Finally a Saath Phere Fan Fic!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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. This story is a little different than Saath Phere and is called:

Saloni- a simple middle- classed girl with dark skin.Is in love with a person named Neel. Always made fun of. Had no friend except Neel.

Neel- Saloni's friend

Bina- Mother of Saloni

Anand- Father of Saloni

And there are various other charecters that I will not list.

Saloni has finished her collage day and is going home, waiting for a taxi. While she was waiting, a group of kids came by and started making fun of her.

Raj- Ohh, mein kon ho? (he starts carrying his books the way Saloni does and starts making a circle around Saloni)

All the other kids start making circles around her, too, chanting "Kaali, Kaali, Kaali!"

Saloni just stands there and cries. And then, along came Neel to the rescue!

Neel- Eh, saala! Meri dost kay saath kye kar rahay ho? Agur tum logo ko kisi kay saath baat karna ki tamez na ho, to app log chup he raho to aacha rahega! Chal Saloni, mein tuma ghar chor dayta ho(walking away). In logo ka saath apna time maat barbad karna!

Saloni- Thanks Neel. (Smiling at him). Mein lucky ho kay mujhe tum jaisa dost meela hain.

Neel- Dost be kehati ho, aur pher thank you be bolti ho? Not good, yaar! Dost hota he kis leeya? Lo, baatho mein hum tumara ghar be agaya. Bye Saloni!

Saloni- Bye, Neel.

Saloni walks into the house and upstairs, to her room. She sits down and thinks about Neel. Yeh muhje kya ho raha hain? She thinks to herself. Jaab mein Neel ka saath hoti ho tab mein secure feel karte hoon. Kahi mein ussa pyaar to nahi.... Of course not. Neel to shieriff mera buchpan ka dost hain, aur kuch nahi.

Saloni! Khana tayar hain beta! Her mother, Bina, yells to her.

" Ie, mama!"

Saloni walks down and sits down at the dinner table.

Anand- Uh, Saloni beta, tum 22 vaaras ki hogye ho na? To tume shaadhi ki soch ne chiya. Humna ladka duna ke bohaat kosh ki, magur, kisina ha nahi kaha. Paar huma ek ladka mila hain. Usska naam Arjun hain. Agur tu haan kada to hum log bhaat aga bhada sukta hain.

Saloni is shocked.

Saloni- Mein.. mein nahi k-kar shukti.

Bina- Kyu nahi beta?

Saloni- kyuki mein kisi aur se pyaar kaartee hoon!

Everyone is shocked! Episode ends on Saloni's face.



What will happen next? I was thinking that Saloni will ask Neel to marry her but Neel will say that he is already engaged. That is what I was thinking. I don't know about you guys. But please, somene, do continue! Thanks.


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july12_1995 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Guess nobody liked it. It's okay, I won't write anymore. Sorry to waste your time.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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OMG!!

it's sweett..i like it..short and cutee 😃

i like ur fan fics please wite more. Members are probably just buzy...please writee more...I very interested to know whats happening next..
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Posted: 19 years ago
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yea ... its very nice and sweet do continue 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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great episode july plzz write more and soon cant wait for the next part. 😛

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Yup, it's an absolutely fanatastic fan-fic please continue. 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanks, here's the next part, but you guys can continue to write if you like
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Posted: 19 years ago
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good job july 12_1995
Edited by rangi1222 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: july12_1995

thanks, here's the next part, but you guys can continue to write if you like

where????😕

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Episode 2

Everyone is shocked bnecause Saloni likes Neel.

Bina- Kya? Bhaatameez! Yeh sub love marraige humara type logo kay leeya nahi hain! Mujhe tumsa yeh umed nahi ti!

Anand- Saloni, yeh sub kub sa chal raha hain?

Saloni(crying)- mujhe nahi pata kay Neel mujsay pyaar karta hain kay nah, par mein shierff itna jhanti ho kay mein Neel say bohuut pyaar karti hoon.

Saloni runs off up the stairs.

Gyatri- Dekho, bechari ko roladeeya na? Kya voh kisi say pyaar nahi kar sukhthi?

Hey I got to go now. But I'll post later. Or you could!

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