Roop Ishika Palak FF:Naa Jaane Kaisa Ehsaas Hai

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jaanulovejaanam

@jaanulovejaanam

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Posted: 7 years ago

Palak is sad today .She feels she can never be perfect for Roop.

How can she even think about him in such a way .

He deserve more better maybe .

Roop comes at her home and knocks at her door .

Roop:kya hua madam ?college nahin jaana kya ??

Palak :nahin ..tu ja!

Roop :pehle darwaja khol .

Palak :im not well yr .tu jaa na !

Roop :theek hai .late ho rahi hai mein jaa raha hun ! Bye !

Palak thinks :chala gaya kya ..?

She opens the door .

He shocks her by scaring her .

She gets angry .

Palak :kya hai roop?

Tu gaya nahin ?

Roop smiles and says :tere bina mera akele man hi kahan lagega !. Tu hotibhai to mein bore nahin hota..!

Palak :wo..

She feels sad and emotional.

Roop :kuchh chhupa rahi hai na tu ?

He holds her hand .

Roop :bata bhi !hua kya ?

Palak :kuchh nahin hua hai .

Roop :theek hai fir mein bhi nahin jaunga!

Yahin beth kar tera khyaal rakhunga .

Palak :nahin na ..mein kaha na ..pls tu ja padai kar college mein .

Roop :ok fine ! Jaa raha hun but take care.

Roop is confused and he thinks something not right with palak .

He goes sadly from there.

Palak closes the door and sits on floor .

Palak :mein kaise face karun tujhe roop .

Ye palak wo palak nahin hai shayad .

Thoda badal gayi hai !

Roop is in college .

He sits sadly on bench under tree.

Ishika comes there and sees roop sad .

Ishika :hey roop ,kya hua ?

Roop :kuchh nahin yr ye palak ..!

Ishika :kya hua use ?

Roop :aaj wo pata nahin sad si thi ...ajeeb sa behave kar rqhi thi !

Ishika :mm.. to tune usse poochha kyun nahin ?

Roop :meine poochha but usne kaha kuchh nahin hai !

She hugs roop .

Ishika :roop tu chinta mat kar ,wo theek ho jayegi !

Edited by jaanulovejaanam - 7 years ago

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jaanulovejaanam

@jaanulovejaanam

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Posted: 7 years ago

Roop :ishika tujhe ek baat bolun .

Ishika :haan bol

Roop :is life mein na kisi ko kisi pe dependent nahin hona chahiye .

Ishika :wo to tu theek keh raha hai par achanak ye sab kyun bol raha hai .

Roop :kyunki dosti wo pavitra rishta hai jismein anjaane mein hum apne friend pe depend ho jate hain .

Ishika :haan !aur uske bina kuchh achchha nahin lagta haina ?

Roop :haan !tujhe kaise pata ?

Ishika :bas pata hai !

Ishika :roop jitna mein palak ko janti hun wo kabhi tujhe hurt nahin hone degi agar wo problem mein hogi tab bhi !

Roop:itna to mein bhi palak ko nahin janta hounga jitna tune use jaan liya !

Ishika :wo kabhi bhi tujhse kuchh chhupana nahin chahegi but teri khushi ke liye wo sab karegi ..!

Ishika is emotional .

Roop :yr tum ladkiyan na kamal ho !tumhe samajhna namunkin hai !

Ishika smiles

Ishika :wo to hai !

He too smiles .

Roop :mein kitna lucky hun ki mujhe tujh jaisi partner mili aur palak jaisi friend.

Ishika:I love u roop .

Roop :I love u too yr

They hug again .

Roop is sad and lost today .

He comes at palak home from college and goes directly in her room .

He see her sleeping peacefully like a kid .

He goes near her and sits there placing his hand onbher head .

Roop :tu meri best friend hai

Jab bhi mujhe koi museebat aati thi to use sabse pehle tere se guzarna padta tha ajtak .

But i promise tujh pe bhi aane wali har ek musibat ko pehle mera samna karna padega !

He starts going from there but palak holds his hand .

Palak :roop i am sorry .

Roop feels confused.

She gets up from bed and hugs him tightly and starts crying .

Roop :are kya hua tujhe ?

Palak :meine tujhse jhoot bola . Mein theek hun .

Roop :fir ?

Palak keeps crying.

Roop breaks the hug and makes her sit on bed .

He weeps her tears .

Roop:kya hua tujhe?

Palak :tujhe ..tujhe khone se dar lagta hai na jaane kyun .

Roop :but mujhe kya hua ?

