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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hello evryone...
sorry for the delay ppl...
had my first ever interview n
i jus got it.. my dream company.. feels jus awesum...
Now here's the next chapter ppl Njoy 😊


PART-4

"Can I call you sister?? Woh..kya haina you resemble my sister a lot jo yahaan nahin rehti hai' so I was just missing her.."

He asked and felt relieved as he noticed Aham cooling down a bit.

Gopi was surprised to hear the sudden request. She glanced at Aham who pretended to do something in his mobile.

"Yeah' sure'"

Gopi told not so convinced. She felt something was wrong terribly as she looked at Aham'

"Ok Umang that's really great that you found a sister' now if you would excuse us' it's getting late'." Aham said as fast as possible.

The ride to the home was silent. Aham felt that Gopi was trying to read his thoughts so he tried to remain as normal as possible.

They reached home and Aham retired to his room asap. He got freshened up and came downstairs. He saw Jigar and Gopi watching T.V. and joined them.

He took the place beside Gopi on couch. Gopi passed a glaring look at him and then resumed back watching T.V.

"Wow' Aham bhai seems like you messed something again'"

Jigar questioned noticing the exchange.

"Shut up Jigar'"

Aham gave an irritating look to Jigar.

"Jigar' leave him alone' chalo hum jaake shopping karke aate hain'"

Gopi said getting up.

"Shopping great Gopi di'.lets' go.."

Jigar said getting excited.

Jigar and Gopi left to get ready while Aham gave a disappointing look. Just then the landline started to ring.

"Ahammm"

He heard a familiar voice.

"I'll kill you'. Mein ne tumse kahaa na documents mail karo 10 min mein' I was waiting'"

He heard her shouting.

"Lekin Anita tumne mujhse kab kahaa'"

He asked her frowning.

"Stop playing pranks' ek kaam bataya tha woh bhi nahin kar sakte'"

She yelled.

"Lekin aaj toh mein ne tumse baat hi nahin ki' phir tumne mujhse kab kaha.."

He pleaded with her,

"You stupid' idiot' kuch der pehle toh meine call kiya ghar pe as you're cell was switched off' Gopi ne lift kiya tha' then you talked.. ab agar 5 min mein mail nahi kiya na you're dead' kal humare submission ka last date hai' I was a big idiot to choose you and Karan'" She yelled at him as if he were in front of her she'd have killed him.

Aham now understood the scene.

"Anita you'll get the doc in 5 min don't worry."

He went to his room and first mailed the documents and then he came downstairs.

"Gopiiiii Jigarrrrr"

He shouted at the top of his voice. Kokila came out panicking.

"Kya hua Ahammm'.aise chilla kyun rahe ho'"

She asked worried.

"Maa ye dono shaitaan kahaan hai.."

He asked her angrily.

"Shaitaan.??? Kon Jigar aur Gopi??"

She asked confused.

"Haan'"

He said impatiently.

"Jigar ka toh mujhe pata hai par Gopi' usne kya kardiya???"

She questioned him.

"Jigar kuch nahi karta' Gopi usse karwati hai'"

He said annoyingly.

"Aaj toh mein Gopi ko nahin chodoonga'"

He left from there.

After an hour, he saw Jigar and Gopi walking in with bags laughing. Their laugh came to an end as soon as they saw an angry Aham ready to pounce on them.

"Bhaiya' I just did jo Gopi di ne mujhse kahaa'"

Jigar looked feared seeing Aham's anger.

"Jigar' don worry mujhe pata hai'. Gopi ne hi kaha hoga tumse meri imitation karne ka'" He said looking at Gopi with anger.

"Haan kahaa'. Toh'."

She said daringly although she was scared to face his wrath.

"Tumhe pata hai Anita kitni badi bookworm hai aur project ka itna important documentation' how could you play a prank like that?"

He questioned her.

"Acha' then how dare you scare my friend???"

She cross questioned him.

"Meine' meine kya kiya??"

He said feigning innocence.

"Don't act too smart ok' mujhe sab pata hai.."

She said angrily.

