FanFic SAATHPHERE - Page 53

Plz everyone post the comment as you read. Your comment is the only reward we expect so just spend a minute or 2 and give us comments. We spend lot of time writing these.

Since we are not getting comments I have hard time convinicing any one to write and I will be forced to close this fanfic. I cannot handle 2 fan fics. I need writers and am trying to help the ones who are writing. But they need readers encouragement as well. So post the comments as you read.

Omg. 👏.... I have no words 😲

I'm sorry I had deserted this ff for so long and now I just came and read shali's one part and I am completely blown away. you guys have been doing an amazing job!! I can't even express. Shali jaan, omg, you're soo talented!! tum toh chupi rustam nikli 😆... if someone would give me brief details as to the storyline, I can perhaps write again. Rakshaji, I know what you mean by handling two ffs, it gets pretty difficult. I am writing an ff in KS forum and I used to write that other one and it was hard. I feel extremely bad for leaving it before. I thought that after muni left, everyone just dropped the topic, but you guys are still going, and at what a pace!!

Shali, you just brought the house down girl!!😆

just amazing!!
dc

my dear anju and nitu,

thank you very much for your lovely comments... I appreciate them very much....

big big kiss....

Originally posted by: tinajan

good job

hoi, dank je ben blij dat je het goed vond......

Originally posted by: shali

my dear anju and nitu,

thank you very much for your lovely comments... I appreciate them very much....

big big kiss....

your welcome sweety

Originally posted by: shali

my dear anju and nitu,

thank you very much for your lovely comments... I appreciate them very much....

big big kiss....

well if you're gonna write so well, its kind of a must for us to complement!😆... too good for words!

dc

hi all,

sorry to keep you waiting....but finaly my epi. again....hope you gone like it .... raksha thanks for being there..... big big kiss....


At 2 that night saloni woke up. She didn't find Nahar next to her and looked around in the room… she wasn't able to find Nahar and called for him... Yeh nahar kidhar chale gaya she thought… After a few minutes she decided to go back to the house. All dressed and after she checked her make-up she went back. The party was still going on… she looked around if nahar was there.



Tara saw saloni, she walked to her and ask her were she has been. Saloni all blushing answers: mai room me thi. Tara saw saloni blushing... Akele ya Nahar tumhare saath tha... Saloni couldn't look straight in Tara eyes… she mumble answers... but isn't able to ….. Then suddenly Nahar came from behind and said…. Yeh kya bhabhisa… hum to aap ke samne he… saloni tum kyon party chdr ke chali gayi thi. Saloni looked at nahar, couldn't believe what she was hearing…..totally stunned…. Tara started to laugh….and walked away…..



Saloni now mad at nahar looked at him…. Tum…. Hai mai kya kahu?….. She turns around and starts walking away… when nahar grabs her and pulls her besides him… aap chodona gussa…. Saloni tried to free her self but nahar was holding her hard. She looked at him, aapko mere mazaak oudane me mazaa aa raha hai…. Chorjye mujhe, aapse baat nahie kerni… Nahar looked down on her smiling… Ek dance ho jaje… Nahie dance nahie kerni, haath chodye and pulled to free her hand… and walked off…. Nahar keep standing there with a big smile and a naughty look in his eyes…..



The party finished and everybody went to bed… saloni didn't talked with nahar that night….In the morning after the puja. Bhabo ask Saloni to prepare the breakfast. Everybody is seated when saloni comes from the kitchen to serve the food…. Saloni sees nahar smiling at her but she gives him a nasty look back. Brijesh and the gang notice that and start grinning… saloni gives the food to everybody accept Nahar… Brijesh ask... Saloni nahar ko bhi nasta dena. Saloni: nahi bhaisa, un ki stomach ka problem hai, kal raat ko kuch jyaada drinks ho gaye the… is liye... aaj unko sirf juice he pinaa hoga…



Nahar looks up, can't believe what he is hearing... yeh … kab…. Saloni interrupts him… Aap ne to subha complain ki thi… Nahar sees the naughty smile appearing on saloni faces. She is getting even with him… he thinks... Brijesh. Ha nahar tum sirf juice he lena… Nahar: lekin bhaisa meri tabyaat aap thik….. na nahar, tumhe aaj sirf or sirf juice aur paani pina hoga…. Nahar gives saloni a nasty look and stands up from the dinning table and walks off…Saloni sits at the table and starts to serve herself, Tara who sits beside her whispers: kya baat hai saloni, tum ne nahar ko kal raat ki mazaak ke liye badaala to lliya hai, margar dekna who tumhe iska jawab kaisa dehga…. Hum to aarm se tamasha dhekhnge …. And laughed again….



After breakfast all decide to have a day out and a picnic. Saloni tries to go to her room to inform nahar, when Neel and shubra came… and brijesh suggested to invite them along. Saloni walked to her room….In the room Nahar was walking up and down, thinking how to get back at Saloni…..



So the next writer will tell you that.

Shali amazing your wrting is improving so much. loved it dear. Keep it up. 👏 👏 👏

HALOOO I WANT THE ENGLISH VERSION TOO ALL OF THESE FAN FICS OK? TEEKH HAI! HAHAHA PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ

Shali jaan...

you are simply....

BRILLIANT!!

👏

dc