Member of the week-Jaadoogar!! - Page 112

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Originally posted by: Jaadoogar

Notes: Yeh drama poori tarah se kalpanik hai, aor sirf thora fun hai ismein. I tried my best to do justice with all party. But still If you feel I went out of limit, please forgive me and forget it. My intention is not to hurt anybody.

Thanks to Jaya who had asked to write a drama, and I tried my best.

It is a surprise gift from me for all of you, I tried to mention all names, but if I forgot anybody unke lie:

Jinke naam lub pe naa aa sake

woh naam mere dil mein rah gaye

(Monday ki shaam hai aor SRGMP-Khichri ki shooting hone waali hai, Sara set ready hai, 4 contestant hai Vinit, Debojit, Himani and Hemachandra. Mentors are AS, ID and HR. Judges are Ahijeet and Alka Yagnik, aor hamara IF ke members special invitees hain. Aor as usual hamare shaan host hain Ishita ke saath. Gajji mike lekar handle kar rahe hain)

Gajji(zor se):

aaaj hai somvaar ki shaam
Shru karte hain lekar hari ka naam
Shaan zara stage pe aage aaao
Aor zara apne baal pe haath ghumao

(Shaan aage aaye andhere se ujaale mein, baal pe haath pherte hue, ID aankh band karke baithe hain pencil se head khujla rahe, HR bahut tention mein hai, AS bechara corner mein watch dekh rahe)

Shaan:

Abhi tak main akela bhatakta raha
aaj jaakar mujhe Ishita ka saath milaa
aap sabhi log ho jaaye tayyar
hone wala hai shru suron ka war

ID(War ka word sunte hi): Yalghaaaaaaaaar Ho
Gajji: Cut cut cut,
ID zara apna thora deemaagh lagaye
Abhi thori der to araam se baith jaaye

ID(Gajji se bolte hue)
Pahle to hoga mere yalghaar ka hi naraa
Kyun debo kaya khayal hai tumhaaraa

Debu: Sir ji aap jo kahiye

(Issi beech ek awaaz aati hai audience se Letss ROCKZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ,
Sabhi log palat kar dekhe to koi surpize nahin sabhi jaante hain woh kaon theee(Bansari - my sweet sis, I am also from BS rocksss group as you))

Appa Ji(Ghusse mein khare ho kar):
Main sach kah raha mujhe bahut ghussa aa gaya
Pahle keyboard phansta tha aaj gala bhi phans gaya

(Yeh sun kar Himesh bhi ucchhal para aor apne style mein haath upar uthate hue zor se bola Wah Wah Lets ROCKZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ)
Gajji: Cut Cut,
Himesh qaaboo mein rakho apne dil aor armaan ko
chupchaap khara hai, bolne do thora bechare shaan ko

Gajji(Anand bhai se dheere se):
Yaar kahan se pakar kar tum ne in sab mentor ko laya
ek ne kabhi dadhi nahin banayee to doosra kabhi nahin nahaya

Shaan(Jaldi se mike pakar kar):
Aadesh bhai lagta hain kahin khoye hain
Mushkil hai kahna yeh jaage hain ya soye hain

(Abhijeet aor alka udhar kar rahe hain intezaar
Murga murgi ka gala dabane ko hain tayyar)

(Issi beech aati hai zor ki awaaz kahin se
Gajji idhar aaye mere saath photo khinchaye
Palat kar hum sab ne bari bechaini se dekha
woh apna Vinit thaa, kaise kare koi inhe andekha)

Shaan:
sabhi log taali bajaye aa rahe hain chhote nawaab
Inko inki mehbooba mil jaye yahi hai inka khwaab

(Vinit bare shaan se aa rahe topi pe haath ghumate hue
Gana shru karte hain upar neeche ka notes lagate hue

Kahin pe Vinit ke do chaar sur hil gayen
Gajji ne kaha vinit phir se gana shru karen)

Gajji:
Vinit acche se gao yeh tumhari aakhri baari hai
public ko sur mein gana sunana meri zimmedari hai
(Vinit ne phir se gana gaya khair khatam huaa jaise taise)

Abhijeet(Khara hokar):
Tumse acha to mera gadha gata hai
awaaz bhale bura ho par usse sur to ataa hai

Alka:
Abhijeet Tumne kaya kabhi koi tough gana aajtak gaya
jaise taise gaa lete ho, kyun kishore da ka lahja churaya

