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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dreamer-89

😳 I know this was Anami's wistful thoughts but for me this was a journey straight back to childhood!!

Days of innocence, masti fights lots of memories of childhood. Thank you dear for this beautiful piece.
The sibling bond is something that's special and unique. Twins or not the bond is the same. Childhood is all about making memories, making up stories where we are grown ups forgetting that in once we reach adulthood one wants to turn back the clock to good old days!!

Like Anami I too wish there's a button to rewind right back to carefree childhood. Unfortunately life doesn't offer us that privilege,only thing we can hope to do is make memories, hold onto them and make new ones as we grow up.While Anami missed out on bonding with her twin she made memories with laddoo 😳 but there's always going to be a part of her wishing, seeking for that chance to be with Vatsalya.

Writers deserve all the appreciation for visualising such a loving relationship portraying it so subtly but enough to pull at out heartstrings.


Benna, thank you so much dear! 🤗

Childhood memories are the best memories.
We do make many memories, as we grow older, but no stage in life is as blissful as childhood.
The carefree days and innocence is lost in the growing years to keep up the pace with the world.

In Friday's episode, Anami depicted the wistfulness of having lost that opportunity to make memories with Vatsalya. And how brilliantly it was done.
These two, whenever they are together on the screen, evoke so many emotions and feelings, that I can't help but pour them into tears or words. Haven't felt so, for a long long time for any fictional characters. So yes, not only the writers, but whole team and the actors enacting it on the screen, deserve all the applauds.

Job well done Benna! 😉 and thanks for encouraging me to write one more.



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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: milidibya

So true..heartrenching emotions portraying pain of not getting something which could have been so memorable..😭


Thank you so much for liking and commenting Milidibiya. 😊

Mahima enacted that yearning so well. And this longing is going to stay with her forever. A bitter truth, which she has to live with. Bringing out the truth about Vatsalya's murder might bring her some solace, but it will never fill the void left by Vatsalya's untimely demise.


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: ammu3

Oh wow ! That was brilliantly quoted to perfection @MIMOSA !
The yearning and desperate urge in those words to live one of those ; if not all those memories with a person whom she regrets not recognizing, not having - but finally knowing. All that is left behind of him - words and poems - a souvenir and an unforgettable night of shared emotions !
Heart-rending verses indeed.
I have grown up to fighting siblings all around - to an extreme ; such that I myself am relieved to an extent not to have a sibling - to love him with all my life , only to turn against each other with time - for pointless materialistic and superficial issues.

But here I see Anami and Vatsalya ; and even to some extent the underlying feelings of Narottam and ofc @Arshi67 - that like you say - kash ek baar mujhe mauka milta ki koyi aisa ek khooon ka rishta ho jo mujh jaise ban, hamein samjh sake, mujhe sataye , mujhe rulaye - lekin kabhi chod ke na jaye !

Thank you for this masterpiece !


Thank you so much for your appreciation Ammu! 😊

Your comment is so poignant. I was full of emotions after reading it.
We in our life, always yearn for something which we either have lost, or couldn't achieve. The quest is almost inseparable from our beings. What we forget is that, along with that quest, life has given us numerous reasons to smile, laugh and contentment. And this is the imperfection of our lives, which makes us move in the life, strive for its betterment and make the best of it.

This show provides us a perfect example of imperfection. It tells us that life is not just black and white, it is more of greys, all shades of grey. Nothing is flawless, nothing is perfect. And that is life.

Thank you once again for this heartfelt comment and appreciation. Glad I met you here. 🤗


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Posted: 7 years ago
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You have expressed the pain of the loss which can't be repaired.The pain of not getting the chance to spend the innocense of life which could have become the memories of lifetime.
I have to write it again as i just lost my all words due to error in network.and i lost my feelings too...😭
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I just lost my post due to error in network..😡
Now i have to write it again 😡
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Sibling bondings are always very special be it twin or normal..for the first time twin bonding is showed so beautifully onscreen after Amar-Dhara which were conjoint..So i am considering this bonding different from normal and conjoint/siamese twins.
You have penned down the twirling of emotions inside Anami of not getting chance to spend the childhood moments which could have been so memorable.Your poem took me to my old good days when i started to learn what is going on around me..

Thanks to RKC for taking the step to showcase this pain of losing the beauty of spending life purely..amd thanks to you for giving the words to express it so beautifully🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks for sharing this beautiful write up... left me in tears💔 keep posting👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: -MIMOSA-


Thank you so much for your appreciation Ammu! 😊

Your comment is so poignant. I was full of emotions after reading it.
We in our life, always yearn for something which we either have lost, or couldn't achieve. The quest is almost inseparable from our beings. What we forget is that, along with that quest, life has given us numerous reasons to smile, laugh and contentment. And this is the imperfection of our lives, which makes us move in the life, strive for its betterment and make the best of it.

This show provides us a perfect example of imperfection. It tells us that life is not just black and white, it is more of greys, all shades of grey. Nothing is flawless, nothing is perfect. And that is life.

