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Posted: 19 years ago
omg shali... that was an amazing part. just too good 👏 👏 true say show isnt giving any romance so why not shali's updates on fanfic 😉.
amazing job loved it
-Ruby
Raksha di, who is next??
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: ruby89

omg shali... that was an amazing part. just too good 👏 👏 true say show isnt giving any romance so why not shali's updates on fanfic 😉.
amazing job loved it
-Ruby
Raksha di, who is next??

Hey ruby,

I am gladd to entertain you .....

thank you for your comment......its always good to know that everybody loves what we are writing.......

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Posted: 19 years ago
are cont soon waitin to read the next part
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Posted: 19 years ago
shali great episode loved itand I will continue soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
and where is page 62 ?? by the way its a good story. well written and more fun.
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Posted: 19 years ago

Recap: brijesh walks in to the room. Nahar good morning bhaisa. Aapko kuch kaam tha. Nahar, saloni ki purane dori kai bhareme hame bhatane pedega.waqt aa gaya hai.. Nahar tells bhaisa hum yeh itni jaldi to saloni ko bata nahie payenge. Aap ko patha hai humko saloni ko ek suprice dena hai. woh is baat se bahut khush hogi...

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Nahar asks saloni to close her eyes and Puts the tickets to go to Switzerland in her hands. Saloni opens her eyes and see the tickets. She hugs Nahar real hard and kisses him.
Saloni: Sach hum waha ja rahe hai. Aap kitne achche hai.
Nahar: saloni mujhe malum tha. Tumhe bahut achcha lagega. Nahar hugs her back. They both started thinking about last trip they had together in Zurich.Saloni starts packing and she is so happy. Nahar face lights up seeing Saloni's face.

Tara: Saloni tum apna honeymoon yaad kar rahi ho. Is baar khub enjoy karke ana samaji.
Saloni : Jee bhabhisa. Ab mai Nilima aai to aisa path padhongi ke ainda Nahar ka naam bhi na le.

They reach airport. The flight is delayed for 4 hours. Saloni decides to go for little shopping while Nahar waits. They announce flight is living hour early. Nahar panics and keeps calling Saloni. Saloni has left he cell in her bag. Nahar doesn't know where she is.
He calls home to find out they have not heard from saloni. Nahar walks and walks and only 15 minutes left for the flight departure. Nahar is so upset. He is trying to get out of airport and sees Saloni running toward him. He grabs Saloni's hand hard and yells.
Saloni tumhe itna bhi khayal nahi hamari flight miss hogi. Abhi shopping ki kya jaroorat thi.
Tum auratoko kbhi khayal nahi raheta. Mai tumse bahut naraj hoon. Cell bhi yaha rakh diya.
Saloni gets tears in her eyes: Chodo mera hath mujhe bahut dard hota hai. I am sorry. Mujhe kya pata flight early ho jayegi.

Saloni mooh phulake plane mei beth jati hai.In 2 minutes Nahar relizes how upset he was with Saloni. He takes her hand and sees dark circles where he had grabbed her. He kisses her hand and says: sorry bhai maaf kar do meri pyari saloni. Mai bhi ek number ka gadha hoon. Hamesh meri Saloni ko naraj karta hoon. Saloni starts crying. Nahar holds her closer and kiss her. Ab shant bhi ho jao please. Mai tumhe rota nahi dekh sakta. He starts hitting himself. Saloni holds his hand and laughs. After Dinner Saloni puts her head on Nahar's shoulder and go to sleep. Nahar wakes her when they reach Zurich.

