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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chapter 7

Gopi started eating her dinner as soon as she said this and Aham smiled and started eating as well. None of them noticed how all the Modis were starring at them. Koki, Parag, Chirag and Hetal were looking at them with a smile on their faces where as all the young ones were starring at Aham as if he had suddenly grown a second head. Koki gestured everyone not to make any comments as she knew if they started teasing Aham and Gopi she would keep her distance from Aham and she did not want her munna to suffer because of their silly jokes. She could clearly see that Aham really liked Gopi and she did not want anyone to say something which would jeopardise Aham's love life as she calls it.

After dinner everyone was having a chat when Jigar and Kinjal started feeling bored. They asked the DJ to put some nice romantic songs and asked everyone to join the floor for a dance. It was Koki's idea as she wanted
Gopi to dance with aham.

Aham was discussing business with Chirag and
Gopi was talking to some employees in a separate group. Koki walked to Aham and said

Koki: Munna tum yahan bhi business ki batein kar rahe ho? Party mein aye ho at least enjoy yourself a bit.

Aham: Mom aap bhi na. Acha tell me how do you want me to enjoy myself?

Koki: Woh dekho angel wahan kissi se baat kar rahi hai. Go and ask her for a dance.

Aham was taken aback when he heard this and was wondering why he did not think of this as it was the perfect opportunity to get closer to his angel. He kept standing there starring at
Gopi and smiling to himself. Koki controlled her smile and tapped Aham on his arm.

Aham blushed and said: Theek hain mom, I'll go ask angel for a dance since you are insisting so much.

Gopi was chatting with one of the other employees when someone tapped her on her shoulder. She turned around and saw Aham looking at her nervously.

Gopi smiled and said: Yes Mr Modi?

Aham looked in
Gopi's eyes: Angel... Umm... Dance?

Gopi smiled and took Aham's hand and they both headed towards the dance floor and started dancing. Aham noticed that Gopi was still smilling to herself and asked

Aham: What is so amusing angel?

Gopi looked at Aham and smiled mischievously: You were nervous to ask me for a dance right? So cute!

Aham blushed and said defensively: I was not nervous angel and men are not cute.

Gopi: But you looked really cute when you were nervous Mr Modi.

Aham pulled Gopi closer and put both his hands around her waist. He thought she was a perfect fit in his arms and
Gopi was thinking that she has never felt this safe and at peace before in her life.

Aham: Tum mujhe Mr Modi kyun bulati ho? Please call me Aham angel.

Gopi: You promised that you will not treat me differently from your other employees right? To main aap ko aap ke naam se kaise bula sakti houn?

Aham: That promise is valid only when we are in the office angel and only during office hours. After office hours na main tumhara boss houn aur nahi tum meri employee. Office ke bahar to tum mujhe Aham bula sakti ho na?

Gopi looked into his eyes and said: Ok lekin sirf after office hours.

Aham: Aur hum jab akele hon tab bhi tum mujhe Aham bula sakti ho. As long as nobody hears you I won't be treating you any different from them right?

Gopi smiled sweetly and said: Wrong! I think you are pushing your luck too much now Mr Modi.

Aham smiled and winked at Gopi: It was worth the try angel aur yeh kya? Phir se Mr Modi? You are making me old yaar!

Gopi blushed: Sorry... Woh... Ummm...

Aham smiled seeing her nervousness and he knew that
Gopi had feelings for him aswell but she was not aware of them yet.

Aham: I'm waiting. Bolo na. Mera naam itna bhi mushkil nahi hai. A four letter word Aham. Itna simple sa naam hai mera. (He said teasingly)

Gopi blushed even more and said: Aham!! Ab khush?

Aham: Bohot. Main tumhein batana hi bhool gaya, Sunday ko hamare yahan pooja hai aur tumhein zaroor ana hai. Sirf ana hi nahi hai balki saari tayari tumhein hi karni hain, tum meri p.a jo ho.