"Kal tak jo mujhse friend ki tarah baat karta tha' aaj achanak aake mujhe behen kehta hai' Do you think I'm such a fool that I couldn't make out??"

Gopi asked him crossing her arms.

He looked in either directions and then ran away upstairs soon joined by Gopi.

"Aham..Aham'.rukho'. I'm not going to leave you'"

Kokila came there and noticed them.

"Ye kya hogaya?? Gussa toh Aham Gopi se tha' ye reverse kaise ho gaaya??"

He asked Jigar confused.

"Mom' its Aham bhai n Gopi di'.kuch bhi ho sakta hai'."

Both went their ways laughing.

Gopi chased Aham in his room and then finally she caught him but he lost his balance and both of them dropped on his bed.

Aham on the bed and Gopi on the top of him, Gopi tried to get up but couldn't due to interlocking of their chains and she fell on him again, but this time her lips touching his.

Aham went numb for a second and then noticing her expressions pretended as if nothing happened.

"Gopi'rukho..i'll remove this"

He separated their chains and Gopi ran away from there blushing while Aham closed his eyes smiling.

~~~~~~~~~~~fb end~~~~~~~~~

Gopi got up and walked out while Aham's furrowed wondering what happened. He then, felt his mobile buzzing.

Woh..

Jo labz the bandhe hue

Labhon pe khul gayeee

It was text from Gopi.. He felt like jumping in joy but then he noticed the surroundings.

"Can you come out??"

He immediately got up and left from there while Jigar and Meher exchanged knowing smiles.

"Gopi kya hua??"

He asked getting worried as he saw her in a corner fidgeting with the dupatta.

"woh'woh'mujhe bhook lag rahi hai.."

She said puzzled herself.

"Ok..mein pop-corn laata hoon.."

He walked away.

"OMG how dumb you're' abhi kuch der pehle toh khaaya tha humne' tum samaj kyun nahin sakte Aham'"

Gopi thought as she saw his retreating form.

Main'

Use mila to rang se

The mujh mein ghul gaye kuch is kadar

Aham took few steps and realized that they had eaten enough of pop-corn already. She wasn't meaning that.

"Gopi tujhe aise hi duffer nahin kehthi hai'.tu hai bada duffer'. Ye idea tera hona chahiye tha'"

He mentally scolded himself. So, he turned back and went back to her.

Mujh mein mai rab hoon kidhar

Main hoon kidhar kya bataoon

Sirf usko hai pata

"Bahar chalein' waise bhi movie itni interesting nahin hai'"

Aham asked her with hope.

"Yeah sure'"

Gopi said casually trying not to show her excitement.

They messaged Jigar not to worry about them and left from there.

~~~~~~~~~~

Aham was driving the car from the past 15 minutes unknown where they were leading to. He was just enjoying her presence beside him.

"Ahammm.."

She shrieked making him to halt the car all of a sudden.

"Kya hua?"

He asked her worried.

Upon seeing his face, she re-called something and her excitement died of.

"Nothing' woh aise hi' Lets' go"

She turned her face.

He was about to start the car when he turned to her side and something caught his attention other than her. Smiling he pulled the car into the parking.

She gave him a surprised look when he parked the car.

"ab mujhe aisa kya dekh rahi ho'. chalo bhi'"

He said holding his laughter.

He led the way while she followed him shockingly.

"Bhaiya do plate..panipoori.."

He ordered the vendor.

Gopi stared at him puzzled.



That's it for today
how was it guys?
do let me know 😊
Edited by premeer4rever - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
first of all congrats kavya for clearing ur first interview...and in ur dream company.....i can understand the feeling when u clear the interview of ur Dream company......exactly same happened to me also.....

and next...update is as always gr88888888888888888888888

keep it up....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Kavya... beautiful update dear... GoHem scene was cute... love Jigar... loved reading it.... continue soon eagerly awaiting your next update...
and just now read Sadhli's post... so Hearty congratulations dear...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
Congrats on clearing the interview dear... which company is it by the way...

