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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hello Guys, 😊
Here I am with another chapter
I haven't proof read it so please ignore any mistakes


Chapter 8

A while after Abhay's departure, Ratan entered the room with ointment and crepe bandage for Diya's leg. He had left her alone for sometime giving her time for herself. But when he entered the room he found Diya with a company file in her hand, apparently studying some aspects about a client for a meeting the next day.

'Mr. India, what the hell is this?', Ratan asked faking anger. Aapko aaram karna chahiye aur aap hai ki ye file liye baithi hai?', he said and snatched the file from her hand.

'Daata hukum.. bas do minute... us client ke company profile ke bare me padh rahe hai...file dijiye na...', Diya said trying to reach for the file as Ratan waved the file in front of her.

'Nahi, kuch do minute nahi Diya', Ratan said and kept the file away from her. 'Aap abhi chupchap yaha baithengi, aur mujhe aapke pair par ointment and bandage lagane dengi jaisa Doctor ne mujhe kaha hai', he said and sat in front of her near her left leg. She made a face and looked away from him. Ratan smiled at how cute she looked when she sulked.

Ratan took the ointment on his fingers and forwarded his hand for her foot when suddenly she held his hand and stopped him.

'Daata hukum, ye kya kar rahe hai? Iski jarurat nahi hai..', Diya said a bit awkward about him touching her foot.

'Ohh come on Diya! Hum best friends hai, humare bich ye formality kaha se aa gayi?', Ratan said.

'Nahi daata hukum hum kar lenge... Aap kyu..', Diya tried to say but Ratan interrupted.

'Mr. India.. agar humare indian sanskaron ke point of view se bhi dekha jaye, to aap mujhse badi hai, isliye agar main aapke pair chhu bhi lo to koi problem nahi hai.. right!', Ratan said smiling at her. She smiled in response. 'To ab aap shanti se baithiye aur mujhe ye ointment lagane dijiye', Ratan said. She nodded at him and left his hand.

Ratan forwarded his hand towards her sprained left foot and started to apply the ointment gently. As soon as his fingers touched her foot, Diya felt a shiver run down her spine. Her body seemed to have come alive and she felt a sensitivity that she had not felt in years. Ratan seemed to notice her tremor because he stopped for a moment. He didn't want to make her uncomfortable so he started to talk.

'Vaise Mr. India, aapko nahi lagta ki aap thodi moti ho gayi hai?', Ratan teased her. She looked at him with a jaw- dropping expression and Ratan knew his job was done. Mission accomplished he thought with a mischievous smile.

'Moti?? Aur hum?', Diya asked unbelievably and Ratan took advantage of her distraction to continue applying ointment on her sprained ankle and massage it gently. 'Aap kehna kya chahte hai daata hukum??', she asked.

'Haan dekhiye na... aapka ye pair swell ho gaya hai, par pata bhi nahi chal raha ki swell hua hai', Ratan said teasing her and continued the gentle massage of her ankle. 'Dekhiye na, aapko koi difference lag raha hai kya aapke right aur left pair me?', he asked.

'Haan daata hukum, hume difference dikh raha hai', she replied and grabbing the pillow beside her started hitting Ratan with it.

'Ouch... aahh...', he cried as she continued hittim him.

'Hum mote lagte hai aapko?', she complained childishly.

'Ow... Oww.. okay okay main mazak kar raha tha Mr. India... aap bilkul bhi moti nahi hai', he said and she stopped hitting him with the pillow. He now took the bandage in his hand. In fact aap to bohot beautiful hai', Ratan said sincerely looking at her. Diya looked up at him and their eyes locked. Ratan started rolling the crepe bandage around her ankle.

'Ho gaya', Ratan said after a few moments and broke the eyelock. Diya looked down at her ankle which was now completely bandaged and Ratan was clipping the hook in it. 'Bandh gaya aapka bandage... ab kaisa lag raha hai?' he asked her.

'Better', she replied dazedly, still pondering over the fact that he did everything without letting her feel awkward or intimidated. He actually did everything understanding her comfort zone.

'Pair dukh to nahi raha na?' he asked sincerely and she shook her head.

'Thanks daata hukum', she said gratefully.

'Mr. India dosti me no sorry, no thank you', he said smiling at her and she smiled back.


'Diya baai sa, Daata hukum', just then a voice called to both of them from the door of the room. 'Hum andar aa sakte hai?'

'Sakshi baai sa, aaiye na', Ratan said with a smile.

'Kaisi hai ab aap Diya baai sa?', Sakshi asked smiling kindly at her.