Anolda(Vinit - IF wale se)
Vinit chalo na zara Ishita ko bulaate hain
humdono milkar uske saath photo khinchate hain

Jaya(ek paper nikaalti hain purse se, mentor ki taraf mukhatib hote hue)
Main ne aaplogon ke lie sirf ek hi question banakar laya hai
Yeh bataye aaplogon ne yahan baith kar kitna paisa kamaya hai
(As usual tough question from Jaya)

Shaan:
Ab aa rahe hamare Voice of Assam
Maan ka sapna poora karna inka hai kaam

ID(Yalghaar ho kahte hue)
Debu mana ke aajka din nahin hai jumma
Lekin tumhe yaad hai na mera woh chumma

Varshaji(Issi beech uthkar kahti hain)
Bahut ho gaye ab hamein karte karte intezaar
Jaldi Hemu ko bulao warna yahan baithna hai bekaar

Madhavi:
Yes Hemu my sweetheart where are you handsome
Agar ek kam pari to main tere lie loongi saat janam

(Kisi tarah se debu ne khatam kia apna gana
agar aap logon ko samajh ayaa to mujhe batana)

Abhijeet:
Is this song your choice or choice of your mentor
Ismein gaane ka kucch pata nahin aor zayda thaa shor
Phir bhi tumne surely pahle waale se accha gaya
Kyunke mujhe inmein sirf 4-5 word hi samajh ayaa

Alka:
Tum kaise kahte ho ke Debu ne Vinit se accha gaya
Jahan low note lagana thaa wahan isne high note lagaya

Vinnie:
Shuru karte hain show 7 baje aor 4 baje hamein bulate hain
Bahut bhookh lagi hai chalkar zara kucchh khaate hain
Pallavi & Dawn:
Hamein bhi ab yahan bhookh se baitha nahin jaa raha
Vinnit tum Aage chalo hum bhi peeche aate hain

Daisy:
Main ne kitni baar apna banner upar uthaya
Lekin ek baar bhi camera idhar nahin ghumaya

(HR AS ke kaan mein kucchh phus phusaate hue
Chehre pe kaafi ghussa dikhate hue)

Manjudi:
Mere bhaiyon Hadd kar di Abhijeet- Alka ne yahan
Jahan sahi bolna hai ghalat bolte hai wahan
Sach kahti hoon kyun na hum sab walk out karen
Mujhse nahin dekhe jaate annayay itne bare

Gajji:
Zara Anushree ko bhejo usse dena hai update
Anushree daori Aise maoqa pe kaise karti late

Anuradha:
Gajji Anushree nahin, update dena mera hai kaaam
Aap confuse ho rahe hain kyunke hamara milta hua hai naam

Bhaskar:
Anuradha dekho aise chillanaa rules regulation mein nahin
Unsticky kar doonga update topic agar tum baithti nahin

Shaan:
Ab aa raha hai hamara hyderabaad ka gabruu jawaan
Sab log taali bajao yeh sur ke hain bahut hi mahaan

Sabhi Hemu ke supporters khare hokar zor ka taali bajaya
SDK chillayaa Hemu bhaiya, mein ne apka fan club banaya

(Issi beech Shady ho gaya hamare beech se ghayab
chupchaap se Ishita ke paas jaakar bolta:)
Shady(Impress karne):
Ishita main Fan clubs banane mein hoon bahut expert
Bolo to tumhara bhi bana doon 2 second mein jhat pat

Gajjii(Ishita se bolte Shady ke baare mein):
Ishshu tumne yeh kise stage pe bulaya
Ishita:
Gajji yeh mera bhai hai aapko nahin bataya

Tanisha:
Mujhe samajh nahin aa raha yeh sab ho raha kaya
Abhi tak in logon ne mere Sharib ko kyun nahin bulaya

(Hemu ne apna gana khatam kiaa ab judge ka hai kaam)
Abhijeet:
Wah Wah tumne to aaj SP Balasubraminyam se bhi acha gaayaa
Yeh to hindi show hai phir tumne Telugu mein kyun sunaya
(Abhijeet ko hindi aor telugu mein difference samajh hi nahin ayaa)

Alka:
Abhijeet, isne thora zaydaa shudh hindi mein gaya
islie tumhe kucch samajh mein nahin ayaa

Jaadoogar:
Yeh to ho raha hai hum sabhi logon ka apmaan
Hum wood pe baithe hain aor Mod gadde pe viraajmaan

