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Posted: 16 years ago
Cg, i never knew you were a poet eh!

that is really good!!!! keep it up!

Xoxo
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Rage-Of-Angels

Cg, i never knew you were a poet eh!

that is really good!!!! keep it up!

Xoxo



Yes...please continue the poem....if you want to.
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Posted: 16 years ago
t may not always be so, and I say
That if your lips, which I have loved, should touch another's
and your dear strong fingers clutch another's heart
If on another's face your sweet hair lay
In such a silence as i know, or such
great writhing words as, uttering overmuch,
stand helplessly before the spirit at bay.

If this should be, I say if this should be
you of my heart, send me a little word,
that I may go unto him, and take his hands,
saying,
Accept all happiness from me.
Then shall I turn my face, and hear one bird
sing terribly afar in the lost lands.

Okay im kinda stuck..this may make no sense what so ever.

You were a friend of mines whom im never seen
Behind the screen you would wear your veil,
We share ideas, love, happiness and sorrow yet we do not speak
All the nights we spent chatting, i felt you were always there
I never had to wonder if you truely cared.
So for this friendship we possess,
we owe this mail a debt,
Perhaps the charm lies in the fact
that we have never met.

Xoxo


Edited by Rage-Of-Angels - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
@ROA
Awesome!!!!! I can get what you're trying to convey.
Thanks......for providing a new twist to my poem....!!!
Edited by wats-in-da-name - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: wats-in-da-name

@ROA
Awesome!!!!! I can get what you're trying to convey.
Thanks......for providing a new twist to my poem....!!!



yeah i was getting bored reading only lost loves...mind you i feel easier to write depressing poems than lively ones..i dont think i ever wrote a lively poem lol!

Nae need to thank, yo ready for providing another twist to the poem? 😉

🤗

Xoxo



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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Rage-Of-Angels

t may not always be so, and I say
That if your lips, which I have loved, should touch another's
and your dear strong fingers clutch another's heart
If on another's face your sweet hair lay
In such a silence as i know, or such
great writhing words as, uttering overmuch,
stand helplessly before the spirit at bay.

If this should be, I say if this should be
you of my heart, send me a little word,
that I may go unto him, and take his hands,
saying,
Accept all happiness from me.
Then shall I turn my face, and hear one bird
sing terribly afar in the lost lands.

Okay im kinda stuck..this may make no sense what so ever.

You were a friend of mines whom im never seen
Behind the screen you would wear your veil,
We share ideas, love, happiness and sorrow yet we do not speak
All the nights we spent chatting, i felt you were always there
I never had to wonder if you truely cared.
So for this friendship we possess,
we owe this mail a debt,
Perhaps the charm lies in the fact
that we have never met.

Xoxo




I can't thank someone enough
For always being there when I was down
or appreciating me only to make me feel better
Without seeing you, hearing you or meeting you
Things have extended beyond boundaries
Coz it's purely spiritual, nothing physical
I'm amazed.....I never thought
someone could make such an impact on me
My heart was plain before
It's carved now
And it's never gonna be the same again

We met only a while back
I was unaware of the depth I would ever reach
Whatever you say...not sure they're true
Not so sure.....yet...so much sure.....
Coz it's a heart to heart talk...
Which only an affected heart can understand

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Rage-Of-Angels



yeah i was getting bored reading only lost loves...mind you i feel easier to write depressing poems than lively ones..i dont think i ever wrote a lively poem lol!

Nae need to thank, yo ready for providing another twist to the poem? 😉

🤗

Xoxo





Nah...i like going with the flow, as smooth and swift as a river....The content is the same like yours....just that it's from MY point of view.

hugs back🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
CG

I can't thank someone enough
For always being there when I was down
or appreciating me only to make me feel better
Without seeing you, hearing you or meeting you
Things have extended beyond boundaries
Coz it's purely spiritual, nothing physical
I'm amazed.....I never thought
someone could make such an impact on me
My heart was plain before
It's carved now
And it's never gonna be the same again

We met only a while back
I was unaware of the depth I would ever reach
Whatever you say...not sure they're true
Not so sure.....yet...so much sure.....
Coz it's a heart to heart talk...
Which only an affected heart can understand

Continue!

People around me could never understand what we shared
Some may say its crazy, but i dont care.
It seems so silly to me that on the computer screen,
someone on the other side becomes your everything
i am attached to you, i feel it hard to live without you
relieve me of my pain, my misery,
At night, i saw the sky clearing
When i clicked online
little did i know what joy it would bring
now everything seems to be ending
i fight back my tears, i cried for the friendship i would lose online
But then Angels whispered slowly in my ears
that your friends are only an email away.

Good night now lol!!!!

Xoxo

Edited by Rage-Of-Angels - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Rage-Of-Angels

CG

I can't thank someone enough
For always being there when I was down
or appreciating me only to make me feel better
Without seeing you, hearing you or meeting you
Things have extended beyond boundaries
Coz it's purely spiritual, nothing physical
I'm amazed.....I never thought
someone could make such an impact on me
My heart was plain before
It's carved now
And it's never gonna be the same again

We met only a while back
I was unaware of the depth I would ever reach
Whatever you say...not sure they're true
Not so sure.....yet...so much sure.....
Coz it's a heart to heart talk...
Which only an affected heart can understand

Continue!

People around me could never understand what we shared
Some may say its crazy, but i dont care.
It seems so silly to me that on the computer screen,
someone on the other side becomes your everything
i am attached to you, i feel it hard to live without you
relieve me of my pain, my misery,
At night, i saw the sky clearing
When i clicked online
little did i know what joy it would bring
now everything seems to be ending
i fight back my tears, i cried for the friendship i would lose online
But then Angels whispered slowly in my ears
that your friends are only an email away.

Good night now lol!!!!

Xoxo



Yes.....thanks....it's awesome...!!!!
g'nite!!!
Will stop now.......
someone else is free to continue....
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Posted: 16 years ago
Let me read what you gals are up to.

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