Gopi: Main zaroor aoungi and I'll start the preparations from saturday itself. Aap ne kissi ko bataya to nahi about my real identity?

Aham: Nahi bataya aur batauga bhi nahi. Mujhe pata hain you told me all this because you trust me completely to main tumhara bharosa kaise tor sakta houn? Main Jigar ke saath har baath share karta houn lekin yeh baat main nai usse bhi nahi batayi. Both your secret and you are safe with me angel.

Gopi: I trust you with my life Aham. You are the only one I've ever felt this safe with. I've never felt this way despite being surrounded by my family and bodyguards all my life. Issi liye to I've never taken any chances and I never let anyone near me. I always felt the need to stay alert lekin jab bhi aap ke saath hoti houn I feel very relaxed and protected.

Aham really wanted to hug
Gopi when he heard her say all this but he controlled himself as he was more concerned about her reputation than his. He tightened his grip on her waist instead. Gopi starred into his eyes and understood how he was feeling without him having to say anything and she tightened her grip on his shoulders as well.

None of them wanted to leave each others arms when the music stopped but they reluctantly put some distance between them and smiled at each other.
Gopi realised that she had fallen in love with Aham from the moment she met him that's why she could not bear to see him upset when rashi said all that stuff to him. That's the reason she ate the food which he brought for her without feeling that she was breaking the rules she has always followed. She loved the way he took care of her and always felt the need to protect her. She blushed and looked down as she could not look into his passion filled eyes anymore.

Gopi smiled and said: Main sarah ko dekh kar ati houn.

She rushed to where sarah and sean were sitting and Aham smiled and followed her. When he reached near them he heard
Gopi telling sean to take sarah home as she looked tired and she will take a taxi home. Sean looked at her as if she had lost her mind and was about to protest when aham kept his hand on Gopi's back and said "don't worry sean you guys can go. I'll drop Gopi home but I need to take her to the doctor's first as she seems to have lost her mind"

Gopi: Excuse me?

Both Aham and Sean pretended that they did not even hear her.

Sean: Thank you for everything Mr Modi and please keep me informed about what treatment the doctor suggests for her.

Gopi: What treatment?

They ignored her again and she was glaring at them angrily.

Aham: I wish you both all the happiness in the world and don't forget to let us know when the little one arrives. I'll call you tomorrow morning and tell you what the doctor said about angel sean.

Once sean and sarah left
Gopi faced the other way and crossed her arms. She did not believe these two, they called her crazy? And they kept ignoring her as if she was invisible.

Gopi: I'm not going with you Mr Modi.

Aham: Yes you are
Gopi and I'm not taking no for an answer.

Koki arrived just then and asked Aham to drop
Gopi home as it was late and she should not travel on her own. Gopi bent her head and followed Aham quietly after taking koki's blessings as she could not say no to her.

As soon as they reached the car Aham grabbed
Gopi's arm, turned her around to face him and backed her against the car door. He leaned really close to her and said angrily

Aham: Tum pagal ho gayi ho kya
Gopi? How could you even think about travelling on your own in a taxi this late at night? 😡Agar tumhe kuch ho jata to have you ever thought ke mera kya hoga? Mar jaunga main tumhare bina.😭 I love you angel apni jaan se bhi zyada.

Tears were flowing from both their eyes non stop by the time he poured his heart out infront of
Gopi. She hugged him tight and started sobbing.

Gopi: I love you too Aham. Main bhi ji nahi paungi aap ke bina.

Aham tightened his arms around her: Shhh pari.. bas bohot hogaya.. I don't ever want to see tears in your eyes.

Gopi: Pari?

Aham: haan pari.. Woh pari jo mujhe Singhania Hotel mein pehli baar dikhi thi jiss ne pehli nazar mein hi mera dil chura lia. Meri pyari si pari..

Gopi blushed and hid her face in his chest: to phir aap ne mujhe Gopi kyun bulaya?

