DiRa ss ~metanoia~ part 3 on page 3

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Ratan sa apko kuch chaiyeye
Datta hukum ap theek hain
Oh i m sorry datta hukum...
Everything she did for him her guardian angel her best friend and 6 months newly wedded wife diya ratan maan singh
He closed his eyes let the tears come out holding a glass of whisky 1st time he touched alcohol as they say it helps to fanish pain
He moved back to 6 months
He forced her to marriage just because his late father last wish
She was forced to do so to sace her own father respect but
She always wanted everything to be perfect she had given 12 years of her life just to protect her promise her words but ratan maan singh have so much of affectionabout his freedom and so immatured that right after 12 mins of there marriage he started behaving wierd as hell
He insulted her to such extent that she was broken already...he was fustrated because of tunts and comments about his marriage with diya who is 9 years elder then him he wanted to have relationship with ria as she was beutiful , smart , modern
And most of all SAME AGE but he FORGOT how to behave with a girl ...

Flashback 6 months before 10th day of diya and ratan marriage
Kesar mehal hall

I m sorry wo hume pata nahi tha ke ap aur ria bhar ja rahe hain
Dia said with apologising tone

Ratan : apko pata kya hota hai diya apne meri dress kharab kar di apsay shaadi karna meri sabsay badi galti hai ek kaam dhang say nahi kar paa rahin hain ap ... ab main samjha your jealous haina typical soap ki biwi jaisi ...but lemme tell u something main apko apni patni nahi maan sakta ap khudko dekho toh sahi ek thaal main lapte hue aur wahi old thinking jaisi wife kisi ko nahi chaiyey hogi apko mujhe thank u kehna chaiyey ki maine apsay shaadi ki agar main nhi hota toh ap kahaan jaati jab say mere life main aai hain baas chipak hi gaai hain kahaan wo jhooti engagement say real shaadi hogai ...ap baas mujhe akela chodd kyun nhi deti diya 😡 (he shouted on her in front of whole family and riya was also present )

Diya was numb again she was so shocked
She gave him 12 years jyst bcz his father meant alot to her
She blindly trusted him but he didn't
And again he accused her for god sake marrige she was forced all momentscome in front of her why everyone come and shout at her taunt but now thats enuf
Feeling of metanoia was takeing toll over her now its enuf of being punching bag she was independent before
But now she dont need anyone or have responsibility now she too will give up ...just bcz she is 30 that doesnt mean she lost her self confidence in these 12 years

Diya : pheli baat humne ap ko force nahi kia tha mr ratan maan singh sirf hum apke bachpane ki itne din say seh rahe hain iska matlb yeh nahi ki hume bolna nahi ata humne apko apna dost samjh apne life ke 12 saal diyehain khudki life ka sabsay IMPORTENT time ape WASTE kia hain pheli baar hume apne faisle par souchne pe majboor hona pad raha hai jo humne apke papa ko dia tha ...ap yeh keh rahe the ki hum apki new gf ria say jealousy hain ...hum jaise hain waise hi accha hain aur mind my words ainda say hume kisi ke bhi I MEAN IT KISI KE BHI sayj compare mat kariyega hum apke bachpane ko bardash kar rahe the kyunki ap humare dost the but ap toh humari insaaniyat ke bhi layak nahi hai ...Hum isliye baki ladkiyo jaise nahi kyinki sirf 18 ke the hum jab apki zimmedari say bandh gaye the ...humne bhi samne dekhe the ek Normal life ke par nahi reh paaye sucha ki apki life say chale jaane ke baad hum better life main rahenge but abhay sa ne bhi koi kasar nahi choddi unhone bhi hume dokha dia kyunki humne apko apni 1st priority samjha par ab nahi ...hume nahi banna apka punching bag ab ...aur rahi baat shaadi ki toh 6 mahine say pehle hum apko free nahi kar sakte 6 mahine tak hum apko rent dete rehenge aur chinta mat kariye hum kal say hi job pe jaa rahe hain taki apke samne na aa sake apko jahaan janaa hai ap jaa sakte hain apko apki freedom bhout pyaari haina mr ratan singh to aj say na ap humare pati hain na hi dost ...ek stranger hain aap ...(break of silence ) aur ek baat 10 din main apki so called freedom ka yeh haal hai jab ap 21 saal ke hain toh souchiye hum 18 ke the jab humne 12 saal ka wachan dia tha ...
She rushed out the hall for fresh air she needed
After her burst out

Ratan was stunned
She called him mr ratan not datta hukum aur ratan sa no more friendship how could he accused her for getting into this marriegeshe was to forced to take such step how can he become this selfish ...he is just being a jerk ...he is such a bloody jerk he lost his best friend ...pheredaar
Maine isa kaise karliye wo jinhone apni jaan humesha dav pe laga kar meri jaan ki safety sabsay pehle rakhi apne ghar ...fruends FREEDOM finance sab chodke rahin aur maine