Aaadesh(uth jata hai):
Gajji kahan se aapne Abhijeet jaisa judge laya
Isse accha job to Kumar Sanu ne bhi nibhaya

Deep(adi se😉):
Lagta hai kumbhkaran apni neend se ab jaagaa
Adi(deep se):
Zara mujhe dena to, jo tumhare paas hai dhaaga
Deep(😕adi se):
Arrey iss dhaage ki tumhe kyun pari hai zaroorat
Adi(deep se):
AS ko chup karane ki iske seva koi nahin soorat

(Issi beech Aadesh ne apne watch ki taraf phir se dekha
Ishara kiaa Himani-Vinit ko ke paar kar jao Laxman rekha
Himani Uthh kar chali aor green room se aate hue
Chehre pe thora ghussa aor ranjish dikhate hue)

Himani(Mike pakar kar boli)
Hamein nahin chahiye aise judges ka judgement
In dono mein se kisi ke ache nahin hai temprament
Islie main karti hoon SRGMP ka bahishkaar
Chalo Vinit-Hema yahan ab thaharna hai bekaar

HR(Khare hokar)
Main to ab ho gayaa hoon bahut tang
Ab nahin dekha jata judges ke aise rang

Kabhi:

HR Bhaiya aapko jo dil kare bol jaao

Hum aapke wakeel hai phir aakar mujhe batao

ID(Maoqa ka faida uthaate hue)
Gajji Aaaj aapko yahan pe faislaa to sunana hoga
Sab chale gayen islie Debu ko winner banana hoga

Smriti, SS, Angie, Gudiya, Sejal and Noopur(mujhse kahti hain)
Bhaiya ye sab kaya ho raha hai, yeh log nahin hain acche
Aisa lag raha ke yeh log hain hamse bhi chhote bachche

Seema:
Aadi mujhe tum yeh kahan kahan le aate
Iss accha mujhe kisi cafe mein le jaaate

Kavita and Leoni:
Chaliye Manju di ab sara maza ho gaya ekdam kirkira
Mujhe yaqeen nahin hota SRGP ka astar itna kaise gira

Barnalidi and Priya:
Mujhe afsos hai ke humne tum sabko yahan laya
Aor tumhe aise folop show ka shooting dikhaya
Isse acchaa to apna India-forum ka hai parivaar
Larte hain jhagarte hain lekin hum sab hain samajhdaar

Gajiji(khush hote hue Anand ji se):
Dekhna yeh sab main TV pe dikhaoonga
Unreal ko main reality show banaoonga
Jaise bhi ho main iska TRP badhaoonga
Dekhna yeh sab main TV pe dikhaoonga

(Ab Gajji Editing room mein)
Unhone CD ko set mein lagaya
PLAY ka button dabaya😊
Zor se cameraman ko bulaya😡
Yeh kaya tumlogon blank CD banaya

Cameramen:
Sir aapne to sirf cut cut hi bola
kabhi bhi start ke lie aapne munh nahinkhola

Gajji:😭😭😭
Agar main tum logon jaise le aaoon aor do chaar
mera to mera Zee tv ka bhi ho jayaga bantadhaar

👏 Kya baat hai Jaadoo bhaiya brilliant tussi great ho.

very well written

Maan gaye bhai aapki kalpana shakti koh inna wadhiyan likha hai ki kya bataaoon i am almost falling off my chair😆

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Jadoo ji meine kabhi kuch nahin likha. par aapki baatein padhkar meine aise he sochat chalo try karein, man mein jo bhav hain woh like hain (Shady ab tum yeh mat kehna manju di yeh to rhyme nahin hote)

Hum sabne aapko kathin kathin karya diya

Par phir bhi aapke answer ne humhe surprise kiya

Mow thread se humne aapko jaana

Aur aapki personality ko bhi pehchana

Kabhi nahin socha tha

Aapme aur mujhme hai kitni samanta

Par hum kabhi nahin jaan paate

Agar IF par aapko Mow nahin banaya jata

Ant mein aapke surprise ne to kamal kar diya

Hanste hanste hamara pet bhi dukha aur naacha hiya

Kya drama likha aapne hum sabke khushi k e liye

Aapki koshih aur prayatn par hum nyochawar hue

MOW thread hai bahut pyara

Hum sabne dil ispar apna hara

Karte hain sab MOD & Admins ka dhanvavaad hum

Ishwar sabko rakeh khush, kyonki hamare IF mein hai dum.