Aham: Because you made me angry. Phir gussa dilaogi to phir se
Gopi bulaounga.

Aham raised her face up and wiped her tears. He then kissed
Gopi's forehead and she blushed and closed her eyes. Aham planted soft kisses on both her eyes, cheeks and the corner of her mouth whispering sweet nothings to her. "Open your eyes pari, look at me" he whispered.

Gopi opened her eyes and starred into Aham's passion filled ones. He bent down and kissed her passionately on her lips. Aham's arms tightened around Gopi's waist and his hands went to her back pulling her closer to him. Gopi's hands went up to his hair and she pulled him closer as well and they forgot everything and kept kissing each other till they were out of breath. They both were breathing heavily when they pulled apart and Aham hugged Gopi and planted a kiss on her forehead.

Aham: I love you baby.

Gopi blushed and hugged him tighter saying "me too"


That's it for today guys.. I'm not sure if you liked it though.. Let me know what you think..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
fiza great , i m going to faint imagining the real aham doing all these things. woooooooooooooooooooow great job indeed save us from the depression of the show.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53
Thanks Sadhli.. I just watched today's episode.. I totally recomend it... I loved the way Koki lost it on seeing Gopi being ill treated by Urmi..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
Wow, Fiza!! Awesome FF!! You leave us wanting more....it was superb.....Kaash Ahem serial mein aisa hota.......

Now it almost makes me want Gopi in the serial to have a total makeover and become a businesswoman like the one in your FF and pull the rug from under Ahem's feet ;-)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thank you.. I'm glad you guys liked it.. I'll try to post as many parts as possible during the weekend as I'll be very busy once I go back to work on Monday and I might not have enough time to sit and relax on the forum..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hehehe...yaha bhi meetha fal bat raha hai kya..????😉
saina01 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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haan ji.. bas aap hi ka intezaar tha😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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haha...dekho tum ne pukara aur hum chale aaye..
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Gopi
opened her eyes and starred into Aham's passion filled ones. He bent down and kissed her passionately on her lips. Aham's arms tightened around Gopi's waist and his hands went to her back pulling her closer to him. Gopi's hands went up to his hair and she pulled him closer as well and they forgot everything and kept kissing each other till they were out of breath. They both were breathing heavily when they pulled apart and Aham hugged Gopi and planted a kiss on her forehead.

Aham: I love you baby.

Gopi blushed and hugged him tighter saying "me too"

Part 8

Gopi: Mr Modi?

Gopi was confused as Aham tapped her on her shoulder and when she turned around he kept starring at her and smiling to himself. She clicked her fingers in front of his face and he broke out of his daydream and realised it was all his imagination. (😆 marna nahi guys.. please)

Gopi: Is there anything I can help you with Mr Modi?

Aham: Umm.. I.. umm.. Water?

Gopi smiled and took a glass of water from a waiter who was passing by them and gave it to Aham who was sweating by now. She looked at him with a concerned look on her face while he gulped down the water.

Gopi: Are you alright Mr Modi? Aap ki tabiyat to theek hai na?

Aham: I'm fine angel and thank you for the water.

Gopi: Did you want to say something Mr Modi?

Aham: I just wanted to say that you've done a great job with this party angel. I'm really impressed.

Gopi smiled: Thank you Mr Modi I'm just doing my job.

Aham extended his hand towards Gopi and asked her for a dance and she smiled and put her hand in his. They walked to the dance floor together and started dancing.

Aham: Did I tell you that you how beautiful you look tonight? Just like an angel who's come from heaven.

Gopi looked into Aham's eyes: Are you trying to flirt with me Mr Modi?

Aham gave
Gopi a mischievous smile: And what if I said yes Angel?

Gopi smiled back: Then I would say you are failing miserably Mr Modi.

Aham: Then I would just have to try harder next time.

Gopi: Jokes apart Mr Modi. It was very nice of you to give this party for Sarah. You are a very nice boss.