labzon me keh na sakoon
bin kahe bhi reh na sakooon...
FANTABULOUS chapter...
please write more
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I really loved it Kavya.. Great part..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -tellyaddict-

first of all congrats kavya for clearing ur first interview...and in ur dream company.....i can understand the feeling when u clear the interview of ur Dream company......exactly same happened to me also.....

and next...update is as always gr88888888888888888888888

keep it up....



thank u.. 😊 oh that's gr8..

thanks again... sorry for the delay... next one's coming..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sujji0609

Kavya... beautiful update dear... GoHem scene was cute... love Jigar... loved reading it.... continue soon eagerly awaiting your next update...

and just now read Sadhli's post... so Hearty congratulations dear...



Thank you...😊



Thank you...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: upasana.diya

Congrats on clearing the interview dear... which company is it by the way...

labzon me keh na sakoon
bin kahe bhi reh na sakooon...
FANTABULOUS chapter...
please write more



That was Infosys.. n now even better I got in Deloitte 😊

Thank you so much.... 😃
btw i love that song 😉

Originally posted by: saina01

I really loved it Kavya.. Great part..



Thank you... 😊
Edited by premeer4rever - 14 years ago
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Hello everyone...
placement season in campus..n guests at home.. was busy
sorry for the delay...
here comes the next chapter

PART-5

"Bhaiya do plate..panipoori.."

He ordered the vendor.

Gopi stared at him puzzled.

~~~~fb~~~~

Even after he finished college, he used to come to college everyday to drop her and then in the evening from the office to pick her up. He joined the Modi industries as a trainee. He didn't want to start off with the managing director post. Parag also liked the idea as that would give him more insight in the company matters.

One day he got struck with some work so he texted Gopi to go by cab.

Gopi came out after finishing her classes and checked Aham's message. So, she joined her friends.

Her friends lured her to the pani-poori stall at a distance from college as the weather was cool. She agreed as anyways Aham won't be waiting for her and she had to go on her own.

Soon they reached the place and then she was lost in her own world relishing them and chatting with her friends.

It started raining by the time they finished and so everyone started to disperse. She assured her friends that she'll take a cab and asked them to go.

She stood under the shelter for a while but when she saw some school kids jumping in joy in rain she couldn't hold herself and joined them.

~~~~~~~~~~~

His work finished soon so he thought of picking her up. He wanted to surprise her so didn't inform her. The breeze was cool so he thought of taking his bike out.

He enjoyed every single moment he spent with her while in home. He helped her in her work, took her out often and it was during this period he felt that she was definitely the special one for him. No one else could effect him so much'

Neende Neende rehti hai aaj kal

Bas uske hi khaabon ke libaas mein

Her innocence, her honesty, love towards his family and her pure beauty made him fall head over heels for her but he never admitted it to her. He had a dream to achieve. First he wanted to fulfil all the responsibilities that he was expected to do and then finally admit to her' Surrender himself to her completely''..

Jaane kab tham gaye yeh kadam

Ek uske ke hi ghar ke paas mein

Raasta, bhoola mein apna raasta

By the time he reached, he saw the gates closed. It was then in a distance he spotted her by the panipoori stall. He saw her happily relishing them and chatting with her friends. So, he let her have fun and enjoyed it from a distance.

It started to rain, so he turned to start the bike and get to her but in the meanwhile he lost her track. He looked for her here and there and then saw her in the shelter enjoying the rain

Bahara bahara

Hua dil pehli baar vee

She held her hand out in the rain and after sometime, she joined the kids. He knew how much she loved rains, so didn't disturb and let her enjoy while he stood in shade.

Bahara bahara

Ki chain toh hua faraar vee

After few minutes, it struck him that she would get cold instantly every time she gets drenched. He went to her and dragged her into shelter.

Bahara bahara

Hua dil pehli pehli baar vee

"Aham tum kab aagaye'dekho it's raining' chalo na.."

Before he could react she pulled him out and made him hold out his hands. He enjoyed the way her eyes twinkled when she was playing with the water droplets. He was lost admiring her. He couldn't hold himself any longer.

