Kash ek baar.... - Page 3

Originally posted by: NavyaKavya30

Utterly delightful, poignant and beautiful. Needless to say you tickled my tear ducts.

Originally posted by: Ecrivain.

The epitaphs penned down by you have very vividly evoked a deep sense of sweet nostalgia, the whirlwind of juvenescence memories came gushing back to me, as I reminisce the effervescent and exuberant recollections of yesteryears with a blithe disregard for the rules of the world.

Those were the days, when forging deep-seated attachments happened in a blink of an eye, the yearning for love and trust not withholding the ardour to let go and the naivety bridged the chasm that went amiss from those innocent and unsuspecting eyes, as life beckoned us to live and let live.

Kash koi lauta de woh bachpan ke din

Woh kagaz ki kashti, woh baarish ha pani

Muhalle si Sabse purani nishani woh burhiya jise bachhe kahte the nani
Woh nani ki baton mein parion ka dera, woh chehre ki jhurion mein sadion ka phera
Bhulaye nahi Bhool sakta hai koi woh chhoti si raaten, woh lambi kahani

Kabhi reth ke oonche teelon pe jana gharounde, banana bana kar mitana
Woh masoom chahat ki tasveer apne, woh khabon khiyalon ki jageer apne
Na duniya ka gham tha na rishton ke bandhan, bari khoobsurat thi woh zindagani

Ye doulat bhi le lo, yeh shohrat bhi le lo, bhale chheen lo mujh se meri jawani
Magar mujh ko lauta do woh bachpan ka sawan, woh kaghaz ki kashti, woh barish ka pani

Originally posted by: Ecrivain.

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This one made up for a very compelling read. I hope I am not missing out on any other riveting posts from you.? If so, please do let me know.

Thank you for penning this down !!

Originally posted by: -MIMOSA-

Ecrivain 👏

You always have the most beautiful words to say.

I love reading your post not only here, but in other posts as well.

How beautifully you have penned down the innocence of childhood and the friendships we formed on the blink of an eye.Thats why it is said that the childhood friendship is the purest one. Selfless and unsuspecting. Just pure companionship and love.

Ecrivain, this Gazhal sent me back to my school days. This is one of my Favourites, which always manages to make me deeply nostalgic. I used to listen to it every day after coming home from school, on a good old cassette player.

As beautifully it has been written by Sudarshan Faakir, Jagjit and Chitra Singh has infused life into it. I am sure, many of us can easily relate it to our childhood memories.

Are you a Jagjit Singh fan too?

Thank you so much for this! 😃

Originally posted by: lara3110

Thank you for your poignant post. I could sense Anami's piteous cry to her twin of her loneliness and his loss. 😔

Originally posted by: twinkletinki

You have expressed the pain of the loss which can't be repaired.The pain of not getting the chance to spend the innocense of life which could have become the memories of lifetime.

I have to write it again as i just lost my all words due to error in network.and i lost my feelings too...😭

Originally posted by: twinkle55

Sibling bondings are always very special be it twin or normal..for the first time twin bonding is showed so beautifully onscreen after Amar-Dhara which were conjoint..So i am considering this bonding different from normal and conjoint/siamese twins.

You have penned down the twirling of emotions inside Anami of not getting chance to spend the childhood moments which could have been so memorable.Your poem took me to my old good days when i started to learn what is going on around me..

Thanks to RKC for taking the step to showcase this pain of losing the beauty of spending life purely..amd thanks to you for giving the words to express it so beautifully🤗

Originally posted by: AshVarna

Thanks for sharing this beautiful write up... left me in tears💔 keep posting👏

Originally posted by: DiyaS

Beautifully written! 👏 I felt for Anami in the episode ... her tears and frustration at having lost someone without even knowing him ... 'what could have been ...' She feels the loss so deeply, as she gets to know her brother more and more through his diary ... and realises more and more how much she missed out on through the actions of her mother ... not the rich and pampered life of the LM, but the love, the squabbles, the bickering, the teasing that siblings share. I was reminded of my own brother and our bond ... the sibling bond is very, very special.

The makers have to be applauded ... and the actors too ... for bringing out the beauty of the brother sister bond so beautifully ... when the characters shared just one scene together before Vatsalya's demise.