Nilima and Ravi comes to pick them from the airport. They have lunch together and leave for hotel. Nilima is nice to saloni this time. They go to the same hotel where Saloni was considred hero last time. Saloni opens shopping bags and gives Nahar new night rob and swimming suit she bought for him. Nahar is overwhelmed and feels really bad for scolding Saloni. Holds her in his arms and carries her to bed. He holds his ears tells her sorry very sorry darling Saloni. Jumps in the bed and make love passionately. Next morning the manager comes with all the breakfast items and tells her they are their guests and will not pay a penny. Limo will be at their service where ever they want to go. Saloni is very happy. They are enjoying like their honeymoon for 4 days. They did lot of sightseeing, swimming and love making.Last day, Nahar finishes his business while Saloni her shopping. This is their last night in Zurich. Nahar decides to tell her the secret regarding key before they leave. Nahar holds Saloni in his arms and tells her.

Saloni: Mai tumko apne aapse bhi jayada pyar karta hun. Mai tumhe aaj woh raaz batana chahta hun jo hamare bich deewar bana hai. Kash tum mujhe maaf kardo . Itni ummed karta hun Meri pahele bhi shadi ho chuki hai. Iska naam chandani tha. Mai ise bahut pyar karta tha iske liye diwana tha.. Magar woh bhaisa se pyar karti thi. Bhaisa se Badla lene ke liye isne mujhse shadi ki. Shadi ke baad ek din bhi mujhe chain se nahi rehne diya. Hamesha mujse or gharwalso ladti rahi. Jab hum picnic par gaye. Mai aur bhaisa golf khel rahe the. Mera pav khadde mei gira aur mere kapde gande ho gaye. Chandni Isan ke saath khel rahi thi to Tarabhaibhi mere kapde dhulva rahi thi. Chandni daud ke ayi aur usne Tara bhabhi par badchalni ka ilzam lagaya aur kaha tarabhabhi ke pet me mera bachcha pal raha hai. Usne tarabhabhi ko dhakka de diya. Mujhe bahut gussa aya. Hum dono ek dusre ko dhakka dene lage. Channdni mujhe dhakka deke piche hati ke khai me gir padi aur uski maut ho gayi. Mai apne aapko uski maut ka jiimewar samajne laga. Phir sach samne aya. Woh ek accident tha. Magar mai aaj bhi us guiltse nikal nahi paya. Raat ko mai so nahi pata aur usi key se tala khol kar mei purani deodi mei jata hun. Jaha mai aur chandni rahete the. Ab mai tumse aur sirf tumse hi pyar karta hoon. Tum hi mere liye sab kuch ho.

Saloni is stunned and crying so hard as soon as he finishes. Nahar tries to hold her. She pushes him away. Nahar: Saloni kuch kaho please. Mujhe bahut dar lagta hai. Tum thik ho na.

Saloni: mere sath itna bada dhokha. Aapne meri zingi barbad ki. Mai aapke sath ek pal bhi nahi ji sakti. Mai aapko kabhi maaf nahi karoongi. Ab mera aapka koi rishta nahi.
Next morning They leave for home. Nahar tries to apologize and says sorry so many times. Saloni doesnot even look at him and keeps crying They reach home. Saloni doesnot talk to anyone . She packs her bags. Nahar and The whole family pleads her not to leave home. Nahar even cries. Saloni mat jao tumhare bina mai mar jaonga .Saloni doesnot listen to anyone and leaves house with tears in her eyes.
To be continued

Edited by ramas - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
aww DI, that was a great part. but lekin saloni ko ghar churwa diya 😭 poor nahar. cantwait to read whts stored for us next. so whoz writing? 😃
-Ruby
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: hongray

and where is page 62 ?? by the way its a good story. well written and more fun.

mods have been rearranging the msgs i think, even in other parts of forum this is happening. Its there but u just have to read through now😕

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Posted: 19 years ago
woohoo.... that was excellent
Gr8 Epi Di. 👏 👏 👏

But poor saloni & nahar.. even in this fanfic judaai ke gham likha hain 😭

Lets hope that our brilliant writers of this fanfic can bring saloni & bahar back 2gether again soon. 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: ruby89

aww DI, that was a great part. but lekin saloni ko ghar churwa diya 😭 poor nahar. cantwait to read whts stored for us next. so whoz writing? 😃
-Ruby

thanks ruby

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