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Posted: 18 years ago
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Now...at last...for the next chapter of my imaginative story..hehehe this one is dedicated to all my readers, especially the new comers! 😊
Thanks for reading!

as well as a special friend who topped her history exams and did amazingly in her otehr exams...this ones for u.. o say congrats! 😆

Chpt 2

At 8:45, Nahar arrived in style at SC, dressed to kill in an all black Armani business suit with a white crepe shirt, the first 2 buttons undone, showing his masculine chest, sporting a silver Rolex and a killer smile, his three ear piercings glittering as he came out of his Benz. He stretched to his full 6'2 in height, surveying the magnificence of SC and then strode confidently into the building, followed by a rather beautiful, but intelligent looking woman who carried a briefcase, probably holding important documents they might need, and followed Nahar inside.
Every woman in the building tried their best not to drool at the heavenly male passing by, throwing them the most flirtatious glances and wickedest smiles, and did all that they could to prevent themselves from throwing their paperweights at the lady beside him and taking her position.
"Kir, where the hell is this bid being held?" Nahar asked the woman beside him, as they went towards the main desk.
"I think in the back garden..." she told him, and then she waked the girl behind the desk, "Excuse me, which way to the Bidding Session?" Taking note of the directions to the garden she dragged a whining Nahar towards the Bidding, not before he winked at the receptionist and causing the poor girl to stop breathing for a while.
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Shubrah stood at the entrance to the garden greeting everyone and directing them to their seats. The garden was huge and held home to some of the most beautiful flora in all of India, giving the place an exotic look. Two large white tents were erected and decorated with pink and white flowers, ribbons etc, and each table was covered with white and had a beautiful floral centerpiece placed on it, making the place look more like a reception rather than a bidding. There was a stage as well, and the podium for the old man who ran the bid and the nervous looking owners of the land next to it.
Kiran was impressed, and so was Nahar, but they weren't about to show that. They smiled curtly at Shubrah and found their places. Nahar's curiosity peaked, and he really wanted to see this woman whom many feared in the business world, yet spoke the world of…he was damn curious.
Kiran noticed his restlessness, and nudged him in the ribs, causing him to wince in pain, and stare at her with a "What was that for?!" look, to which she returned with scrunched raised eyebrows, "Kyaa hua? Aap itne restless kyun?"
"Me…restless…na…it's nothing…it's just…the bid!" he covered. At the same time he heard someone shout, "Saloni!" And he spun around in his chair to see a petite frame with the most tempting behind clad in a grey, PRADA suit, if he wasn't mistaken, and silky long hair disappearing from inside the tent to greet someone.
Kiran noticed this and was even more curious when Nahar got up with a start, fumbling about seeing someone he knew and hurriedly walking out the tent.
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From where he stood, he only had a view of the "Srivastav girl's" behind once more. She was talking to that Jai Walia's wife, Bani Walia.
"So…she's friends with Jai Walia…hmmm" he thought, and then he heard one of them giggle, and since Bani was just smiling at the moment, he was sure it was Saloni, and he had to admit, she had the most innocent laughter he had ever heard…
"Whoa! What the hell…chal" when he realized what he was doing, he rushed back inside and sat beside Kiran.
Kiran began to ask what was that all about, but the old man's voice cracked over the speakers requesting everyone be seated and get ready for the bid, so Kiran was forced to put the thoughts behind and gear into the business mind.
As the bidding began, the smaller companies began, and all Nahar could do was try to see Saloni's face…though every attempt of his was blocked. Her table was four tables to his side, and she was sitting in a position so that her face was blocked by the centerpiece. The lady who greeted them at the entrance was also at the table with Saloni, along with two men dressed professionally in black, sporting blazers branded with the SC logo, and ear pieces and dark sunglasses on their eyes, and Bani Walia.
"Bodyguards?" he mumbled, a bit taken aback.
"Huh?" asked Kiran, as she shuffled some papers.
"Uh, kuch nahin, Kir…it's at 75 lakhs start our bid" Nahar instructed. So Kiran joined in the bid. That's when the smaller companies took out, and the bigger companies moved in.
Somewhere when the bid reached 1 crore, Nahar and Kiran both noticed that SC had just pulled out of the bid, and from what he could tell, the ladies with Saloni were smiling…beaming actually…something was up. He saw Bani lean in to talk to saloni behind the centerpiece, nod, and Bani laughed.
"Something's up Nahar…why would SC pull out of this bid? They were our biggest problem…" Kiran looked a bit worried because now they were leading the bid.
"Um…Kir…let's follow suit and pull out to…" Nahar told her.
"Too late bro, we have the highest bid right----" but she was cut off by some other company offering 3 crores for the land. Smiling at that, Nahar signaled to stop and they sat now, wondering what the hell was up. He was gonna find out…by some hook or crook.



