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Posted: 19 years ago

At narpat's house:

narpat: hum kitne khus naseb hai ki humein saloni jaisi ek beti mili hai

ambika: haan jaroor pitchle janam mein humne bahut punya kihe honge tab jakar bhagwaan ne humein aisi beti di hai...wo nahar ke saath kitni khush hai na bhagwan meri lado ki khushion par kisi ki bhi nazar na lagne de ...

narpat: haan ab to hamari saloni ki zindagi mein sirf aur sirf khushian hi ahengiy... bas ek shubra ki chinta thi paar ab woh bhi nahin rahin kyon ki mein janta hun ki neel shubra ko bahut khus rakhega...

just then saloni arrives and ambika notice her...

ambika: are saloni beta 100 saal umar hai teri abhi tumhari hi baat karrahe the kab aye tum dono Switzerland se???? aur nahar kahan hai woh nahin aya saath mein???

just then saloni breaks down in tears

ambika : saloni lado kya hua tum roh kyon rahi ho???...lado kuch to bolo sub thik to hai na??? saloni kuch to bolo.

saloni: mumi sub kuch khatam ho gaya ....sub kuch wo nahar pehle bhi ...mere saath itna bada dhoka hua...usne mujhe barbad kar diya...main humesha humesha ke liya wapas aa gayi hun saare rishten sare bhandan tod kar...

narpat : saloni kuch bolo to kaisa dhokha nahar pehle bhi kya??? beta tumhein meiri kasahm bataho kya hua???

saloni wiipped her tears and started to tell them about chandini nahars firsst wife and how she made his life misarablee and about her death...

ambika : kya un logon ne humare saath itna bada dhokha kya humare wishwas ko isi tarhan tod diya are kis janam ka badla liya unhone tumse ??? lado tum ab wahan nahin jaho gi

narpat: haan beta abhin tumhare mumi papa zinda hai koi jarorat nahin hai tumhein wahan jane ki...ambika ise aapne kamre mein le jao...

At nahars house:

Bhabo: humein saloni ko sub kuch shaadi se pehle bata dena chaiye tha us betchari ka to dil hi tut gaya

Brijesh: haan bhabo par ab kya karhein mein janta houn ki nahar saloni ke bina nahin ji pahega aur saloni bhi nahar se door rahke khus nahin hai. mujhe lagta hai ki humhein nahar ko narpatji ke ghar bhej dena chahiye agar wo saloni se mafi mangega to shayad wo wapas aa jayegi...

nahar: haan bhaisa...mein meri saloni ko wapas lakar hi rahunga...

when he arrived at natpahts house everyone was on dinning table...

Kaveri: are jawahisa aap humar ghar ko to 4chand laggahe jo aap yahan padhare...

nahar: papaji mujhe saloni se baat karni hai please sirf ek bar mujhe use mafi mang lene dijiie mein use wapas ghar lejana chahta hun...

kaveri : aap ke chahne na chane se kya farq pdrta hai wo saf saf keh chuki hai ki wo wapas nahi jayegi...

saloni just went in and heard the lil conversation betwen nahar and kaveri

saloni: kaveri tumhein meri personal baton mein bolne ka haq kisne dediya hai?? agar nahar ko mujhse baath karni hain to meri marji ki mein kya karun kya na karun...

kaver: thik hai mein to sirf aap ki madad karna chahti thi age aap ki marji..

nahar: saloni mujeh maff kardo please tum wapas aa jaho un palon ke liya ajaho jinmein humdono ne ek dusre ko deewaano ki tarah chaha tha please saloni wapas aa jao...

saloni answer karna chahati thi ke neel ka phone aa gaya...

neel:mumiji kaisi hain aap?? aur ghar mein sub kaise hai???papaji ,samar, kaveri...??

ambika: sub thik hai tum batao tum dono kaise ho shubra tumhein bahut tang to nahin kar rahi hai??

NEEL: nahin infact aap ko ek khush khabri deni thi shubra pregnant hai...

aMBIKA . KYA congrats beta kahan hai wo aur kaisi hai woh ??

Neel: woh so rahi hai aur doctor ne kaha hai ki sub thik hai bas use kisi bhi tarha ka sadma nahin pahunchna chahiye ...achacha mumiji mein rakhta hoon,darwaje par koi hai mein badmein phone karunga...bye.

Ambika : bye beta aur aapna aur shubra ka khayal rakna...

narpat: kya hua ambika itni khush kyon ho tum

aMBIKA. shubra maa banane wali hai

NARPAT and everyone else (except kaveri) :KYA ye to bahut khushi ki baat hai .

ambika : han par doctor ne kaha hai ki use koi bhi tarhan ka shock nahin lagna chaiye...

nahar:saloni deha shubhra ko koi bhi shock nahin lagna chahiye agar usko humare bare mein pata chal gaya to na jane kya ho sakta hai...

