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tellyaddict

@Telly_Addict

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#121

reserved....
will comment after reading

Edited : lovely......................... ek din me do do update...........u rock diya....
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Edited by -tellyaddict- - 14 years ago

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Rafeal

@Rafeal.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#122

How come the male charectrs hav loads of dialogues? Anyway, nice update

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Tammie

@saomom

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Posted: 14 years ago

#123

Nice job Diya! Really enjoyed reading it...

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..Naina..

@..Naina..

Alumni

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#124

awesome! i hope aham and chirag and jigar are able to figure out that it's kinjal's doing very soon :)

can't wait for the next update!

~Naina

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upasana.diya

@upasana.diya

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: -tellyaddict-
reserved....
will comment after reading

Edited : lovely......................... ek din me do do update...........u rock diya....
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

i had to lead the story to this point only... i am expecting to put more dialogue from here on...
thanks for liking both of them... I know chapter 6 was too disappointing... i was disappointed while writing it

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upasana.diya

@upasana.diya

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: Jake-neil
How come the male charectrs hav loads of dialogues? Anyway, nice update

I like the male characters of my story to be strong people... not some weaklings as Tele Industry portrays them...

Thanks for liking the update... and hope you don't mind guys having the stage too

Edited by upasana.diya - 14 years ago

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upasana.diya

@upasana.diya

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: saomom
Nice job Diya! Really enjoyed reading it...

Thanks Mom... now i'll bring out the assertive Gopi that we would like... or i should rather say Gayatri😉

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upasana.diya

@upasana.diya

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: Naina2127
awesome! i hope aham and chirag and jigar are able to figure out that it's kinjal's doing very soon :)

can't wait for the next update!

~Naina

ohh they will... but only thing i need to figure out is HOW???

hahahah... just kidding... i'll get the idea... don't worry...

Thanks for loving it too

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desisrock

@namziee

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#129

Wow, Diya, superb update....like the way Ahem is slowly repenting....the hot headed guy that he is.....

I am sure Gopi's transformation to Gayatri is going to be amazing....eagerly awaiting the next chapter....

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Rafeal

@Rafeal.

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#130

Hard to believe, my karela.. U being a feminist lyk the producer, how come u potray the characters differently? Huh, short for karela could be karu-na? ROFLOL.. Hohoho..

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