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Posted: 14 years ago
wow...lovely.😊 waitin 4 de next one
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey loved it omg cant wait for the next part...plz post it soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Shilpa - VM was great - now I have another song to listen on youtube. I just love this forum

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Posted: 14 years ago
Here is the next part.


Part 23


After the wedding ceremony the pandit is setting up for the peace pooja that Ahem and Gopi is going to sit for later. The family goes to eat breakfast before the guest starts to arrive.


Urmi and Rashi are first to show up, everyone is greeted, Urmi immediately notices how Ahem kept looking at Gopi, (after all love can't be hidden) and gets curious, and thinks oh no this two are getting close, they are going to have to do something to keep them apart, what Urmi, Rashi or Kinjle doesn't realize is that Ahem is totally head over hills in love with his wife and nothing can keep him away from her, he had made her a promise that day, to be with her, to love her in sickness and health, no matter what comes their way he has promised to stand by her, and he will keep that promise to her til the day he takes his last breath.


Mehta's are next to arrive, everyone is greeted, Gopi takes blessings from Mr and Mrs Mehta, and goes and stands next to Ahem, Ketki looking at them and says to Koki, your son and daughter make the best couple, they compliment eachother perfectly, everyone looks at them, Gopi flushes and Ahem is smiling looking at her. Ketki asks where Kinjle is, Gopi says she will go get her.


When Gopi gets close to Kinjle's room, she hears voices and thinks who is Kinjleben taliking to, she sounded scared like the person on the phone is threatening her. Gopi knocks on the door, Kinjle hangs up the phone and come out of the room, she looked scared and nervous. Gopi says are you ok Kinjleben, she snaps at Gopi and says I am fine what do you want? Ahem who had followed Gopi, hears this and says Kinjle watch your manners, is this anyways to talk to your bhabhi, he was about to shout at her, but Gopi puts her hand on his arm and stops him, she says to Kinjle your in laws are here, get freshened up and come down quickly, Kinjle goes back in the room and closes the door.

Gopi truns to Ahem and says you shouldn't shout at her, she is about to get married. Ahem says, I didn't like the way she was talking to you. Gopi says its ok, she is probably getting nervous about the whole wedding, there is lot of changes coming in her life, just let her enjoy her time in her home, everything will change for once she leaves here, have patients with her, you will miss her when she is gone. Ahem says ok, but I still don't want her to talk to you like that, she smiles at him and squeezes his hand, he smiles back and they go back down.


Seeing Ahem and Gopi coming down together make Urmi mad once again, she keeps glaring at Gopi who ignores her, Urmila looks over at Koki who is glaring at her and quickly looks away and thinks, it time to put my plan into action, she know who Kinjles boyfriend is and she was going to meet him to give him the idea of how to ruin the Modi name and then she will play her ace and get Dhaval married to Kinjle, then Koki wont be able to glare at me,she tinks, her daughter will be in my hand.


Kinjle comes down and takes blessings from her in laws, Mani comes and tells the family Panditji is calling for the pooja, everyone goes to the mandir. Panditji asks Gopi and Ahem to take their seat in front of the Havan and the pooja begins.


After the pooja, once again GoHam take blessings from everyone, when they get to Koki she blesses them and takes Kajal from her eye and put a little dot on Kajal on both Gopi and Ahem and says to keep you safe from someones evil eyes, looking at Urmi and Rashi.



Sorry this is all I could come up with today. Off work for next two days, hope to write more for both FFs. Will update soon.

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Posted: 14 years ago
Shilpa - It is not the quantity but the quality. Thank you for the update it was great.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Gr8 need more to get all the boredom out of my head :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ayesha when are you going to update this ff. please update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Shilpa it's really good. excellent, even down to the blessing to ward of the evil eye of the Vamps.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Next part



Part 24


Everone is in the dinnig hall, Gopi and Ahem unable to keep their eyes off each other. Elesh's bhabhi seeing this teases Ahem, she says to him Ahem bhai, kya baat hain, you can't keep your eyes off your wife today, Ahem fluses at first, but decide to tease Gopi and says, what can I say bhabhi, she just looks that good today, everyone is shocked, Ahem flirting with his wife openly, then they all give happy smile, Gopi looks at him, flushes and leaves from there. Koki scolds him, Ahem stop embarrasing my vahu, but gives him a happy smile. Koki is on cloud nine today, finally her dream is coming true.

After everyone leaves Gopi is in the kitchen, over seeing the cleanig with Mani, Rashi comes there trying to taunt Gopi.

Rashi to Gopi, don't you think your taking this act too far, don't start thinking its for real, I still say you will be out of the house after Kinjle get married. Ahemji still won't want an uneducated wife. Gopi looks at Rashi, and says to her, I already told you once, mind your own business and don't worry about me. Now if you are not going to help leave the kitchen and get your beauty rest, and turn her back on Rashi.


Rashi leaves from there in temper thinking, one day soon I am going to get you, wait and see. (lato ke bhoot, baton se nahi mante)


For those who wanted me to warn you


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Next part read with caution,




Back in GoHam room, Ahem is impatiently waiting for Gopi to come, he has the bed decorated with flower petal, has candles lit all over the room, he goes to the stereo and ques the CD player to play the correct song. He couldn't wait to show Gopi how much he loved her. Just then he hears her bangles and payal's noise, he turns towards the door witn anticipation.

She enters the room with water pitcher and stops and looks around with surprise on her face. She gives him a shy smile, puts the water pitcher down and turns and locks the door, but she is too nervous to turn towards him again.

He walks towards her and stands behind her close to touching her back with his chest, puts his left hand on the door and his right arm around her waist slowly.


Gopi's breathing increases alon with her hear beat, she closes her eyes.

Ahem nuzzles her neck and whisphers her name, and says don't tell me my wife is going shy on me again, he moves his right hand on her stomach.

Gopi sucks in a breath and could feel her heart rate increasing even more.

CD player click on and a song starts playing.


aye kaash ke hum hosh mein ab aane naa paaye

bas nagmein tere pyaar ke, gaate hee jaaye


Ahem turns Gopi around and gently pushes her against the door and presses her body against hers, he starts kissin her neck while the music still playing in the background.


khilatee, mahakatee ye julfon kee shaam

hasate, khanakate ye hothhon ke jaam

aa zoom ke saath uthhaye, bas nagmein tere pyaar ke ..


He loosens her hair and runs his hand thru her hair, he kisses her cheeks and slowly moves towards her lips, she opens her eyes and runs from him, he catches her sari pallu, she stops, he comes to her and unwraps her sari from her body and drops it on the floor. Gopi standing there only in her peticoat and blouse, and he thought she was the most beautiful thing in the world. He romoves his sherwani top and puts his arms around her and once again starts to kiss her neck and shoulder.


Song contiunes


ho bas agar tum humaare sanam

hum to sitaaron pe rakh de kadam

saaraa jahaan bhool jaaye, bas nagmein tere pyaar ke ..


While his kissin her neck, his hands move up her ribcaige and he unhooks the bottom two hooks of her blouse, just as he is reaching for the third she turn and hugs him tightly. (At this point the GoHam BG music, you all know which one, the one that send us to the LA LA LAND)


He lifts her and carries her to the bed, scene fades out on a burning candles. (Ok my friends, use your imagination)

Will leave them for now, see you soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was good...my imagination is going wild...

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