Saloni: aap thik kehte hai usko isbat ki khabar nahin lagne chahiye...

samar: didi To kya aap shubra ke khatir jiju ko maff kardogi???

Saloni: nahin samar, main wahan sirf tab tak hun jab tak shubra ki delivery nahi ho jati hai...uske baad main wapas aa jaaongi main wahan sirf ek majburi se ja rahin hun main Nahar ya phir inke pariwar ko maff nahin karungi kabhi nahin...

ok dear
sorry guys for such a silly part 😭 and sorry that i took so long ...
thx to raksha di for corecting my hindi 😳 🤗 BIG KISS BYE BYE


Edited by *Anju* - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
Great story anju dear. loved it. Youa re getting better and better. This is your best story . 👏 👏 and you are wel come dear
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: ramas

Great story anju dear. loved it. Youa re getting better and better. This is your best story . 👏 👏 and you are wel come dear

thx raksha di yeh sub aap ki help se hua hai😉
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: *Anju*

thx raksha di yeh sub aap ki help se hua hai😉

Heu Anju Jaisi Guru waise shishaya😆😛😆 I am proud of you.

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Posted: 19 years ago
anju dear,

that was very good............ love it..... Yeh kya, tum mootche agge nakil gayi 😆 .....proud off you, dear 👏 .....
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: shali

anju dear,

that was very good............ love it..... Yeh kya, tum mootche agge nakil gayi 😆 .....proud off you, dear 👏 .....

dankeschnnn 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
I am posting next episode shortly.
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episode #
Finally saloni decides to go with Nahar for the sake of Shubhra and Neels happiness. She knows how insecure shubhra is. She also knows if Neel finds out that I left Nahar.He will be more concern about me than Shubhra.Saloni is leaving with Nahar.Ambika nad Narpat are upset but allows Saloni to go.Nahar tries talk but Saloni doesnot respond. Nahar gives up and calls Tara a to let her know that he is brining Saloni back. They reach home.

Everyone is waiting for them. Tara comes with Arati. She does arati of Saloni and Nahar. Then she does najar. She does not want anything to go wrong with them this time. She hugs Saloni. But Saloni is not too happy. She tells Nahar she would like to stay in guest room. nahar is upset. Bhabho tells her : Beta hamare ghar me bahut sare naukar hai. Or agar tum nahar se alag rahi to hamare ghar ki baate bahar hogi. Tum itni samajdar ho. kya apne ghar ki badnami tumhe thik lagegi? Saloni does not say anything goes with Nahar to their room. Nahar tries to talk.


Nahar: Saloni mujhse bahut badi galti hui hai. Maine tumhara bharosa toda hai. Magar mujhe laga agar mai tumhe bataonga to tumhe kho dunga. Tumhe khone se mai marna jayada pasand karta hu. Chandani mera past thi. Ab tum hi mere liye mera sab kuch ho. Kuch kaho mujhse. Mai tumhe aise khamosh nahi dekh sakta. Please Saloni He breaks up and starts crying and covers his face.


Saloni: aap jante hai mai yaha sirf shubhra ki vajah se aayi hu. Aur hum ek kamre me majboori se saath rahnege. Duniya ke liye hum pati patni hai. Lekin aapne aur gharwalone mera viswas todke hamara rishta tod diya. Mai kewal shaerer se yaha hoo. Mere liye yaha rehna bhi marne saman hai. Ab mujh se aur jayada umeed mat rakhiyega.


Bhabho comes to call them for dinner. Saloni tells her she is not hungry. Nahar says the same. Ishan comes running Saloni mami chalo ab mujhe bahut bhukh lagi hai. Aaj to mai aapke hathos khana chahta hun. Aur mai bhi aapko khiloonga. He grabs Saloni's hand and pulls her. Ishan tells Nahar chalo mama aap ko kya huva. Aapki ankhe bhigi kyon hai. Nahar: chalo Ishan . meri ankho me kuch gira hai shayad. They all eat. Saloni feeds ishan. Ishan feeds saloni. Everyone is so happy seeing this. Ishan tells Saloni mami aapse bahut bate karni hai. Saloni takes him to room. She is atleast happy talking to him. Aditi comes calling him. Chalo Ab sona hai Ishan. Ishan leaves room. Nahar comes in. saloni picks up pillow and bed sheet and put on the floor. Nahar tells her. she should sleep on the bed. He will sleep on the floor.


Saloni turn off light and goes to sleep. In the middle of night she hears weird sound and wakes up to find Nahar missing from the room. She goes looking for him and goes to purani dodi. She finds Nahar sitting there holding his head. He sees Saloni and tries to talk but Saloni goes away.


