DiRa SS...Chapter 9 page 15 updated

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Posted: 7 years ago
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I really like your story and there's so much mystery going on. Like what happened to Diya? And how is the relationship between Dira? Please do continue- I'm so intrigued to find out more. 😊

P.S. The forum is finally more active now. Hopefully, from next week onwards it will be even more active.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome write up..Plzz continue dear
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Awesome one.. do continue..waiting for the next update
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Hey awesome
Yaar plz more
Be pateint more peeps will join forum nd comment
After 17 th coz of tvp
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Posted: 7 years ago
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its awesome.. welocme to the forum...
cant wait to read your ss..😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: luvzindagi

Hey everyone, 😊

I am Niki. I have been a silent reader on this forum till now and had been waiting for the forum to get more active. But I guess it will need some more time.
But I have become a big fan of DiRa and completely loving their chemistry right now, and they are always on my mind. 😳 So I decided to write an SS on them..
I am posting a kind of promo for now, for your opinions and response...
I might not be very regular on updating it because of my schedule, but please leave your comments and let me know if I should continue...



Promo

Ratan felt like his world is shattering in front of his eyes, like an unseen hand is choking him and robbing his breath away, like his life is slipping from his hands as he saw the limp form of his Mr. India on the bed of ICU. The IV drip, the bandages on her head, leg, scratches on her hands, and the oxygen mask on her mouth were giving him a torture he hadn't experienced ever in his life till now. Each beep of the heart rate monitor was like a horrid sound for him.

The doctor's words were ringing in his hears like horrifying warning. 'Dekhiye khoon kafi beh chuka hai. Ye to accha hua aap unhe jald se jald yaha le aaye, agar thodisi bhi aur der hoti to shayad wo...' He remembered thundering at the doctor, 'WHAT DO YOU MEAN SHAYAD WO???? WO.. wo thik to hai na doctor?'. 'Dekhiye main aapse sach kahunga, unki condition critical hai. Agar agle 24 ghanton me unhe hosh nahi aaya, to ho sakta hai wo coma me chali jaye', the doctor had said.

'NO. Kuch nahi hoga unhe. She is the strongest, she is a warrior, unhe kuch nahi ho sakta. Wo mujhe akela chhod kar nahi jaa sakti... Nahi ja sakti. Aap ko hosh me aana hi hoga Diya', he mentally said to himself, got up and with a determination entered the ICU.


Thanks for reading 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Lovely story...
Nicely presented 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice start...
Welcome to forum 😛😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Author's Note

Thank you everyone for your comments, support and love...😳
I wish this support will increase over time

One important thing that I wanted to say is that in this SS, I will be mainly focusing on the relationship Diya and Ratan shares and the progress, change in their relationship...
May be because of that, in this SS, the enemy track can get sidelined and I might do the mistake of ignoring that track... If that happens I am apologizing in advance... I haven't really thought of how I will incorporate the enemy catching track in this, but I will try to do it...

Hope you will still like to read the story 😊
Thanks for reading

The part 1 is in the post below: 😊

Edited by luvzindagi - 7 years ago

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