Thank you once again for this heartfelt comment and appreciation. Glad I met you here. 🤗



Oh My Pleasure !, @MIMOSA . I have no clue as to how to address you ! 😛
No truer words have been said. That is exactly what life goes on to show you ! Yes - with time - we all come to realize that bad can come from good and so can good from bad. We just have to find a grey scale to balance those. Our judicial symbol of justice is not a blindfolded lady for no reason - It is to show us to listen out people blindly ; without being judgemental - and to listen out on a fair basis - and then decide. We never know - had Satrupa taken into wing both the kids - maybe they would've both been murdered ; maybe we wouldn't have gotten a strong woman like Anami is right now - maybe she would be soft and of the same thoughts like Vatsalya - not enough to tackle the shackles of Lal Mahal. If Anami had been taken into wing and Vatsalya given away - in a family like theirs Anami would have been restricted, and more so because of her gender - end up being even more softer and diplomatic like Vatsalya ; And at the end of the day 'Avdhoot' 'biasedly' preferred. We can't blame Satrupa for taking the easy way out. If given a chance - we all would. Satrupa wouldn't even have thought in the wildest of dreams for all of this to happen.

If Satrupa were truly cruel at heart or even biased based on the gender. She would not have cared about where Anami ended up. She could have been abandoned at an orphanage, any where on the streets. But she was left to a family, a beautiful , stronger and awesome family - growing up with reality, with unrestricted yet taught freedom and a strong character.

I had initially been a silent reader on the forum - and was glad to be so - b'coz I am honoured to have read some beautiful insights from people of different POVs. I know that many people are as of now very annoyed with Anami as well to not listen to Satrupa - and to trust Narottam blindly . She might have had caught 'dhongies' back in banaras - but those frauds are nowhere close to the people at Lal Mahal.

Every relative - is a layered ; multi dimensional being with complex emotions coursing through them unlike the frauds back in Banaras - who were petty and solely focused on tricking people on a superficial basis. Here everybody out there has got a deep rooted motive and for a reason too - we can't judge them b'coz we all know that in real life - if meted out with similar strings of fate - we would do the same - somewhere in the back of our minds. They have etcvhed out their plans of deception to perfection b'coz it is not just a means of living for them - it's their life ; the justice to their 'supposed' injustice. It's the sole purpose of their lives.

"Satrupa" - got swayed when she saw the 'supposed' genuine actions of our very own Pujan - who is been on this field and playing for a long time. Anami, might turn out to be a much better player - but she just got here. She still needs to learn who she is dealing with. She needs to test the waters - and the makers have to show us her immediate failures to show us how dark and murky it is inside the so called "Lal" mahal - enough to have sucked the life out of Sudha. Only then can they show her learning preparing - and moving out into the necessary backstories - like Satrupa - Baldev , Baldev-Sudha, Pujan-Dheeru-Business and other crucial relationships. She needs to be played around to learn from her mistakes - Because let's be fair - all of us see that stubborn, emotional teenager in Anami and relate to. We relate to her b'coz she is unlike those sacrificial, naive, immediate;y understanding and annoyingly forgiving leads out there. She is selfish, sharp, unforgiving, stubborn yet a small teen who at heart is an emotional being - and will accept love from anywhere and protect the few she cares about like a lion protecting it's cub !
A 'real' human !
Edited by ammu3 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautifully written! 👏 I felt for Anami in the episode ... her tears and frustration at having lost someone without even knowing him ... 'what could have been ...' She feels the loss so deeply, as she gets to know her brother more and more through his diary ... and realises more and more how much she missed out on through the actions of her mother ... not the rich and pampered life of the LM, but the love, the squabbles, the bickering, the teasing that siblings share. I was reminded of my own brother and our bond ... the sibling bond is very, very special.
The makers have to be applauded ... and the actors too ... for bringing out the beauty of the brother sister bond so beautifully ... when the characters shared just one scene together before Vatsalya's demise.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: -MIMOSA-


Edited.

And while writing, I was exactly recalling my childhood memories too.
My younger days spent with my sister. The poem reflects many of those memories.

Ruchi, you say so much in few lines...they hold depths of wisdom.

Thank you so much for always being an inspiration and a support...🤗

Ruchi, bahut kuch kenha tha, but couldn't find any words yesterday.
Childhood memories are invaluable. They are precious.
We remember them so fondly, and no matter how much we crave for them, we are not going to get them back. The carefree souls and innocence, which we left behind, as we grow up.
To be enveloped in our own world of happiness, with our partners in crime, our sibs, and plotting up new mischiefs every day. These memories never fail to bring smile on our faces, every time single time we remember, with a strong burst of nostalgia...

Koi lauta do mere beetey hue din...

Kash...this word lingers on, as the life goes by. And as you said so rightly, there is always a grief and regret in this word. And no matter how philosophical, intellectual or accomplished we become, it stays. And nothing can give us 'ek baar', which we so hope har baar. How beautifully have you put this into 2 simple sentences! 👏

Ruchi, you know how much I love reading your writings. You simply rob me off the words, and I am left speechless every time.
I am waiting eagerly for you to make a post here soon...please?



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Shabd main tumhare chura loon
Sawar loon unse meri bachpan ki yaadein
Suna doon jee bharke tumhe saare afsaane
Jee loon woh lamhe issi bahane ek baar phir

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