as a full-length
It was a bit rushed in the details

Yuks

Yuks,

i am happy with it, and i have fulfilled what i intended to do, to make Aham accept Gopi (the title of the ff) when i started to write it. Perhaps you can write more under your fan fics.

Nafisa

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-Nafisa-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: rubinahansa
why did u stop updating. please update soon cant wait too much to read more.

rubina,

i think i gave a hint into what Aham's feelings were at the end of the story, he was thinking how proud he was of "his Gopi" by that i thought everyone would get it that he has accepted Gopi, so i thought i had fulfilled my story title, Aham accepts Gopi and the remit to bring these two into a couple.

Since i have done that no further need to expand on the story, i'm exploring other stories and you will read them i'm sure.

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HansaN

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

ok does that mean you are not writing this ff anymore.

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-Nafisa-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: ayesha_78
nafisa sis do update soon

choti behn read the last reply on page 4 for your answer...lol.

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-Nafisa-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

I don't understand Saathiya CV's leave too much loose ends, you know that Switzerland tender being won by Aham was a catering contract back home, why didn't he do exactly as I put in my OS here, get Kokila to head the catering contract...what is happening with the catering business who is running it, once they won the tender we didn't hear about it again, so useless they don't tie things up nicely, this education track of Gopi's could have gone in nicely with the catering business, like I have here.

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-GayabCat-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Nafisa_blossoms
I don't understand Saathiya CV's leave too much loose ends, you know that Switzerland tender being won by Aham was a catering contract back home, why didn't he do exactly as I put in my OS here, get Kokila to head the catering contract...what is happening with the catering business who is running it, once they won the tender we didn't hear about it again, so useless they don't tie things up nicely, this education track of Gopi's could have gone in nicely with the catering business, like I have here.

admit it CVs are ek dum bewaqoof

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-Nafisa-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: ayesha_78

admit it CVs are ek dum bewaqoof

I know, but as Gopi was instrumental in getting the tender in Switzerland, why didn't they tie it in with the education track, would have been great to make Gopi smart in business and leave Rashi at home out of her way...instead they are leaving Gopi at home, in the hands of the wolfs until now...and not capable of leaving the kitchen.

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