Few days passes like that. Saloni hardly talks to anyone. One day she feels that Nahar is not looking well. But she keeps quiet. At night again Nahar is missing. So she goes to look. She goes to purani dodi. Nahar is not there. Then she goes in living room. She sees Nahar lying on the sofa breathing weird. She suspects something is wrong. She feels his forehead it is very warm. She feels his neck. It is very warm. She wakes him. She asks him to come back to room. Nahar tries to get up. But looses balance. Saloni holds him and takes him to the room. Helps him in the bed. He is shivering badly and saying Saloni Saloni. Saloni feels his body. It is very hot. She gets salt water. Start putting on Nahar's forhead. Nahar holds her hand and won't let go. Saloni tries to leave his hand but Nahar is holding it very tight.


Saloni: Mai abhi aayi. Mai aapko is haal me chodkar kahi nahi jaaongi. Magar mujhe aapke liye dawai lani hai. Nahar leaves her hand. Saloni gets tara and Brijesh. Brijesh gets medicine. Saloni give him medicine and checks the temperature. Nahar is running 103 degree temperature. Saloni asks Tara and Brijesh to go to sleep and she will take care of him. Saloni sits by him all night and changes salt water cloth. Nahar is till holding her hand and won't let go. Finally saloni gets too tired and dozes off next to Nahar. In the morning when she wakes up. Naahr is still sleeping. She checkes his temperature It is down little. But still 101 degree. Bahbho comes to check on Nahar. She is happy to see Saloni taking care of Naahr.


Bahbho: Saloni beta Nahar kaisa hai ab. Saloni: Bhabho fever come huva lekin abhi 101 hai. Shayad hume doctor ko bulana chahiye. Sari raat woh dard se karahate rahe. Magar muje bataya nahi dard kaha hota hai. Bas apna saar pakdte rahe. Maine kai baar saar dabaya. Lagta hai abhi saar me dard hai. Doctor comes and gives Nahar shot and more medicies. Bhabho asks Saloni to get some rest. She will look after Nahar. Saloni tries to sleep. But couln't sleep. Suddenly Nahar wakes up screaming. Saalooooni mujhe chod kar mat jao. Mai mar jaonga. Bhabho tells Nahar dekho saloni kahi nahi gai. Yaha soi hai. Saloni gets up and sits next to him. He holds her hand and puts on his head. Saloni sees tears in his eyes. She tells him. Mai aapko is halat mai chod kar kahi nahi jaoongi. Aap shant ho jaiye or so jaiye. She gently massages his head and forehead. Nahar goes to sleep holding her hand. Saloni sees smile on his face. Ambika calls Saloni to see how is she doing. Saloni notifies her about Nahar's illness. Ambika and Narpat comes to see Nahar.


2 more days passes Nahar is feeling better. But he won't let go of Saloni. Saloni tries to move away. Then he tells her: kaash mai hamesha bimar rahu. Taki tum mere paas raho . Saloni: aap aise mat kahiye. Mai koi patthr nahi. Jo aap ko aise haal mai dekhkar chain se rahe saku. AAp thik ho jaiye. Dekhiye kaisi halat banayi hai apni. Kitne duble ho gaye ho. Tara brings juice. Saloni helps him sit and give him juice and feeds fruit with her hands. Nahar could not eat and get tears in his eyes. Saloni wipes his tears and tells him. Itna kha lijiye. Varna thik kaise hoge. Agar aap ab roye to maisach me chali jaaongi. Aap ko aise mai nahi dekh sakti. Mai bhi aapse bahut pyar karti hu. Aur aapke bina ji nahi sakti. She starts crying and holds his hands.. Nahar sobbs. Saloni please mujhe ab maaf kardo mai aise nahi ji paonga. Mai mar jaonga. Saloni hugs him. Bas aap shant ho jaiye. Maine aap ko maaf kiya. She massges his back and kisses his forehead. Nahar hugs her harder. They go to sleep in each other's arm without realizing that the door is open.


In the morning when tara comes to the room. She smiles seeing them sleeping in each others arm. She gets very happy. She closes door and runs to tell Brijesh good news. Brijesh is very happy. Saloni wakes up with the sound of door closing and seeing tara she blushes and tries to move away. Nahar holds her tighter. She kisses his forehead. Nahar wakes up. He asks her to take him to the breakfast table. Saloni helps him. Seeing them together the whole family is so happy. Brijesh tells Nahar: Congratulation. Janab Akhir tumne apni ruthi dulhan ko mana liya. Ab to badi party ho jaye. Nahar gives a big smile. Thik hai bhaiya. Kyon nahi. Sach me meri Saloni mujhe vapas mili hai to badi party honi hi chahiye.


To be continued
Next person will continue with party and their time together after the party


Edited by ramas - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
loved your epi...thanks for bringing them back together again.....

the party and some romance are coming your way....

big kiss,

shali
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Posted: 19 years ago
Wow good going…. looks like I m reading Hindi version of Mills & Boons lol..... 😉

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