'Hum thik hai', Diya replied with a smile. Diya had always liked Sakshi. Though everybody in the Kesar Mahal had always been on the doubt radar of Diya, she never felt that Sakshi could do any plotting. She is too innocent and childish to have done that.

'Wo ma sa ne humse kaha ki aaj aapko aaram ki jarurat hogi, isliye hun aapka aur daata hukum ka khana yahi le aaye', Sakshi said. 'Jhumki', she called Jhumki who brought a tray with two plates of dinner on it.

Thank you Sakshi baai sa', Diya said with a smile.

'You're welcome', she replied with an enthusiastic smile. 'Ab hum chalte hai. Daata hukum, aap inhe acche se khana khila dijiye', she said teasingly to Ratan. He smiled back at her and she left.

And as Sakshi said Ratan made sure that Diya ate well as they had their dinner together. After dinner Ratan gave Diya her medicines and then made her lie down. He sat beside her talking on random topics till she fell asleep. He then pulled the comforter over her carefully and left the room. As she was sleeping on his bed he was gonna sleep in the balcony garden on her bed. Ratan lied down on the bed and went on ride name Diya thoughts. He knew she might be upset about what she had to do with Abhay, and he wanted to take care of her. He wanted to lessen her stress, wanted to make her feel special. Suddenly an idea struck him and his face lit up with a smile. He set the alarm for 5 AM in the morning as he knew Mr. India generally wakes up at 6.30 or sooner, and if he wanted to make his idea successful, he will have to get up before her. With a determination in his mind Ratan closed his eyes and fell asleep.


Next morning at 5 AM, Ratan's mobile vibrated with the alarm and he got up immediately. Taking care that he doesn't disturb Diya's sleep, he quickly got freshened up and noiselessly left the room. He entered the kitchen with a determination in his mind. He wanted to make a healthy breakfast for his Mr. India. When he was in London at the hostel, he used to make noodles, pasta, omelettes etc. But he knew that making an Indian breakfast was gonna be real challenge and he didn't have much time. So, for a couple of minutes he pondered over what to make and finally decided on oats upma, hot haldi and kesar milk with some crispy and spicy bikaneri bhujia to taste. He opened YouTube on his phone and quickly searched for the recipe of oats upma. As the first step he put a kadhai on the cooktop. Just then Jhumki and Chamki entered the kitchen and became shocked to see Ratan there.

'Daata hukum aap? Aap itni subah kitchen me kya kar rahe hai?', Jhumki asked surprised.

'Breakfast bana raha hu', he replied cheerfully.

'Par aap nashta kyu bana rahe hai? Hum hai na iske liye' Chamki said to him.

'Haan daata hukum, aap.. aap hume bataiye na aapko kya khana hai hum bana denge... aap kyu..?', Jhumki said but Ratan didn't let her finish.

'Shhh... Khamosh khadi rahiye', he ordered both of them. 'Breakfast main hi banaunga, aap dono bas mujhe jo jo chahiye wo dete jaiye okay', he ordered them and they nodded. Ratan smiled at them. 'Good. To phir Jhumki jara oats nikal kar dena', Ratan said and started to watch the recipe video.

About three quarters of an hour later, Ratan had successfully prepared oats upma and the kesar haldi milk on his own. He tasted the upma and was happy to know that it tasted good. He then served the upma hot in a bowl which he put in a tray, with a glass of milk, another bowl of Bikaneri bhujia and some freshly cut apples and strawberries. He held the tray in his hands and smiled with satisfaction at his work.

Here in the bedroom, Diya woke up with a start because of a bad dream. After a couple of minutes of heavy breathing and adjusting eyes with the light, she realized that she was in Ratan's bed. With that realization, she looked around for any sign of him. She got up from the bed and walked slowly towards the balcony garden to look for him. But she didn't find him there. Now she got a bit restless.

'Daata hukum', she called out hoping that he would answer. But he didn't, so came back inside the room and went to check the bathroom. 'Daata hukum kaha hai aap?', she asked again.

She opened the bathroom door, but it was empty. Now she felt really worried. She suspected if he went out without telling her again. Phir se daata hukum hume bataye bina bahar to nahi chale gaye? She thought.

'Daata hukum', she called out again.

'Good Morning Mr. India', Ratan replied entering the room with the tray of breakfast.



