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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chapter 4

Guys i am trying to take Gopi bahu out of MM and let her enjoy some nice moments with Ahem out in the open.Hope you like it...

Ahem opens his eyes when he hears that his name is being called.Kokila stands near his bed and rubs her hand over his forehead.He looks at her and finds that she is still tensed.She asks him to take the day off as some important decisions need to be taken about Kinjal's wedding.He nodes and gets up to take a shower.
In the dining area,Ahem finds that the entire family is seated.The mood is grave.He looks around for the pretty face he has been dreaming about but finds that his view has been obstructed by the pallu.Kokila calls out his name and his mind stops wandering and he takes a seat right opposite to where Gopi is standing.
Kokila says that Mrs Mehta called her yesterday and requested that if they could agree to host the marriage in Hapnagar(fictional name) next week. Eileshji's cousin Dadi stays there and she is unwell and can't travel to attend his wedding.He is her favorite grandson and it is her wish to attend his marriage before she dies.Kokila says that their request if genuine but there are a few issues.(1) She is concerned how all the arrangements will be made in a new city with hardly any contacts in a such a short span of time.(2) Ahem has a new project that has started in his office.How can i expect him to be totally cut off from the office. (3) Chiraag Bhai has lately had high BP and sugar.How can i expect him to travel that far and we don't know if there are any good doctors there.She looks really sad.
After some thought Chiraag Bhai says that Kokila i know some people there and calls Hansu bhai who assures him that all the arrangements would be taken care of. He smiles at Kokila who smiles back and thanks him.He says that i will stay back and you all go for the wedding.This way Ahem's project will be taken care of and i will also not have to travel that much. Hetal says that i will stay back with you to which Chiraag asks her to go ahead and help Kokila.
Rashi listens to all this and think that "Why should she waste one week going to Hapnagar for Choti Kagdi?She would have to stay without AC and other comforts and Badi Kagdi will make her do all the work."She pretends to ponder and say with a heavy heart that she will stay back and take care of papaji. Jigar also volunteers to stay back.Koki is happy that atleast the troublemaker is off her back and adds that if any problem is there,Rashi can take help of her dear mother.So she kills two birds with one stone and has both Rashi and her mother off her back.
Meanwhile Kinjal's mind is working overtime that how she should get out of all this drama.She calls Umang but he does not answer.She goes to her room and sleeps.
Koki calls Ahem and Gopi and tells them that a guest house has been booked there and Koki, Hetal and Kinjal would share one room and Gopi and Ahem need to share a room.She requested them not to argue as she wanted to keep an eye on Kinjal's health and wanted everything to go smoothly.Also she did not want any questions to be raised about the status quo between Ahem and Gopi.
Then everybody gets super busy making all necessary arrangements.After one day they all start their journey in a Sumo car with Ahem driving for the destination.Baa too accompanies them.Chiraag Kaka sends four workers to help them and tells Ahem that all necessary arrangements have been made and gives him contact details of five people who could be contacted for any help in case of need.
Hapnagar was a five hour journey.They started on Sunday morning five o'clock and the marriage was on Sunday.The sky was still dark when they started.Kokila was seated in the front seat besides Ahem.Gopi was seated in the back and Ahem was happy that the pallu had not come out and through the mirror,he could steal a few pretty glances. Kinjal was sitting between Gopi and Hetal and wanted to jump outside the car.Ahem wore his aviators so that he could relish her face with his eyes and she would not bring out the pallu.Kokila was happy that Rashi and her mother would not create unnecessary trouble for her.Baa was sharing her journey tid-bits and everybody was enjoying. Ahem wanted Gopi to say something as well but she was being a good listener and was enjoying the view.Parag was teasing Koki about how docile she was when she got married to which Koki got embarrassed.They were generally having a gala time before they decided to stop for breakfast at a dhabha.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awwww Gopi and Aham are so cute...and I love how she waited for him, and Kokiji is happy about this too...but o.O demands before the wedding, i wonder what they are....

do continue soon!

~Naina
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Naina..