Palak :tujhe kuchh nahin hua but ..

Roop :but kya ??

Palak :agar meri shaadi ho gayi to fir to hum kabhi milenge hi nahin ya milenge bhi to ..

Roop starts laughing !

Palak gets angry and beats him .

Tu has raha hai .

Im not joking !samjha !!

Roops pats palak head .

Roop:buddhu ,jab tujhe kisi aur se pyaar ho jayega na to tujhe meri yaad bhi nahin ayegi dekh liyo .

Palak feels sad .

Roop :are mazak kar raha tha .

He cups her face .

Roop :tu humesha meri best friend rahegi samjhi buddhu and koi bhi humari dosti ke beech mein nahin aa sakta .tere hone wala pati bhinnahin !samjhi !

She smiles...

Both hug each other tightly .

Roop to gets tear in his eyes but he tried to hide it .

Edited by jaanulovejaanam - 7 years ago

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BinaNessa1

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Posted: 7 years ago

So palak in love with roop but Sam's her said something

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jaanulovejaanam

@jaanulovejaanam

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Posted: 7 years ago

Frds pls comment ur views on my ff .😊

It motivates me to write more and more better for u guys .

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ssuuvvii

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Posted: 7 years ago

Your writing is cute ..keep it up...Plz try to put some intense convo between rooshika when u will start their story in that way ..

Thanks..

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jaanulovejaanam

@jaanulovejaanam

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Posted: 7 years ago

Part 2

Palak mother comes there and sees them hugging .

She gets tensed and goes from there .

Palak :thank u roop ,tu mera sabse achchha bestie hai .

Roop :sabse achchha matlab ? Aur koi bhi bestie hai kya koi tera ?

Palak says in attitude a bit :nahin !abhi tak to nahin but tera to hai na !

Roop :matlab kya ?

Palak :ishika !

Roop :palak tum dono meri best frd ho koi comparison nahin hai tum dononka samjhi !

Tears drop from palak eyes .

She looks into roop eyes and try to understand why she feeling so different today .

Roop looks into her eyes and try to find out the reason of her sadness .

They gets lost in each other eyes thinking of their reasons .

Palak mother came and call roop .

They move away and see at back .

Her mother :roop ,meri beti ki apni bhi koi zindagi hai ki ya nahin ? Jab dekho yun aajate ho bin bulaye mehmaan ki tarah .

Palak tries to stop her :mummy !!

Roop :aunty aap janti to hain hum dono best frds hain and ek dusre se har baat share karte hain ,and aaj palak ko itna sad dekha to rok na paya kuud ko yahan aane se !

He looks at palak .

Mother : mujhe pata hai ! Kitni gehri dosti hai tumhari ,but ye sab ek limit mein rahe to hi achchha hai samjhe .

Aakhir uski bhi koi personal life hai ki nahin ?

Roop :sorry ! He feels too sad and guilty .

He goes from there .

Palak is shocked at her mom behaviour .

Palak :mummy apko hua kya hai ?

Kitna suna diya use bewajah .

She calls roop from back and runs behind him .

Mummy :bhagwan jane inki dosti aur kya naye rang dikhayegi humein ?

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jaanulovejaanam

@jaanulovejaanam

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: ssuuvvii
Your writing is cute ..keep it up...Plz try to put some intense convo between rooshika when u will start their story in that way ..
Thanks..

Thank u dear .😊

Keep telling what u want to see or wish to happen .

I will show it for sure very soon !😳😊

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jaanulovejaanam

@jaanulovejaanam

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Posted: 7 years ago

Continuing ... Part 2 .

Palak running behind roop calling him but he is nowhere .

She feels so sad .

She keeps running thinking of their bond .

What is happening to her ...?

Why she is so sad ?

She is unable to find the answers .

She asks god :hey bhagwan aap hi mujhe batao ki ye sab kya hai ? Kya karoon mein ..ab ? Ek taraf mein itna sad feel kar rahi hun aur dusri taraf mummy ne roop ko kya kuchh nahin suna diya par kyun ...?

It started raining and she keeps running and at the end she closes her eyes when she gets tired from running .

She thinks about roop .

How good he is ,always with her at her time of need .

Their bond from childhood ,their fights,nokjhoks and then pleasing each other by saying sorry !

A sweet smile shown on her face when she thinks about it .

She hears some voice and comes out of her thoughts suddenly .

Palak :ye to roop ki awaaj hai .

It started raining heavily .

She runs to find roop .

She finds him sitting under tree

She listens to what he is saying .

Roop :life kitni ajeeb hai na god !