Thank you for reading guys

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PS: Sakshi is one of my favourite character in the show after Diya, Ratan and Yash... So I included her in this chapter 😊

Edited by luvzindagi - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#82
Love the both parts 7 and 8
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Posted: 7 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: luvzindagi

Yes... Definitely temporary exit, because Abhay sa is gonna play a very different and important role in my story 😊
I am glad you spotted the difference because I was worried if it will seem like I copied the scene, which practically I almost did 😛😳... But I wanted to show Abhay sa a bit more angry and possessive than he was in the show... Was I successful in it?
Thank you so much 😳
And honestly I wait for your comment 😊
I will try to update soon


Ofcourse you were successful in it, he seemed like a super angry lover, turning into a psychotic one.
For chapter 14, a very refreshing update! Its so nice to see the bond between ratan and diya and details analysis of how well he knows her. One thing I have always felt is that diya can be herself when she is with ratan, nobody else has seen that side of diya which ratan has witnessed already, they are perfect partners.
Here too you have shown so many glimpses of their relationship, fake fights, flirting, laughing, anger, friendship, everything. The way he left her alone to giver her some personal space, then he took care of her foot and everything from making her comfortable to making her breakfast was very sweet.
Will be waiting for the next one!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#84
omg wow nikki another beautiful update
i just love it to the core of my heart
this ratan sa nah iam just falling deep for this guy diya is lucky to have him
glad to see diyas feelings are also getting evoked
wanna see their nok jok filled life
ratan sa is just omg he just made her comfortable deviating the topic
well my magician writer thanks alot for writing this beautiful story and please update soon okkey because iam totally addicted to this already 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
#85

Hello people,

Firstly I am so sorry that I am super duper late with this update

Because of a very important exam coming in the month of march I don't get much time for writing/// And I want to apologize in advance for the lateness of the coming updates

But I am very grateful for all your support and lovely comments... Thank you so much for your love guys 😊

Here is the next update ------>



Precap:


'Daata hukum', she called out again.

'Good Morning Mr. India', Ratan replied entering the room with the tray of breakfast.


Chapter 9


'Daata hukum aap kaha chale gaye the?', Diya asked as soon as she saw him.

'Ohho Diya fir se wahi! Maine aapko itne acche se, itne pyaar se good morning wish kiya, kam se kam uska jawaab to de dijiye', Ratan complained like a child and Diya chuckled.

'Good Morning daata hukum', She replied stressing extra sweetly on good morning and he grinned at her.

'That's better', Ratan said and put the breakfast tray on the side table.

'Ab hum jaan sakte hai ki aap kaha gaye the, wo bhi hume bina bataye?', Diya asked again.

'Kahi nahi main to bas aapke liye breakfast bana... I mean lane gaya tha', Ratan said immediately trying to rectify the slip. Diya raised an eyebrow in question at him, but he went towards her, held her hand and lead her towards the bed.

'Ab aap jyada sochiye mat, aaram se yaha baithiye aur nashta kijiye', he said making her sit comfortably on the bed and put the breakfast tray in front of her. Diya just smiled at him. She was about to take the spoon in her hand, but Ratan stopped her.

'Aha.. Aaj main aapko khilaunga', Ratan said taking a spoonful of upma and held it in front of her mouth. She ate it obediently with a smile. Ratan looked at her expectantly.

'Kaisa laga?', he asked with excitement.

'Bohot accha hai', she replied with a smile.

'Really?', Ratan asked again happy knowing that she liked it.

'Kya baat hai daata hukum? Aap to aise puch rahe hai jaise ye upma aapne banaya ho!', Diya asked raising an eyebrow at him.

'Nahi... nahi.. umm main kyu banaunga? Jhumki ne banaya.. Wo actually maine banvaya hai', Ratan replied trying to do some damage control. 'Ab aap aaram se khaiye', he said giving her the spoon. 'Aur mujhe bataiye ki ab aapa pair kaisa hai?'

'Ab pehle se behtar hai, chalte waqt jyada dard nahi hai', she replied realizing that she didn't feel much pain while she was searching for him in the room.

'Great, bas 2-3 baar aur us ointment se massage, aur aap daudne bhi lagengi', he said with a grin. She chuckled at that.

Ratan made her finish her breakfast and gave her the morning medicines. Diya felt surprised at seeing his responsible side and also a bit overwhelmed with his care.

After taking medicines, she reminded him of that day's meeting with the client. He assured her that he knew about the meeting. He then asked her to have bath and get ready first, he will get ready after her.


Half an hour later, Diya went down and was waiting for Ratan to get ready and come down, so that they can both go together for the meeting. Just then Yash came there to meet her.

'Good morning baai sa hukum', Yash banna said to her with a smile.