Yash: humne kabhi nahi soucha tha datta hukum ap isa karenge...yaad kariye humne kah tha humari bestie ki mat hurt kariye ga ...apka bachpana ek hadd paar kar chuka hain ...ainda say meri best friend ke aas paas bhi mat aiyega ...aur agar wo nahi hoti toh aaj ap nahi hote datta hukum wo mout ke muh say abhi bhaar aain thi apke liye pr ab



Hii guys its shanz here i m from nauc forum and i loveit but i dont know when i started liking rlhn ...bcz of diya and not same typical drama its something new and pratical but todays episode made me so angry ...so i have written this ss i hope u like it plz do comment and like one more thing agar bura laga toh chappal and joote mar dena but no eggs i m pire veggie u know😛


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-Nags- thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Superb writing, suitable for current situation.
Please do continue.
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Well written..Apt for the current track..
Also, Welcome to the forum😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank u so much... And yaa I m gonna update it today

Originally posted by: -Nags-

Superb writing, suitable for current situation.

Please do continue.

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Thanks alot 😳
I m gonna update it today and trust me bhout as a be a late jhatka hai update main 😉

Originally posted by: pranurosid

Well written..Apt for the current track..

Also, Welcome to the forum😊

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks buddy😳 I hope next update will satisfy your expectations
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Amazing!! truly great!! Can't wait to read the next update...
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Very nicely written!
Good story, hope you continue soon :)
Welcome to the forum!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Flashback
Diya was setting on bench where her most precious memories with baapjisa was spent he was like god father to her
She cried ...she finally cried her heart out after 12 harsh years of her life ...she screemed out of pain not physical but emotional...she gave up now she dont need anyone ...her parents forced her to marry bcz was she burdens on them
And this in laws of her insult her daily just becz she is elder then him ...the husband who dress up like prince to meet his girlfriend ...she was not jealous ...she was alone ...all alone
She felt wight on her shoulder she looked towards the direction it was baapji saa
Diya : baapjisa ap ...hume maaf kardena aaj hum haar gaye hume aur himmat nahi hai baapji sa ...hum kaabil hi nahi the apki zimmedari lene ke liye humne shyaad kuch kami thi isliye hume koi pasand nahi karta ...datta hukum bhi nahi
(She cried )

MS : areyy diya baisa hume pata hai apne kitna kuch sahaa hai par hum jaante hain ki ap kitni masoom thi jab humne apko zimmedari dedi hume maaf kar dijiye (he joint his hand)
Diya : nahi isa mat kahiyey ap ...apki wajh say hum itne strong ban paaye hain aur hume naaz hai ki hum apke kaam aye

MS: hum apsay kuch kehne aaye hain ...ap bhale hi abhi 30 ki hogai hongi par ap ab bhi khoobsurat aur jawan hai ...umar humari taqt nahi batati diya baisa ap abh bhi strong hain ...baas apko sabko unke hi andaaz main samjhana hoga

Diya : wo kaise

MS: apko badalna hoga diya baisa aur sabko samjhana hoga
Apko yaad haina apne kya kaha tha ander ki ap job karengi ap rent pay karengi apka yeh roop hi sahi hai diya baisa kuch samay ke liye hi sahi par apko badalna hoga apke paas 6 mahine hain diya baisa dikhane ke liye ki apko kisi ki zaroorat nahi hai apne 12 saal kaser mahal aur hotel ko sambhala hai apko appointment lene ke liye sab marr rahe honge diya...hum chahte hain ki ap change hojaaye ek metanoia laaiye apne ander jiska matlb badlaaf hain ...aur yaad rahein ap strong aur beautiful hain aur hum apke sath hain .
Sayinh this last line he vanished in air

Diya was stunned she open up her eyes with new confidence she got ...she thanked her baapjisa for guiding her so well

Yash : diyaa baisa ...(he was looking stressed )
Diya : haan yash banna
Yash :hum kitna darr gaye the ap yahaan hai chaliye kuch khane aur chinta mat kariye ratan sa
He was cut off by diya
Diya : yash banna ap unke liye mat souchiye hum theek hain aur abhi best hain par hume apki maddad chaiyey
Yash : boliye na diya baisa

Diya :pehli baat ab diya baisa bolna band kariye hum apki bestie hain thakrani sa nahi ...aur hume shopping jaana hai please chaliye naa
(She asked cutely)
Yash was so stocked to fund this new diya
Yash :huh ji diya bai...i mean diyu yeh theek hain na ??
Diya :perfectab chaliye jaldi
They left for mall
Ratan was restless he was not able to focus on food or riyas so called gossips
Ratan mono : aa bhagwan itna bolti hain ab black aur green dress ke upper itna make up koun lagata hai but mujhe toh ise hi ladkiya pasand thi ab kya hogaya ...he closed his diyaa with saree and minimal make up



Precap
Itna der lagta hai shopping pe ap phone kyjn nahi uthaya
Pehli baat ap pati nahi hai humare ki hum apko baataye




Yeh kya pehna hai apna diya ...abhi change kariye

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Wow, superb.👍🏼
Finally confident Diya is back on track.

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