Change of venue was the demand that Mehta's had.Since Kokila is shown to be a character who likes to be in control.. i just thought of throwing her plans around a bit and taking poor gopi in broad daylight and out of rasoda once and for all!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanx puja for back to back 2 parts treat...........
plzzzzzzz update next part soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chapter 5

Rashi was sprawled on the bed. Jigarji had gone for jogging.Papaji must be asleep since it is Sunday and they all had bid Kagdi and Co. goodbye and luck for the wedding a few hours ago.Kagdi had handed her the house keys with such a heavy heart. Mummyji had as usual flashed her fake smiles.Chotti Kagdi was damn scared as if struck by a meteorite.Ha ha.... "Shubh Vivah"!! When all she desires for is to elope with Umang.She decides to call Urmila but she doesn't answer.
Rashi lies on the bed and stretches her arms.She decides to go to the parlor today.She will inform her mother after one hour.Just then Jigar enters the room.Rashi pretends to be asleep since he will bore her again. He looks at her sleeping face and goes out to greet his father.Rashi think why not sleep for an hour more!!!!!
Umang gets up and reads Kinjal's message and thinks of a plan and heads to meet her. He wishes to hurt Ahem and thinks how he had ruined his sister's life.
"I have brought your green tea bags."Gopi told Ahem gently.He looked at her as she handed them to her when he was closing the car door after everybody got out of the car.He purposely brushed his hand against Gopi's and the static electricity generated through their touch sent shivers down their spine. He had come to enjoy these stolen moments that they shared recently.
Koki and Hetal excused themselves to go to the washroom.Kinjal was happy and looked for Ba,ahem and gopi.Ba was soaking the sun and Ahem and Gopi were talking to each other."These two have another drama going on between them.How can Ahem Bhai stand this illiterate girl?Let me get done with my share of issues.Then I will show this Gopi the door."
As Koki and hetal returned from the washroom,Koki received a call surprisingly from Chiraag Bhai.He asked her about how the trip is going and assured her that Kinjal is his daughter as well and he will do anything to make the wedding a success and she need not worry about anything.Kokila appreciated his gesture and said thanks and gave the mobile to Hetal.
As they all sat down for breakfast,Hetal noticed that Ahem had brought along his tea bags and teased him.To this everybody smiled.Ahem eyed Gopi who by now had brought out her pallu and said that i forgot tea bags but they never forget me.Gopi blushed and so did Ahem.Koki was happy that finally Ahem has realized what a gem she has found him and smiled knowingly.
They all enjoyed piping hot chai with breakfast that Gopi bahu prepared in the morning consisting of theplas and dhoklas.Ahem had come to love her cooking. Koki said that she doesn't like to eat outside and even Ba is not allowed to do so, hence it was very considerate of Gopi Bahu to prepare breakfast for them.Ahem was happy that his Mom was happy. Kinjal did not eat much,when Hetal asked her the reason,Koki intervened saying that Kinjal had bridal jitters.Everybody laughed and wrapped up the breakfast and headed back to the car.
Ahem made sure everybody was seated and just when Gopi was about to occupy the corner seat in the backseat next to Kinjal and Hetal,he pulled her pallu slightly from her head so that he could see her face from the mirror.She thought it slipped by accident and placed it back on her head.He pulled it again and as she was about to turn,Koki said "jaldi karo gopi bahu we don't have all day."Poor Ahem"... Gopi sat down at the back with her pallu well in place and he occupied the driver's seat and proceeded.
He was fuming that his trick didn't work and he couldn't see Gopi's face.Just then Kinjal asked him to open the window as she was feeling suffocated.When the window opened,the breeze made the pallu fly and finally Ahem got a chance to gaze into Gopi's eyes who started looking down. They finally reached the guest house and everybody retreated to their rooms to rest.
Rashi had slept to her hearts content and went downstairs to check on Mani. She sat where koki sits everyday and ordered Mani and completed the breakfast.Then she informed Jigarji that she wanted to go to parlor .He said you are so pretty why do you want to go to parlor,to which she got irritated and snubbed him with a smirk.Urmila was happy that finally her daughter is in control again and brushed her hair to get ready for parlour.
Kinjal received a sms from Umang saying that "I love you and I am coming". She let out a sigh and entered the room to rest....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thnx puja dear.....
Aham tricking to see gopi's face.......hehe naughty boy.......
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hehe.. thanks dear...i'm glad you're liking it....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28
u write so well i hv to like it no other go for me..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ahem's desperation is nice to read..What is going to happen now that they will be sharing the same room??😃 I know u will not let us down like the CVs..😛

Very quick update and the fact is I am looking forward to ur updates..Very refreshing..
👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Puja I have a request..Would u please specify the chapter number and Page number in the title so that we will get to know that u have updated the FF? Thanx dear..Keep up the great writing..

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