Aham: So many compliments in one day? Wow must be my lucky day!

Gopi: Mr Modi, yeh sare hue jokes aap ko naturally atey hain ya in ko bolne ke liye aap to practice karni parti hai?

Aham laughed at the irritated look on
Gopi's face: Sorry angel I couldn't resist. Frankly speaking you are not only a better boss but also a better human being than me. Aaj kal to apne hi saath chor dete hain but after seeing what you did for your employee's child I've started believing that people with a golden heart do exist and you are one of them.

Gopi starred into Aham's eyes: This is nothing compared to what sean has done for me Mr Modi. He has always protected me and he also took a bullet for me once. Sean is not my employee, he is part of my family. Can't I do even this much for a member of my family?

Aham: Tum bohot achi ho issi liye sab ke bare main acha hi sochti ho. You are truely an angel.

Gopi: Aap ko apna promise yaad hai Mr Modi?

Aham: Kaunsa promise?

Gopi: You promised me that you will not treat me differently from all your employees right?

Aham: Yes angel I still remember my promise. But why are you asking?

Gopi: That's because you have not danced with anyone else till now aur apna vaada nibhane ke liye you will have to dance with another employee of yours.

Aham's face lost colour when he heard this but he did not protest since he could not say no to
Gopi. He looked at her sadly

Aham: Ab tum hi bata do whom I should dance with.

Gopi: You have to dance with Sarah.

Aham gave
Gopi a grateful look and smiled at her.

Gopi smiled at him: You are lucky ke aap ne apne sare hue jokes band kar diye warna I would have made you dance with that churail rashi. I'm not as innocent as I look Mr Modi.

Aham: I'll have to be ready to face the consequences then as I can't stop myself from joking with you. You are the only one around whom I can be myself.

Aham and
Gopi walked towards sean and sarah and Aham took sarah to the dance floor. Sean and Gopi took a seat and waited for them to come back.

Sean: Thank you for everything you have done for us angel.

Gopi: And what about everything you did for me sean? I would not have been alive today if you had not been there for me. You are part of my family and I can do anything for my family.

Sean: and I won't hesitate one bit if I ever have to give my life to protect you. We are going home as soon as sarah comes back as it's quite late now and you should not be out this late. We'll drop you to your apeartment before going home. I have arranged for a security alarm to be set up in your appartment as well and I'll give you the code for it when I drop you. You look tired, I'll get some juice for you.

Gopi smiled gratefully at sean: thank you.

Koki noticed
Gopi sitting on her own and walked to her with all the Modis and they all sat around her.

Hetal: Angel humein tum se baat karne ka mouka hi nahi mila. You've been busy ever since the party started.

Gopi: Chachi ji I just wanted to make sure everything is perfect for sarah.

Kinjal: Massi was saying that you've come to UK recently. How do you find it here di? Main aap ko di bula sakti houn na?

Gopi smiled at her: Of course tum mujhe di bula sakti ho. Actually I lived here for 5 years when I was studying. Aur graduate hote hi main India wapas chali gayi. Iss baar bhi main sirf 3 mahine ke liye ayi houn aur uss ke baad mujhe India wapas jana hai.

Koki: Tum yahan akeli rehti ho beta?

Gopi: Ji maji meri poori family India mein hain.

Koki caressed
Gopi's head: Agar tumhein kabhi bhi kissi bhi waqt humari zaroorat pare do not hesitate to call us angel.

Gopi smiled sweetly: Ji maji aap ne keh diya mere liye yehi bohot hai.

Aham and Sarah finished dancing and sean said that he would drop
Gopi home. Sean and sarah dropped Gopi at her appartment and went home as well.


Here you go guys! hope you liked it..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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fiza from where i should get new words to appreciate ur writing.......
so wahi purani tareef...
awesome, amazing ....keep it up...

and i liked dream thing the most.......

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