sorry if it was a bit short...i promise to update by monday!😆 just be sure to remind me...(naz i think u will be the one to deffo do that! hahahahah)


ALSO-- i was wondering...does anybody have any suggestions for a title? lolz i am clueless for a title at the moment...but i think i need one at this point...
please leave suggestions (both hindi and english i dont care)
thanks.
Edited by TiaMaria93 - 18 years ago
putturani thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#42
Aww thank u Tiff! 🤗 U make me 😭 (khushi ke aasoon)

Great FF! I love powerful Bani and Saloni. Ur FFs are always so POSITIVE!
Great to see Saloni so powerful. Now UPDATE soon!

Love ya loads, 🤗
Putturani
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Tiff,
Its mindblowing. I had so much fun reading it. I can't wait for monday when you will update another episode. Great writings...superbly well put. I can remind you...i can PM you every hour if you want. 😆 😆 just let me know.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: putturani

Aww thank u Tiff! 🤗 U make me 😭 (khushi ke aasoon)

Great FF! I love powerful Bani and Saloni. Ur FFs are always so POSITIVE!
Great to see Saloni so powerful. Now UPDATE soon!

Love ya loads, 🤗
Putturani



hahahahha and ur comments r always POSITIVE! hey....i had to dedicate to my little achiever! hahahaah glad u liked dude! (srry didnt know what else to refer to u! hehhehe)
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Posted: 18 years ago
#45
hi tia maria
i have been reading ur fan fic and i must say that it is
FABULOUS
👏 👏 👏
u really r an awsm writer 😊 😊
actually when i read this story it feels as if i am reading a novel written by
some celebrated authour rather than a fanfic 😳 😳
do continue writing and i will surely be waiting for the next episode 😛
here's a suggestion for the title:-
"Pyaar ke Dhai (2 and a half) Akshar"

sincerely
-aanchal
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Posted: 18 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: simran20

Tiff,
Its mindblowing. I had so much fun reading it. I can't wait for monday when you will update another episode. Great writings...superbly well put. I can remind you...i can PM you every hour if you want. 😆 😆 just let me know.



hahaha i already told u what u gotta do! hehehehehe just not every hour..varna i'd pull my hair out! haahhaha
TiaMaria93 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: ania_123

hi tia maria
i have been reading ur fan fic and i must say that it is
FABULOUS
👏 👏 👏
u really r an awsm writer 😊 😊
actually when i read this story it feels as if i am reading a novel written by
some celebrated authour rather than a fanfic 😳 😳
do continue writing and i will surely be waiting for the next episode 😛
here's a suggestion for the title:-
"Pyaar ke Dhai (2 and a half) Akshar"

sincerely
-aanchal



hey anchal...thank u very much for u sweet comments..they trulydo make me feel appreciated...and once more:😳
i will be updating tmrw night most likely...so do hope u return to read!😊
as for the name..thanks for the suggestion...but hehehehehehhhe can u tell me what does is mean in english? --unfortunately my hindi is not great hahahaha ...
all i know from that name is "pyaar"=love!😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#48
yaar Tiff...you've gotten me addicted to the fanfic! i totally LOVE it! it's really good! 👏 the last chapter with nahar's intro was mindblowing! cho chweet 😳 omg soooo good! you're an awesome writer! 😳 👏

~Ashi

ps- haha no i dont mind if u call me ash😆😉
TiaMaria93 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#49
😆

Originally posted by: .:Ashi:.

yaar Tiff...you've gotten me addicted to the fanfic! i totally LOVE it! it's really good! 👏 the last chapter with nahar's intro was mindblowing! cho chweet 😳 omg soooo good! you're an awesome writer! 😳 👏

~Ashi

ps- haha no i dont mind if u call me ash😆😉



hahahahaha!!!! i'm glad u do...once ur happy i'm happy!😆
will be continuing tmrw i think...yeah!!
and hahaha i hav some NS planned 😉 so stay tuned!!😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#50
wow mindblowing haha yes i will be reminding u non stop until you update it lol

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