FF - Karuna - Compassion - A story - Pt20/pg63

Nidhi Chandrakar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#131

Part 6

Ahem was totally unfair

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Nidhi Chandrakar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#132

eagerly waiting to see what will happen next di

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saina

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Posted: 14 years ago

#133

WOW diya... Very well written.. Mujhe sach mein itna acha laga ke kya kahoon.. I can't find words to express myself..

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Sujata

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Posted: 14 years ago

#134

Wow Diya... loved it dear..... just finished reading all the 7 parts... well this was expected of Ahem... but i want him to feel the torture for insulting Gopi and refusing to believe her.... god how i despise Kinjal... man she is so evil.... continue soon dear eagerly awaiting your next update...

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@ShellJA

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Posted: 14 years ago

#135

what a treat on a sunday morning with my coffee, I got to read not one but 2 parts. Very good Diya! I love that Gopi was able to get out of the shadows of the MM. Now she can focus on herself. Love all the characters and how you have developed them.

Good work. Now we have to wait until next weekend for the next part?? : (

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upasana.diya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: desisrock
Wow, Diya, superb update....like the way Ahem is slowly repenting....the hot headed guy that he is.....

I am sure Gopi's transformation to Gayatri is going to be amazing....eagerly awaiting the next chapter....

Yup... he has bigger tortures coming his way... its not an easy task to get Gopi back.. now that the whole village is hell bent on hiding her...😉
will start on it again very soon

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upasana.diya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: trishap
awesome

Thanks for liking Trisha

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upasana.diya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: Jake-neil
Hard to believe, my karela.. U being a feminist lyk the producer, how come u potray the characters differently? Huh, short for karela could be karu-na? ROFLOL.. Hohoho..

who said am a feminist, dear brother. I like the balance very much.... not the subservient feudal balance. but a balance where one realizes one needs the other to be perfect...
i think thats not feminism... hai na😉

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upasana.diya

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Posted: 14 years ago

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