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Forever-KA

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Posted: 16 years ago

#371

Originally posted by: Summer3

Ah I think this is very well written too

kahin door jab din dhal jaye
saanjh ki dulhan badan churaaye chupake se aaye
mere Kayaalon ke aangan mein
koi sapanon ke deep jalaaye deep jalaaye
kahin door jab din dhal jaye
saanjh ki dulhan badan churaaye chupake se aaye

kabhi yunhin jab huyi bojhal saansen
bhar aayi baithe baithe jab yuhin aankhen
tabhi machala ke pyaar se chal ke
chhuye koyi mujhe par nazar na aaye nazar na aaye
kahin door jab din dhal jaye
saanjh ki dulhan badan churaaye chupake se aaye

kahin to ye dil kabhi mil nahin paate
kahin se nikal aaye janmon ke naate
ghani thi ulajhan bairi apanaa man
apanaa hi hoke sahe dard paraaye dard paraaye
kahin door jab din dhal jaye
saanjh ki dulhan badan churaaye chupake se aaye
mere Kayaalon ke aangan mein
koi sapanon ke deep jalaaye deep jalaaye

dil jaane mere saare bhed ye gahare
ho gaye kaise mere sapane sunahare
ye mere sapane yahi to hain apane
mujhase juda na honge inake ye saaye inake ye saaye
kahin door jab din dhal jaye
saanjh ki dulhan badan churaaye chupake se aaye

Thanks S3. yeah nice lyrics

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Posted: 16 years ago

#372

Where is Khusboo gone?

I like her shayaris.

Xoxo

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Forever-KA

@Forever-KA

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Posted: 16 years ago

#373

I am missing both her and Khatarnak. This topic is dying without them.

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Forever-KA

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Posted: 16 years ago

#374

Khuda nazre-bad say sab ko bachaye

har kisi ka chehra khilay or muskuraye

zindagi hai jaisay behtay dariya ki manind

jo hansay woh teray, jo roye woh doob jaye

lol..a positive message.

yeh dil bhi magar kab sunta hai kisi ki

aab is pagal dil ko kaun samjhae

Edited by King-Anu-Lives - 16 years ago

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khoobsoorat

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Posted: 16 years ago

#375

Jab koi yaad karta hai

bauhat dil ko sukoon milta hai

khushi hoti hai yeh sab souch kar

hamara bhi koi khayal rakhta hai

Khushi dena bauhat badi ebadat hai

milay mauqa tou iss ko mut gawana

na jaane kaun kis ghum mein ghira hai

sikha do usko hasna aur hasana

Edited by khoobsoorat - 16 years ago

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Forever-KA

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Posted: 16 years ago

#376

Thanks for the wonderful poem and great message. Nice to see you back.

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Forever-KA

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Posted: 16 years ago

#377

I am missing khatarnak bro today. dont know why..i loved his poems and although i am into urdu poems since i was a kid, i never said anything myself..it was after i saw khatarnak and we exchnaged ash-aars that i got hooked up to this.

here is what i wrote for him earlier today. nice to see his message too

tumhari sehat kay liyan us say arz karta hoon
aaj bas isi baat ki us say iltijaa karta hoon
khuda tumhe jald ata karay yeh naimat
sachay dil say mein aaj yeh dua karta hoon

shayeri ki yeh duniya jaisay veeran hai
khoobsorat bhi kuch kuch pareshan hai
yeh nacheez bhi kuch kehta rehta hai magar
par kahan meri shaeri mein woh jaan hai

all th best bro

will come with more later..right now feeling sleepy

Edited by King-Anu-Lives - 16 years ago