He caught hold of her wrist and then inched closer to her. His face was only inches away from her when she sneezed continuously for 4 times getting pale.

Aham was freaked out. He immediately dialed Jigar to send the car. As soon as the car arrived, he locked his bike and helped her to get in.

There was a doctor waiting already by the time they reached home. Gayatri went to her friends' place and they were on their own.

Aham was racing up and down in fear while Jigar was trying to calm him down. Aham was scolding himself for being so reckless even after knowing that it's not so good for her to be in rain for long time.

The doctor came out and told them not to worry and prescribed some medicines. Jigar went to get them while Aham went to Gopi.

He saw her sleeping on the bed peacefully. He went and sat by her side for sometime and then went to freshen out.

Aham walked into the kitchen after taking a bath as he was feeling hungry. The sight in front of him angered him.

"Gopi' kya kar rahi ho??? Thanda paniii!!!!.. pagaal ho gaayi ho'. yahaan mein aur Jigar tumhare liye itne tensed ho rahe hain aur tum aise pretend kar rahi ho ki kuch hua hi nahin'. Rakho usse wahaan'"

He walked in pulling the cold water bottle out of her hands and giving her some normal water.She drank the water and then immediately she ran to the wash basin and vomited.

Aham went numb. He shouted for Jigar. He came running with a tablet as the doctor already told him that she might need it.

Gopi sat in the sofa with rugs all around her and her face was quite pale. That made Aham's anger worsen'.

"aur khao pani poori aur bheego barish mein' jab pata hai ki tabiyaat kharab ho jayegi'toh pata nahin log aisa kyun karte hain'"

He didn't talk to her the whole evening although he sat by her bedside the whole night afraid that she may need anything.

~~~~~~fb end~~~~~~~~~~

Bahara bahara

Hua dil pehli baar vee

Gopi looked at Aham lovingly as she recalled how Aham cared for her that night. Although he pretended to be tough from outside, that day she witnessed the caring side of him and also his unspoken love for her.

She knew him inside out. So there's no denial to the fact that he loves her but also knew what was holding him back. She decided to wait and now that he has made everyone proud it's high time, he thinks about himself, her and them'..

Both of them were so lost in the thoughts about each other that they failed to hear the cry of vendor who was trying to bring them out of trance since past half an hour.

Bahara bahara

Ki chain to hua faraar vee

Finally they were out of the dreamland due to loud honking of the cars near-by due to traffic. The vendor thanked God and gave them the plates.

"woh..I don't eat them anymore'."

Gopi said hesitating a bit.

"Gopi'. are you serious???"

He asked her shockingly.

"woh'"

He didn't let her continue.

"Gopi I'm really sorry for that day' mom aur dad bhi ghar par nahi the' isiliye mein thoda darr gaya ki agar tumhe kuch ho jaata toh' you know I can't see you in pain.."

He told her his eyes conveying the feelings in his heart to hers silently.

Bahara bahara

Hua dil pehli pehli baar vee

She blushed and got back to devour her favorite pani-poori which she gave up for Aham all these days. Aham too ate with her enjoying her expressions and the way she ate'

After they finished it Aham paid and they started to walk beside each other unknown to where they were going. There were just enjoying the presence of each other.

Then they saw an amusement park there and both of them looked at each other with hope. Smiling they shook their heads and walked in.

"So Gopi which one do you want to get into first??"

He asked her raising his eyebrow.

"Anything would do'."

She replied casually.

"Sure' na'"

He asked her with a hint of mischief in his voice.

"Yeah.."

Gopi nodded her head but then she understood the mischief in his voice.

"Nooo'Ahamm'.no I'm telling you'no'.."

Gopi shouted when he pulled her towards the Ferris-wheel.

"Gopirr' tumne khud kahana meri marzi'now you can't back off"

He said teasing her.

"This is not fair Ahamm'."

She said crossing her arms as they got seated in one of the boxes beside each other.

"Everything is fair in'."



Aaj ke liye bas itna hi...
Hope u liked it
waitin for ur comments..

Precap:
More n more of Aham-Gopi 😉

Edited by premeer4rever - 14 years ago

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