'Good morning Yash banna', she replied with the same smile.

'Ab kaisi hai aap?', he asked.

'Hum bilkul thik', she replied.

'Baai sa hukum hum aap se kuch jaruri baat karna chahte hai, us nurse ke bare me', Yash said dropping his voice, so that no one could hear him. Diya looked around if anyone was around them or watching them, when she was sure that no one was around she looked at Yash.

'Kahiye Yash banna, us nurse ne kuch bataya?', she asked with anticipation.

'Nahi. Yahi to hum batana chahte hai aapko, ki kal subah se na usne kuch bataya hai, aur na hi usse koi milne aaya hai... wo to muh hi nahi khol rahi hai', Yash said with irritation.

'Koshish karte rahiye Yash banna, kyunki yahi ek jariya hai humare pass hamalavar tak pohochne ka...', Diya said with a patience. 'Agar aaj rat tak wo kuch nahi boli, to humare pass ek plan hai... kal hum wo istemal karenge... Par jaha tak ho sake koshish kijiye ki wo khud hi muh khol de', she said with a meaningful look. 'Aur agar aisa nahi hua, to hum aapko aur daata hukum ko lal subah plan samjha denge', she said determinedly. Yash nodded at her with a meaningful smile and left from there.

She looked at her watch and sighed. Ye daata hukum kar kya rahe hai, ab tak nahi aaye! Koi baat nahi tab tak hum pani pi kar aate hai, she thought and went towards the kitchen. But when she neared the kitchen, she heard the voices of Jhumki and Chamki.

'Pata nahi daata hukum ko ho kya gaya tha aaj? Aaj unko achanak nashta banane ki kya sujhi?', Jhumki said with surprise. Diya was also surprised to hear that.

'Haan, hume bhi samajh nahi aa raha... aur wo bhi itne utsah se bana rahe the', Chamki exclaimed. Diya couldn't understand what to feel. Daata hukum himself made breakfast! And that too for her!!? She couldn't help but feel happy for it.

'Wo jarur Diya baai sa ke liye bana rahe honge, vakayi bohot pyaar karte hai wo unse', Jhumki said blushing.

'Aap itne yaqeen se kaise keh sakti hai ki wo unhone Diya baai sa ke liye hi banaya tha, khud ke liye bhi to bana sakte hai?', Chamki asked.

'Haan, par wo itne pyaar se nashta bana rahe the, aur fir tray bhi unhone khud sajaya, to hume lagta hai ki wo unhone..', Jhumki was saying but she couldn't complete her sentence as Diya entered the kitchen.

'Khamba Ghani baai sa hukum', Jhumki and Chamki said in unison.

'Kya kaha aapne Jhumki, daata hukum ne aaj nashta banaya?', Diya asked her.

'Umm wo.. hum.. nahi..', Jhumki couldn't reply due to fear.

'Sach sach bataiye?', Diya asked her sternly.

'Ji.. ji baai sa hukum... humne to unhe mana bhi kiya tha, kaha ki hum bana denge... par.. par wo mane hi nahi', Jhumki said nervously.

'Haan baai sa hukum... unhone humse kaha ki jo jo cheezein unhe chahiye wo lakar de, aur yaha chup chap khadi rahe.. to... to humne vaisa hi kiya, aur nashta unhone khud banaya', Chamki replied.

'Thik hai', Diya said. She then took a glass of water and drank it in a go. After that she walked out of the kitchen towards the hall. Par kyu? Kyu banaya daata hukum ne nashta humare liye? Hum to sirf pyaar ka natak kar rahe hai... Fir unhe humare liye ye sab karne ki kya jarurat hai?? Kyu hume itna special feel karwa rahe hai wo? She thought and sighed. Shayad hum kuch jyada hi soch rahe hai.. Wo ye sab dosti ke nate bhi to kar sakte hai na.. aakhir hum unki best friend jo hai, she smiled at the thought. Deep in thought she was walking without really looking ahead, and she hit something solid in front of her. She lost her balance and was about to fall. She closed her eyes in anticipation of the fall, but the fall never came. Instead she felt a strong pair of arms holding her, stopping her from falling down. She opened her eyes and found herself in Ratan's arms.

'Sambhal ke Mr. India, dhyan kaha hai aapka?', Ratan asked her and straightened her. 'Aap thik hai na?', he asked her again and she just nodded.

'Hum aapka hi wait kar rahe the daata hukum... kaha reh gaye the aap?', she said.

'Sorry sorry... I know main thodasa late hu', he apologized holding an ear and she chuckled at his cuteness. 'Ab chalein?', he asked and she nodded.