Kya baat hai Manjuji aap bhi shayar ban gaye. Bahot hi achha likha hai.

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haan bahut achi baat hai and he desrves it. Shady mera matlab tha meine jo aise hee tukbandi ki hai, us par mujhe comment nhin kiya, ki manju di rhyme nahin kiya aapne.


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[Quote=manjujain]

jadoo ji usme ek nahin sab jabardast hai. sabke liye ekdam perfect likha hai. aapne bahut mehnat ki, hum logon ke liye. mujhe to bahut acha laga aur sach mein man se bahut khushi hui, tabhi to mein e bhi likhne ki koshish kee. ganeemat hai shady ne kuch nahin bola.


Manju ji.. Jadoo ji ke liye farewell mein ak accha ghazal likhoonga.. lekin soch samajh ke.. ab itna soch samajh ke yeh kahani banaayi hai to mujhe bhi accha likhna hoga

Manju di.. woh abhi padha.. pehle to Jadoo ji ka story padke seedhe jawaab diya tha.. aapka nahi dekha tha..

Lekin it's very good.. rhyme accha kiya.. lekin more importantly, dil se baat nikli, aur aapne humari muh ki baat cheen li..

Kyon main galat bol raha hoon kya aap batao?

Kya baat hai shadybhaiya aapne exactly Manjuji ke style me answer diya. You are realy talented.

thanks pallavi ji, sach mein meine kabhi much nahin likha, woh to yeh dekh kar ki jadoo bhaiya ne kitni mehant ki hai, laga humhe kcuh unke liye karna chahiye, bus man mein jo aaya likh diya. par ab lag raha hai, haan itna bura nahin hai.

Originally posted by: paljay

[Quote==manjujain]

Jadoo ji meine kabhi kuch nahin likha. par aapki baatein padhkar meine aise he sochat chalo try karein, man mein jo bhav hain woh like hain (Shady ab tum yeh mat kehna manju di yeh to rhyme nahin hote)

Hum sabne aapko kathin kathin karya diya

Par phir bhi aapke answer ne humhe surprise kiya

Mow thread se humne aapko jaana

Aur aapki personality ko bhi pehchana

Kabhi nahin socha tha

Aapme aur mujhme hai kitni samanta

Par hum kabhi nahin jaan paate

Agar IF par aapko Mow nahin banaya jata

Ant mein aapke surprise ne to kamal kar diya

Hanste hanste hamara pet bhi dukha aur naacha hiya

Kya drama likha aapne hum sabke khushi k e liye

Aapki koshih aur prayatn par hum nyochawar hue

MOW thread hai bahut pyara

Hum sabne dil ispar apna hara

Karte hain sab MOD & Admins ka dhanvavaad hum

Ishwar sabko rakeh khush, kyonki hamare IF mein hai dum.

Kya baat hai Manjuji aap bhi shayar ban gaye. Bahot hi achha likha hai.

Hi dawn and manju didi🤗

Manju didi aap bhi sher likhne lag gaye bahut hi acha likha hai di.

first SS here are hugs from me, because your AV said you need it right

🤗

haan likhna nahin aata SS mujhe, but haa likhne ka prayas kiya. sabko acha laga to man khush hua. thanks SS.

Originally posted by: shootingstar

Hi dawn and manju didi🤗

Manju didi aap bhi sher likhne lag gaye bahut hi acha likha hai di.

thx didi for the hugs🤗
di aapne bahut hi acha likha hai bas likhte jao aur aap ek din jadoo bhaiye jehse likhne lag jaoge 😳

Originally posted by: Jaadoogar

[Anu ab Bhaskar bhai ko kisi pe to chillana tha, Aor yeh aksar hota hai jispe action nahin lene ka jo sufferrer hote hain ussi pe action le lia jata hai, Yeh sabhi jagah hota hai normal life mein hota hai.

Awww.... Jadoo ji aap bhi...bechara Bhaskar bhai.. woh kaha chillata hain..jab dekho ROFL leke hasta reheta hain..😆😆

Jadooji,

aap ka MOTW ka aakhri din kab hain??

aap mujhe sikhayenge na..crash course on how to write shero shayry??

Jadoo bhaiya🤗 thx a lot 😳

Adi janab aayiye kehse hai? 😛