Before the meeting Diya and Priya kunwar rani sa briefed Ratan about the client and his company. They attended the meeting and Diya helped Ratan in whispered conversation to understand and handle the deal properly. Although he was an MBA graduate from London, this was his first time experience of a practical deal, and he was thankful to Diya for her help. Thank you so much Mr. India, pata nahi aap nahi hoti to mera kya hota! He mentally thanked her and felt even more lucky to have her in his life no matter whether as a friend or as love.

After the meeting Diya went to her cabin in the hotel to work. While going through some important documents, she needed an old file for reference. She remembered that the file was kept in the upper cupboard. She looked up towards the cupboard and knew that she won't be able to get reach there. So she took a stool, placed it in front of the cupboard and stood on in. Just when she opened the cupboard door, Ratan entered her cabin and was shocked to see her standing on the footstool.

'What the hell..! Mr. India ye kya kar rahi hai aap?', Ratan asked causing her to look down.

'Ek file dhoond rahe hai daata hukum', she replied casually and turned her attention back to the cupboard.

Haan par aapke pair me chot lagi hai na Diya, kya jarurat thi aapko upar chadhne ki? Kisi ko bula leti... chaliye ab niche utariye', he scolded her with concern.

'Bas 1 minute daata hukum', she said searching for the right file.

'Mr. India aap..! Fine mat suniye meri baat, kar lijiye apni manmani', he said sarcastically and remained silent.

Diya kept searching for the file and while searching she shifted her leg to her left. This caused the footstool to lose balance and she was falling down.

'Aahh', she cried startled due to the sudden movement and the prospect of falling. But the fall never occured and she landed smoothly in Ratan's arms. She looked at him guiltily.

'Dekha apni manmani ka result!', Ratan said smiling sarcastically at her. 'Mujhe hamesha kuch na kuch batati rehti hai, kabhi kabhi meri baat bhi sun liya kijiye', he said and carried her towards the couch in her cabin. She just kept looking at him and his care for her.

'Thanks Ratan sa', she thanked him sincerely and he looked at her. It felt good to have her secure in his arms.

'Ek baat kahu Mr. India', he asked.

'Kya?', she asked back.

'Aap jab mujhe Ratan sa kehti hai na, to bohot accha lagta hai', he said with a smile. 'Ek apnapan sa mehsoos hota hai', he said and she returned the smile.

'Warna daata hukum se to aisa lagta hai jaise humare bich koi deewar khadi ho gayi ho', Ratan said with honesty and put her down on the couch. He turned around to go and get some water for her, but she held his hand. He looked at her and raised an eyebrow.

'Ab hum ek baat kahe Ratan sa?', she asked.

'Sure', he replied with a smile. She indicated towards his biceps and showed him that they were quite strong silently. He smiled at that.

'Aap jitne dikhte nahi hai na, usse jyada strong hai. Warna aap hume itni aasani se catch nahi kar lete', she praised him.

'Accha? Matlab aap kehna chahti hai ki aap moti hai!', he asked mischievously and smirked. Diya's mouth opened in an 'O' as she realized what he said.

'Daata hukum aap...' she held a hand to hit him but he ran out of the cabin laughing. She shook her head at his antics. Just then he peeped into the cabin and looked at her.

'Diya', he called her and she looked at him. 'Ratan sa... Daata hukum nahi', he told her with a smile and left from there. Diya couldn't help but smile fondly at her Ratan sa.



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Edited by luvzindagi - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#86
Love love love..❤️
I could say only that after this update... Awesome writing dear👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
#87
Nikki
Wow!
Like seriously wow!!
This update has such a good feel to it man, so many happy and fun loving moments filled in it!
That cute convo in the end and diya's increasing fondness towards ratan is so visible here, its like she is getting his full attention and she is absolutely loving it, not exactly expressing it but she is feeling overwhelmed as you mentioned in the start.
I am so happy that inspite of the delay in the update you've maintained the character and pace of the story, which is the most important thing before story.
I can totally imagine our DiRa in this!
Keep it up 👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
#88
Please please please post the next chapter asap its so awesome!!!!! I love this fan fiction so much!!! Your writing is amazing and so vivid that one can literally imagine it happening
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Your story reminded me of old days. Wah kya din the
Very well written and beautiful. What I mostly liked DiRa's friendship and their bond.
Eagerly waiting for your next update.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#90
U took so much time to update this ff!😭 i was waiting for this since so much time!! 😃
I loved this update!! Her Ratan sa

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